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Verses by Friday, 11:59 PM eastern.
check in by wednesday ..
10-20 lines, agree on in check in
oh & .. Try to KO your opponent.
Okay.. See this week.. Expect a real verse..
I'm going about 16.. Full force..
Check....and you'll need it.....I will be redeeming myself...
Voted On:
Vylint vs. Razah
shadows.edge vs. KayOhh
BribeOne vs. Sludge
Savir vs. Born To Kill
Ca Ca asked for an extension till 1 .. So if you wanna wait till 1 Smoka .. Go ahead
My punches hit so hard...your initials'll be true C....
Cuz they leave you flat...so you'll only be able to see 2-D
Ca tried to offer an ending to beef...stop fellatio fag
He couldnt weather hits...
So he offered a peace treaty, and I tornado in half
Your effort is deserved, but kid I'll leave you murked
Just ask 'round, 9 out of 10 caterers'll say you'll be served
Face it Ca...your style's wack..+ your an annoyin bitch
And fuckin with smokes??
Is like startin cigarettes...even my fillers are poisonous
Kids a virgin to rap, and in real life..not even a bit of head
But he did have one nightstands...and that's next to ya bed
After tallying votes...I can tell your gonna get torn..
Cuz nobody'll say Ca Ca Doo...
Unless your fucking Foghorn Leghorn..
How'd you get in this league?? at least your not here to stay
And how are you clear of the fog...with Smoke in the way
Fuck it, 12
If u got food for thought I'll scrape ya skull..
Gun's is like him smokin'.. He'll never take a pull..
SJ cant spit in my town he'll get thrashed w/ scars..
Cause in NYC Smoka's got banned from the bars..
Hopeless, compared to me, u sure to go unnoticed..
You stuntin?.. not really.. but ur growth is..
Alotta people wanna spit but really u ought to quit..
He wanna log under my name
.................... jus' so he could be the shit..
Ya skills need some brushin' up and some refinement..
Girls be on ya laptop? Only for their English Assignment..
With ya wack verses u mus' got no morals..
SJ a thug on the net
....................but a bitch in the real world like Coral..
^eh..bitten or recycled...who'd care to look?..not me...Quote:
Originally Posted by ca ca
either way..I'm leaning towards caca doo here..wtf kind of name isthat anyways yeah I was feeling his verse a lot more than smokas I think smoka tried to rush his or something cause i didnt like it at all..
v/Ca Ca
You really have to be kidding me Bribe...
I got smoka taking this. 2D was nice, filler was nice, perfect 10 was ok, closer was cool. caca... eh. couple lines were ok but you cant spit 2/3 and expect to win without coming with pure fire.
V/ SmokaJoka
some of ya verse was pretty ill, case in point the 9 outta 10 was ill, closer was pretty dope, opener was iight, tornado was ok, but pretty good verse smoka
caca, lmfao, i love the name son, but, growth line & the banned smokin were iight but besides that, shit wasn't very good,
Eh@Savir. Everyone has been caught biting & nothing has obviously happened.
Vote-Smoka
Nothing stood out from either. Smoka punches were just more effective & the wording was a little bit better.
Eh, Ca Ca came kinda played.
The coral line was decent I thought.
Smoka came more witty though.
He had the 2-d line, and a few others I liked.
V/SJ
Up over the closed
Smoka
My punches hit so hard...your initials'll be true C....
Cuz they leave you flat...so you'll only be able to see 2-D
-Nice name play
Ca tried to offer an ending to beef...stop fellatio fag
He couldnt weather hits...
So he offered a peace treaty, and I tornado in half
-Eh .. Wordplay but ain`t hit hard at all
Your effort is deserved, but kid I'll leave you murked
Just ask 'round, 9 out of 10 caterers'll say you'll be served
-Wasn`t feelin` it
Face it Ca...your style's wack..+ your an annoyin bitch
And fuckin with smokes??
Is like startin cigarettes...even my fillers are poisonous
-LoL .. But braggin`?
Kids a virgin to rap, and in real life..not even a bit of head
But he did have one nightstands...and that's next to ya bed
-Ha
After tallying votes...I can tell your gonna get torn..
Cuz nobody'll say Ca Ca Doo...
Unless your fucking Foghorn Leghorn..
-Eh .. Was aight
How'd you get in this league?? at least your not here to stay
And how are you clear of the fog...with Smoke in the way
-Blah .. Weak closer
Ca Ca
If u got food for thought I'll scrape ya skull..
Gun's is like him smokin'.. He'll never take a pull..
-Almost
SJ cant spit in my town he'll get thrashed w/ scars..
Cause in NYC Smoka's got banned from the bars..
-LMFAO .. Nice
Hopeless, compared to me, u sure to go unnoticed..
You stuntin?.. not really.. but ur growth is..
-Aight
Alotta people wanna spit but really u ought to quit..
He wanna log under my name
.................... jus' so he could be the shit..
-This was aight
Ya skills need some brushin' up and some refinement..
Girls be on ya laptop? Only for their English Assignment..
-LoL
With ya wack verses u mus' got no morals..
SJ a thug on the net
....................but a bitch in the real world like Coral..
-LMFAO word
I gotta go with Ca Ca on this .. Smoka came aight .. but he bragged a little .. Used wordplay on a line that wasn`t a punch .. And that hurt his verse .. Ca Ca came straight with punches .. The bar one and the Coral one were dope .. The others got a laugh or were aight .. The opener was weak tho .. But I gotta go with Ca for more direct punches ..
Vote - Ca Ca
*Slaps Nahlidge* FUCK!!!
...looks at the newly enforced for each link -1 vote rule....whew...I still have a KO so far...lmao....
Edit: LoL word .. If he don`t get links you got the KO
this was closer than i thought
Ca Ca came a lot better than he has in the past
smoka did too
this wasnt a bad read at all
wont go into a huge breakdown
but here are my favorites...
smoka
Kids a virgin to rap, and in real life..not even a bit of head
But he did have one nightstands...and that's next to ya bed
-nice
Ca Ca
SJ cant spit in my town he'll get thrashed w/ scars..
Cause in NYC Smoka's got banned from the bars..
lol pretty good
i think smoka pulled it out in the end
v/smokajoka
This was actually a good battle, but I have to say Smoka had some better punches. But I think Ca Ca's verse was pretty good.
Vote: SmokaJoka666
This was close. Neither were very good. Smokajoka had a better verse. Ca Ca had a couple fillers i didnt like.
vote - the joke
Smoka wins .. +10
Ca Ca loses .. -10