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No crew votes
No hate votes
No bullshit
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10 Lines
No dickriding
No crew votes
No hate votes
No bullshit
Due 20 minutes after checkin...
Ill check in after you...goodluck peace...
Checkin In................................................ .
Check.........
Ya weak texts can be beaten by filler like the Light’s OUT game…
You’re an embarrassment to RB…
…………………………..So they decided to white out ya name…
Pull out ya rap book, its all dusty, might wanna give it a rinse…
Ya rhymes are so old…
…………They were used back when Burger King was prince…
Cut the meta’s and let’s goes to personals for a switch…
Ya crew name fits you perfectly…
………..…Cause your always out of dopeness bitch…
I’m teaching the basics even though schools don’t start til September…
First off quit reppin a crew…
………………………… When you aint even a member…
Elevation isn’t meant for cats like you, so stop askin for help…
Could use brail on ya lines…
………………………And they still wouldn’t be felt…
Can i beat you in under 10 mins..well here i go..
I have the lethalist intelligence, to leave L.I’s brain stated mental..
..cause my punches hit on him repeatedly..
..to leave his lays in bent forms
Your a nonentity, coming in like something, wait for the aftermath..
..cause I’d personalise you with horrid speech..
..but ill punch for the crowd to laugh
This kids leaving here on a high, but I mean downwards by swipes..
..cause to say your dope in all forms..
..i must be out of my mind
Beating L.I through with foul syntax, the rest will spoil you later..
..as your verses are shit from when they drop..
..are you missing the toilet paper?
Im the highest vet setting the standard, so you wont walk with a win..
..where you aint got the slightest of chances..
..like unlucky Irishmen betting
Uppin..and yes L.I..i am in this crew...........#1
yes, he's in the crew.
the roster just needs to be updated
yo i pick script jus because of dat burger king line, dat wuz tight :thumbup:
^ that was me kid....and learn how to explain ur votes..............................up 1
It wasnt my line..you can vote yet..now go away and dont post in here..
La la la la......................................#2
Not bad of a battle.
I'm not gona poll vote though, I'll just give some feedback.
L.I.'s punches hit harder, seriously, well, they were more personal, which added wit to his verse. He had a good meta too, which added a bit of creativity.
Scriptious' verse wasn't bad. He only had 2 good punches which were witty, but other than that, it was weak.
L.I. took this, just giving some feedback for you guys, lol no poll voting, don't worry lol.
This battle was nice.
L.I.: You had good concepts. It was good flow and good punches, and some of it was witty. Most of it was dry, however. Wordplay was not complex enough for me. Structure couldv'e been way better.
Scriptious: You had good concepts too. You camemore personal than him, and you came with deeper wordplay. Your verse wasn't very witty either. But it was deeper, and in my eyes, you took this.
Vote: Scriptious
up 2...............
Thanks for the vote...remember to poll though...Uppin...#3
L.i.- wtf is with the periods to creat a whole line??? retarded... :wtf: anyway
nice punches
flow was aight but not that great
nice personals
good wordplay
structure needs to be worked on
Script- what the hell? i got confused reading that...
your flow was all jacked up.. although u had some good punches in there. you had some good vocab goin on there. i liked that. your verse sounded more intellegent and the punches hit a lil harder...
my vote goes to you script
Umm, this was OK....
L.I came with some pretty played punches. I've heard the closer you used about million times. Your flow was OK and you had a little wit behind your shit. Overall, I think you had an average verse. I liked the research you did on him though. Even if he is a member of that crew, it was funny when he said it. And who the fuck asked Kryo and iLL to sway in here?
Scriptious was OK, but he seemed to lack any real punches. I don't know if they were worded wrong or what, but they all seemed blah to me. Flow was OK and wordplay wasn't great, but didn't really suck either. I think you just needed to hit with your punches. It seemed like you were just rapping instead of battling....
Vote - L.I
I agree wit iLL Kahn dis
battle was a little wack so
both of yall' did yall'
If i could vote i would pick
L.I
Go away knob jockey................................
Scriptious
I have the lethalist intelligence, to leave L.I’s brain stated mental..
..cause my punches hit on him repeatedly..
..to leave his lays in bent forms
ok
Your a nonentity, coming in like something, wait for the aftermath..
..cause I’d personalise you with horrid speech..
..but ill punch for the crowd to laugh
blah
This kids leaving here on a high, but I mean downwards by swipes..
..cause to say your dope in all forms..
..i must be out of my mind
ok
Beating L.I through with foul syntax, the rest will spoil you later..
..as your verses are shit from when they drop..
..are you missing the toilet paper?
smirk .. ok
Im the highest vet setting the standard, so you wont walk with a win..
..where you aint got the slightest of chances..
..like unlucky Irishmen betting
could have been worded better .. saw where you were trying to go with it though
L.I.
