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Verses by Friday, 11:59 PM eastern.
check in by wednesday ..
10-20 lines, agree on in check in
oh & .. Try to KO your opponent.
Lets go ten Teffy Nigga
Fa Sho.
Lol sup raz. 10 it is
Me n you ya first week?, obviously ya luck has split
I seen you jumpin it-
On the ladder of ranks, well... walkin under it
Please quit, this mean shit, i usually mean it
n this fuck's baptism, looked more like a bean dip
You said your mag was better, in light of words
But b4 u crit verses, learn to write em first
So face the facts, your recycled taste is trash
Always on aim and that-
"Compared to Carlos, Does my face look fat?"
U always say u dont wanna waste lines, likely tempo bitch
And recycle so damn much, i'd swear ur a enviromentalist
Go ahead and drop fat punches..
..when your about as heavy as me
Ok Nate, now you won't be able to say how other people verses are wack.. PS, Ima use your corny rhyme scheme, and do it better.
Carlos my nigga, but you? You're as dumb as shit
Caught up with his arrogance -
But damn, you drove two states over to smoke a blunt w/ him?//
Faggot - you can test my wit, but why test it dun?
So, get it backwards;
My mind's a diamond like the squad ya got rejected from//
Haven't hit puberty at 15, you can't be making some noise
Honestly, how is the treble gon' override the bass of ya voice?//
Young ass honkey, knowing his clout is fake
Barely getting acne, I guess I'll have to breakout your face//
Enough with the personals, your life's a wild tale
I understand -
I'd hate myself too, if my mom spent most of her life in jail//
Faggot.
Meh...
decent battle.
Vylint's first 3 bars were pretty good and the bean dip thing was funny as hell.
Only line that I liked of Razah's was..
well I didn;t like it...
but the last bar was half decent.
The rest was too personal or just wack.
V/Vylint
No way this is the same Raz...and if it is...then you suck...actually you both sucked...
Vylint's Verse: 24/50Quote:
Originally Posted by Vylint
Notes:
Your opener was your best line...the rest pretty much went downhill.....you had no new metaphors....and not really any hard punches.....
Aiyo Razah's Verse: 19/50Quote:
Originally Posted by Aiyo Razah
Notes:
You had alot of personals...but you didnt put them too use very well....honestly I think you came too personal...that is if they were true.....you had one good punch in your verse...and that was about midways...your opener and closing was pretty well weak....
Vote - Vylint....and I hate the guy..
Me n you ya first week?, obviously ya luck has split
I seen you jumpin it-
On the ladder of ranks, well... walkin under it
---ok..nothing special
Please quit, this mean shit, i usually mean it
n this fuck's baptism, looked more like a bean dip
---wack..my friend told me this joke and i didnt laugh....AT ALL.
You said your mag was better, in light of words
But b4 u crit verses, learn to write em first
---almost
So face the facts, your recycled taste is trash
Always on aim and that-
"Compared to Carlos, Does my face look fat?"
---personal i guess..ok
U always say u dont wanna waste lines, likely tempo bitch
And recycle so damn much, i'd swear ur a enviromentalist
---wack
Carlos my nigga, but you? You're as dumb as shit
Caught up with his arrogance -
But damn, you drove two states over to smoke a blunt w/ him?//
---personal..ok
Faggot - you can test my wit, but why test it dun?
So, get it backwards;
My mind's a diamond like the squad ya got rejected from//
---heh
Haven't hit puberty at 15, you can't be making some noise
Honestly, how is the treble gon' override the bass of ya voice?//
---almost
Young ass honkey, knowing his clout is fake
Barely getting acne, I guess I'll have to breakout your face//
---ok
Enough with the personals, your life's a wild tale
I understand -
I'd hate myself too, if my mom spent most of her life in jail//
---damn..if this is true...then death up vylint.if not...u still win..
V.Razah.....better verse......
you guys talk a lot but these verses dont back it up
at all....Razah just came better.
Hey guys, my name is Carlos.. Only fair if i vote-
Tef
Me n you ya first week?, obviously ya luck has split
I seen you jumpin it-
On the ladder of ranks, well... walkin under it
Please quit, this mean shit, i usually mean it
n this fuck's baptism, looked more like a bean dip
So face the facts, your recycled taste is trash
Always on aim and that-
"Compared to Carlos, Does my face look fat?"
