10 lines
u spit first
no feed
no hate
no dr
deadline 2 hours
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10 lines
u spit first
no feed
no hate
no dr
deadline 2 hours
You a middleweight im just a rookie, Im the cookie monsta' in this battle don't make me take yo' cookie, Middleburg Florida neva' hearda' yo' city, im from miami where everything seems pretty, palm trees blue skies treat to ya eyes but what a disguise,stubby im a rookie and you made me go first, keep akkin' rude and you gone end up in a hearse,just ran outta shit to say, don't really know ya' and don't curr,it was 7:30 when i wrote this so post yo shit cuz i aint going nowurr
lol only thing good in that man was your closer lol lmao, anyways im checkin in
This guy posted askin for his first battle, I told him i would do it
Soon as he responded, he seen his loss, shit he already knew it
He says he's lookin forward to makin himself an album, thats funny
But his bitch ass dont even got a job, damn an album cost money
This guy thinks he's ballin in Miami, cause he is chillin with the 305
Your whole entire verse was wack man i didnt even see no strive
He has been rappin since the age of 11, and he wants to rap solo
He is 17 now, and him and his mom still fuckin play marco polo
Well look at the the words man, my ass is already on line ten
You loss this one, i bet if i asked to battle you again you would decline then
not my best but good enough
don't know you cuz u aint got much info on ya profile so i didnt wanna say dumnb shit and front, so w/e dawg u said no hate and u the first one hatin'
bigc - aight man....i can tell ur new at this....so first off....dont use that structure...try sumtin like this...
line 1 is right here...
line 2 is right here...
Get it?....its alot easierto read and more elvated of a structure....and dont talk about urself in a battle....u need to go at him....use meta's and personals....cause in the battle you didnt have anything good...just elevate man and keep battling....
STUBBY - okay u got this b/c u had somewhat punches....very weak though....plays marco polo with his mom....come on man seriously....but yeah didnt need much so u easily took this...u took this in ery category....
Vote - STUBBY
Please go drop an honest vote on this battle....thanks...
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=135447
one sided
opener:stubby....wtf was c talkin bout..nobody care about the cookie monster
closer:stubby...wtf was big talkin bout again
punches: easily....my man had nothin good in his verse...
flow:stubby....c had a horrible structure so it didnt work for em...
vote:stubby...all around better verse...from start to finish he had this...
thanks for the votes guys, uppin 1 on this peice..
uppin 2 on this can we get some votes please.......
ok one sided
bigc
umm work on that structure your flow was because of it
i agree with L.I take his advice
personals win battles alot
there may not have been much on his profile
but use some creativity diss on his crew,name,tiltle etc
dont talk about yourself in battles the point is to diss your opponent
make him hurt
anyway elavate alot
stubby
i have seen you do better and i have seen you do worse
but you came decent
you had the better verse,flow,punches,personals etc
my only complaint is the marco polo line
vote/stubby
for better overall verse
now return the favor and hit my battles up
uppin 3 on this.........votes please..................
This was one sided...
Stubby man, you're elevating. Seriously, you are. You had some punches there, kinda average, but still more than enough to merk the other dude. Flow was aight, so was the structure.
The other dude, man, what the fuck was that? First of all, never use that square structure you dummy, and if you want to, put // between rhymes. Anyhoo, you had no punches, no personals, nothing.
Elevate.
V/Stubby, overall, he had a much better verse.
I was gona say this before I poll-voted, but meh...
Return the favor here:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=134531
Pz
uppin 4 on this can we get some vote please...........
ayo js uppin this shit for stubby so he can get this shit closed cuz its basically over
lol he should have been dq'd for being so terrible
uppin 5 on this come on this is my last one..................just leave links i will return the favor
aghit i didint realy feel ya dus versus but herr da low dwon
Stubby: He had 1 o 2 good punches
U NEED TO WORK ON YOUR STRUCTURE
now u had wit while creating word play
bigC: now u remind me of myself when i came to rb tinkin i was bad ass in text but then i saw when i recorded my music instead of typing it sounded better
youre punches missed completely u be throwin blows and none hit
youre structure is alright could hav inprovemint
u need to put some word play in thier
and make your lyrix whitty next time dat give u the edge
Vote: Stubby
This was basicly 1 by experience big work on yo lyrix freestyle mo often dat how u get betta u fell me