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Winner gets a Contendership Match next week.
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...17#post1519317
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...24#post1519324
I'll get more votes in a sec.
You Already lost one, But lasted, And your still not up to me
So, if wackness takes the cake in this battle, Jack Smith wrote the recipe!
His record is lopsided, Something similar to him, he knows it a fact
So I would say why i should win, But i'm counting on your verse to do that!
He's in it for the fun only, he knows he has no shot at fame
And it's because his verses have more filler, than fuckin Tetris Games!
You already no-showed in your previous, So this puts you on the shelf
And Postin your verse is like sex in a mirror, Your just fuckin Yourself!
Voters will see Jack Smith in the title, so this battle aint a major attraction
He wanted to go 16, i went 10, Just not to give him the satisfaction!
Good Luck
Hi...
G'luck
Eclipse is a damn herb, plus he’s self righteous and dull
Now watch me open up wack.. By taking a knife to his skull
And I’ll merk in this battle without trying. Bitch, you doubt?
Well, here’s proof that I’ll chew you up and spit you out
And fuck a short run, buddy, Jack Smith is here to finish
So just watch as I turn your record into a mirror image.
I’m known to take the 38 snub heat & dump in your heart
I said 16, not 10; proof that your verse is coming up short!
But Fuck I-net fame, I’m here for you and your mans to fear
& my wordplay’s over your fucking head like a chandelier!
...Bye
vote Jack Smith, never heard of him till now he's decent, eclipse came a lil weak, but decent, but Jack Smith had this wit better punches.....V/Jack Smith
Disagree both came with dope punches but ...Eclipse... took it in my eyes for this bar..
"You already no-showed in your previous, So this puts you on the shelf
And Postin your verse is like sex in a mirror, Your just fuckin Yourself!"
that was dope..
Jack smith you are a decent Mc and pulle out dope lines like..
"And fuck a short run, buddy, Jack Smith is here to finish
So just watch as I turn your record into a mirror image."
and i also liked the linked punch t'was decent..
vote.. ...Eclipse...
Dope battle 10-10 for both Mc's effort..
pz.
This battle was good.
Eclipse came with dope punches, which won him this battle.
Jack Smith came lame, really lame. Need to word your punches better.
V/Eclipse
Jack: you do have to word your punches better. the eclipse/gum could have been nicer if you worded it different, but was still nice. the opener also could have been worded, but was also nice. closer was decent. work on your setups a bit though, so they have more to do with the punch. ok verse.
eclipse: not sure what everyone else is seeing. this verse was blah, through and through. ive seen the cake/recipe thing before, and it still only kinda makes sense. your lines were stretched as hell, most of your punches were played, and you just stated personals and didnt really make a punch out of them. you went 10 to deny him satisfaction? who cares. weak closer. tetris line was really the only one with potential.
v/ jack.
Eclipse-
Had a pretty decent verse until the closer...The tetris line was pretty tite, and so was the mirror line..the rest stayed about average, but never really got wack..
Jack Smith-
Verse was kinda average until the "coming up short" line, which was bordering on feeding...the closer was ok, but not really great...
v/ Eclipse
"Jack Smith came lame, really lame. Need to word your punches better."- This vote definitely shouldn't count, Smoka.
And is it a surprise that Rascal, iLL Kahn, Rapid and Eclipse all voted for each other in there battlers this week? Even though Eclipse and Rascal clearly were murdered. This shit is gay. Any half decent battler knows I won. If I don't win, you can sign me out. I fuckin' won this battle, and I don't want to be in a league where incompetent/dick riding votes are accepted.
^Alias? Because you are hostile.
But you did win in my eyes. Eclipse made his punches boring because they were sooooo long. Wording could of been a lot stronger from both, but Jack won.
Vote-Jack.
Stop Swaying Please.
up.
^ any REAL battler? bitch I've been doing this net battle shit (which I guess is what you consider to be real battling) for 3 years...and I've been doing face to face battles for 2 years....audio recording for over a year...Quote:
And is it a surprise that Rascal, iLL Kahn, Rapid and Eclipse all voted for each other in there battlers this week? Even though Eclipse and Rascal clearly were murdered. This shit is gay. Any half decent battler knows I won. If I don't win, you can sign me out. I fuckin' won this battle, and I don't want to be in a league where incompetent/dick riding votes are accepted.
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and no I don't find it ironic that me and whoever else you named voted for each other or w/e u said....b/c atleast in my case, I don't pay attention to WHO votes for me, b/c I don't care..and I don't pay attention to who I vote for, I just vote for who's better...most everyone in LLL Jr. have the same type verses so nobody stands out, and the few that DO stand out, don't need me to give them voting favors...
jesus...I voted against Ill Kahn when he voted for me right?
peace
Eclipse..killed it.
vote- eclipse, he came harder. opener had me rollin. sex line was good. jack came ok. link punches suck.
vote- eclipse.
jack took this in my opinion
he had better multis his lines werent strectched like eclipses
,both people had punches i admit
but i thinks hit harder
i liked the chandelier lines flow
and jacks opener had decent wordplay
eclpise came ok aswell
but i jsut think jack was wittyier
v/jack
Next vote wins this battle....
v/ eclipse..
better verse, more enjoyable..
jack came pretty good 2..
just to finish this battle off...
peace.
Nice Battle Jack.
...Eclipse... wins and receives a Contendership match next week, closed.
...Eclipse... (2-0)
Jack Smith (0-2)