Raz.
Carlos my nigga, but you? You're as dumb as shit
Caught up with his arrogance -
But damn, you drove two states over to smoke a blunt w/ him?//
Haven't hit puberty at 15, you can't be making some noise
Honestly, how is the treble gon' override the bass of ya voice?//
Young ass honkey, knowing his clout is fake
Barely getting acne, I guess I'll have to breakout your face//
Enough with the personals, your life's a wild tale
I understand -
I'd hate myself too, if my mom spent most of her life in jail//
Vote - Raz, bass line was played but it was put nicely.. Closer was killer, shit was otherwise pretty even.. beandip line had me giglz. I Trust both of you will count this vote?
^ both verses were wack, i haven't seen anything above average from either since they've come to rb.. despite the hype. but why would they spit good , altho theyve half assed everything and not come good at all, they get props from people for being from some other site.
i will edit with vote tomorrow, sleep calls
Not a great battle. Both came personal. Both had some decent/good punches. I'm gonna give this one to Razah though..simply because his personals were funny..although the acne/breakout line was mad played. I liked Vylint's Bean dip line..lol..but yea..vote Razah.
both very boring verse but I'mma go with Vylint... his verse made me laugh that little bit..... no..... not more... just a little bit
vote vylint (i dont know why but the fat face thing made me smile)
Neither verses were worth mentioning. And sadly to admit that they are in this far of LLL. But If I would have to pick out of the two for a winner, i'd say vylint got this. He had a few more um.... i guess you could say punches.
V/Vylint
Razah wins...
Why?
I don't know the personals, so I'm going by the highlight bars...
And Razah's highlight about Vy's mom...
(now I know why he acts a dick all the time, mom's a fuckin jailbird...didn't I predict something like this just yesterday? I said the only reason Vy acts like such a dick is for the attention, cuz he ain't gettin any at home...and I was right, with that group shower mom of his...har dee fuckin har, kid!)
Was way harder than the (I admit it, it was hilarious) "bean dip" line.
Everything else sucked from both of them.
Peace
Stupid niggas votin...
V/ Razah
Teflon
Me n you ya first week?, obviously ya luck has split
I seen you jumpin it-
On the ladder of ranks, well... walkin under it
Please quit, this mean shit, i usually mean it
n this fuck's baptism, looked more like a bean dip
So face the facts, your recycled taste is trash
Always on aim and that-
"Compared to Carlos, Does my face look fat?"
Razah
Carlos my nigga, but you? You're as dumb as shit
Caught up with his arrogance -
But damn, you drove two states over to smoke a blunt w/ him?//
Faggot - you can test my wit, but why test it dun?
So, get it backwards;
My mind's a diamond like the squad ya got rejected from//
Haven't hit puberty at 15, you can't be making some noise
Honestly, how is the treble gon' override the bass of ya voice?//
Enough with the personals, your life's a wild tale
I understand -
I'd hate myself too, if my mom spent most of her life in jail//
also...lmao@wack kids callin these two wack
razah wins yo
I personally felt this battle wasn't all that.
Didn't help that razah mocked vylints rhyme
scheme and then called it stupid either. Vylints
punches hit harder though. ehh... was upset
with this battle.
v/ Vylint
Vote - Razah
I thought Vylint just didn`t come fresh .. Seein` the way he talk I was expectin` more .. But he came with played concepts and a few nice lines .. I thought Razah came with a better verse .. The opener was nice .. I like the DB line .. I think he just came wittier .. And that took my vote on this
wack battle, half-ass verses (LMAO at Jacent)
yea basically Vylint took this one (barely) because razah made himself look stupid when he bad mouths Vylints verse then came even more wack..... LOL
disappointing, & I better not see any of these 'punches' in the top ten Vylint....
pz
Up over the closed
Neither were great but Vylint had a few lines that made me smile. Wasn't as bad as most of you are saying. Vote - Vylint. I was feeling his verse more.
Vylint wins .. +10
Razah loses .. -10