Ya weak texts can be beaten by filler like the Light’s OUT game…
You’re an embarrassment to RB…
…………………………..So they decided to white out ya name…
nice
Pull out ya rap book, its all dusty, might wanna give it a rinse…
Ya rhymes are so old…
…………They were used back when Burger King was prince…
ah ha ha .. nice
Cut the meta’s and let’s goes to personals for a switch…
Ya crew name fits you perfectly…
………..…Cause your always out of dopeness bitch…
ok
I’m teaching the basics even though schools don’t start til September…
First off quit reppin a crew…
………………………… When you aint even a member…
ah ha ha .. OUCH .. owned
Elevation isn’t meant for cats like you, so stop askin for help…
Could use brail on ya lines…
………………………And they still wouldn’t be felt…
I feel like I've seen this concept used so many times .. ok flip though
Scriptious - I used to use your type of structure .. And a lot of people told me it really didn't flow at all .. Well .. There was flow in your verse .. It just wasn't consistent .. You had ok personals/punches .. But nothing really popped out at me .. No hate
L.I. - Nice drop .. Same structure but you stayed consistent with the flow .. So that's a plus for you .. And I really feel like most of your personals and punches connected hard .. I really liked reading your verse .. I really didn't see any downfall .. Props
Vote - L.I.
Hey good battle
Scrip- overall i think that u did pretty good man, i liked your structure in this man it was pretty good, i think that your rhythem was really good to go with that word strech man overall just a little more and you will elevate better
LI- overall man i really liked your verse i think that it had way better concepts and i think that you directed the battle more than scrip, i think that you tied with him on punches cause alot of the ones that he tempted didnt really make any sense but overall yeah mad descent drop
V/LI, for comin better in mostly everything
L.I.:
Good opener with the white out name, liked that. The Burger King/Prince was a decent punch. I wasnt really feeling the dis on the crew name "out of dopeness". It was a decent personal you threw at em even though they did need to update the list but u didnt know that. Closer was weak just because its a lil played by now. You had some decent punchs and personals, i thought your opener was your best line. Dont use the periods, just make it a line.
Scriptious:
Opener Lethalist Intelligence was a good play off of LI. You had good punches with "verses are shit when they drop/toilet paper" bar. I thought you had better puches and good structure. I thought your stuff was more original. I like your material overall, i just wasnt feeling it that much cause it wasnt rhyming, some did and some didnt. If it rhymed i would of enjoyed it alot more. Also you really had no personals that i saw.
V/ L.I. , i felt he came more personal
Safe for voting people...@3-6..i dont know him to give personals..Uppin for votes anyway..
uppin.....
L.I.
Ya weak texts can be beaten by filler like the Light’s OUT game…
You’re an embarrassment to RB…
…………………………..So they decided to white out ya name…
10/10....str8 ill...
Pull out ya rap book, its all dusty, might wanna give it a rinse…
Ya rhymes are so old…
…………They were used back when Burger King was prince…
6/10....i remember this joke...yo mama so old....lol
Cut the meta’s and let’s goes to personals for a switch…
Ya crew name fits you perfectly…
………..…Cause your always out of dopeness bitch…
7/10...ha nice..
I’m teaching the basics even though schools don’t start til September…
First off quit reppin a crew…
………………………… When you aint even a member…
8/10...im gonna ignore samuels remark...
Elevation isn’t meant for cats like you, so stop askin for help…
Could use brail on ya lines…
………………………And they still wouldn’t be felt…
6/10...played
overall - 7.4....nice verse...
Scriptious
I have the lethalist intelligence, to leave L.I’s brain stated mental..
..cause my punches hit on him repeatedly..
..to leave his lays in bent forms
6/10...didnt rhyme well
Your a nonentity, coming in like something, wait for the aftermath..
..cause I’d personalise you with horrid speech..
..but ill punch for the crowd to laugh
6/10....wut...
This kids leaving here on a high, but I mean downwards by swipes..
..cause to say your dope in all forms..
..i must be out of my mind
7/10...thats good..
Beating L.I through with foul syntax, the rest will spoil you later..
..as your verses are shit from when they drop..
..are you missing the toilet paper?
8/10...there we go,
Im the highest vet setting the standard, so you wont walk with a win..
..where you aint got the slightest of chances..
..like unlucky Irishmen betting
6/10...worded like a punch, but isnt
overall - 6.6...needs more punches...and needs to be worded better...
v/L.I.
return the favotr plz...the link is in the sig...
L.I.-You murked the Hell out of him, Nice drop to be
basic and mainly you took this easy,Good concept and you
had some similies in there and metaphores which had a nice good
balance...punches was there andlike the best spit I seen from you
Scriptious-No NO No I didnt like it, I couldnt even really
read it from the structure Becuz I couldnt find rhyming points, lol
But you didnt come hard enough and L.I. did beat you and I dont see
how them other people keep voting on you and L.I. Beat you, But you did have
metaphores but
v/L.I.
'ILL' A.K.A. 'MetaSkriptZ'