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14, check.
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iight,
Man you aint a waiter, so what makes u think u can seat me
Plus u tryna elevate by studyin sumbudy who cant even beat me
I think i'm psychic, cuz I knew this was over before it started,
I saw a couple of ur battles twice...... n all four were garbage
Yea ur gettin far... especially in Pandora's Box of all places,
Man ur on lock dawg face it, master punches give u lock jaw taste it?
^See ur leaders wack, so that virus been flitered through your crew,
You say ur ill but..... it appears u've bit off more than u can chew
Leave u a chip'd at the heart, u can't rap should be stripped of the art
Ur verse is weak at the seems........... so it's easy to rip you apart
Mondo Thugs..? please ur rhymes'll get cut untill the bastard's loose,
back to Mondo, how u gone be in gangsta clique named after juice!?
My verse makes it's mark........ bitch, dont confuse it's toll
Basically....
........I fuckin checked in..... then threw it in cruise control!
ehh, gl
Aight check it...
Ur simply nothin', get it bitch! Ur world's like, trapped in a cage
But ur on RB's ranking list...
...Well yeah, the last page!
For me to beat ur sorry ass, I don't have to be real sick
Only time he'll stay ill...
...Is if he keeps his lips on Feeble's dick!
Enough with the shit talking, it's time for, the main hit
He's in the center of attention...
...Why u think they call him "The Shit"!
Props to Smoka, for givin' me a chance to clown you bitch
He ain't even underground...
...Well, until I beat him down to it!
Steppin' up to me? Let me son this..... Ridiculous hoe
Why I strive for this win?...
...Coz I'm just fuckin' Ambitious yo!*
Ur shit's old bitch, it's useless, like a broken saxophone
This guy can't be hardcore...
...Even if he performed in dog porn!
His custom title explains it all, 'Cause that's the distance which...
states "Wack newbs......>......You" See your distance thru difference bitch!**
* - Think about it. If you don't understand my punches & wordplay, then please don't vote.
** - His custom title.
Pz
This shit went down coz I voted on 'em battles.
Uppin'...
Ambitious...wow...u didn't really impress me here...actually kinda depressed me...I expected a lot better from you...the "loose at the seems" line was ok, but is played...I really didn't see anything else that could be considered a punch..just a few personals...not horrible, but damn I expected alot out of u....
Ill Kahn....same thing...I thought u'd be a lot better...but ur lines were madd short, and made it seem like ambitious rapped circles around u...I didn't get the "fuckin ambitious" line...and I don't think it's fair to say "don't vote if u dont' get my wordplay" b/c it's not the voters fault that you can't make your wordplay clearer...and obviously u knew it wasn't clear or you wouldn't have made ur comment...
overall- u need elevation, but I still have hope for both of you...
Vote- Ambitious
Man you aint a waiter, so what makes u think u can seat me
Plus u tryna elevate by studyin sumbudy who cant even beat me
Nice opener...
I think i'm psychic, cuz I knew this was over before it started,
I saw a couple of ur battles twice...... n all four were garbage
lol at the actual punch but the setup...
Yea ur gettin far... especially in Pandora's Box of all places,
Man ur on lock dawg face it, master punches give u lock jaw taste it?
nah
^See ur leaders wack, so that virus been flitered through your crew,
You say ur ill but..... it appears u've bit off more than u can chew
whoa...niceness..
Leave u a chip'd at the heart, u can't rap should be stripped of the art
Ur verse is weak at the seems........... so it's easy to rip you apart
nice again liking the seems-rip apart deal..good
Mondo Thugs..? please ur rhymes'll get cut untill the bastard's loose,
back to Mondo, how u gone be in gangsta clique named after juice!?
could of landed much better Amb..
My verse makes it's mark........ bitch, dont confuse it's toll
Basically....
........I fuckin checked in..... then threw it in cruise control!
bad choice for a closer..nice idea but it wasn't witty enough for me..
Ur simply nothin', get it bitch! Ur world's like, trapped in a cage
But ur on RB's ranking list...
...Well yeah, the last page!
worlds trapped in cages do not have much to do with ranks..
For me to beat ur sorry ass, I don't have to be real sick
Only time he'll stay ill...
...Is if he keeps his lips on Feeble's dick!
pulling Feeble in this?Nono...
Enough with the shit talking, it's time for, the main hit
He's in the center of attention...
...Why u think they call him "The Shit"!
no more shit punches..PLEASE!
Props to Smoka, for givin' me a chance to clown you bitch
He ain't even underground...
...Well, until I beat him down to it!
good idea I liked yet the flip you used lacked some wit..
Steppin' up to me? Let me son this..... Ridiculous hoe
Why I strive for this win?...
...Coz I'm just fuckin' Ambitious yo!*
Lame name play and if you were trying to make wordplay here you kind of failed
Ur shit's old bitch, it's useless, like a broken saxophone
This guy can't be hardcore...
...Even if he performed in dog porn!
Dog porn?What?
His custom title explains it all, 'Cause that's the distance which...
states "Wack newbs......>......You" See your distance thru difference bitch!**
this is what you call enjamblement...states should of been in the first line...decent though..
Ill used a lot of played concepts I believe..shit lines-sick and ill and so on....maybe if you had flipped them better they would of hit...maybe.Amb came par this time...the rip apart line took it for me though...he just seemed fresher...
Vote Ambitious
^^Wtf, that's obviously a hate vote.
There was a major beef goin' on between my crew and his crew.
Hmmmm....
Neither came bad. I felt iLL Kahn came a little played and a little weak. Ambitious fell at times, but mostly maintained a strong verse here.
Vote: Ambitious
^^Wtf is up with these hate votes?
I had the biggest beef ever with God.
Neither one are hate votes even if they are in an opposing crew.....they both gave critique....and they didnt sound like dickheads or pricks about it....if that were the case...I'd DQ the vote....but it remains.....just wait for more votes to come in...
me and ill have a crazy beef so
but I was surprised how hard ambitious came
really funny stuff
yea man quit bitchin about hate votes....
uppppp
You can get my vote DQed if you want. But it wasn't a hate vote. I don't call you a hater when you vote on my battles.Quote:
Originally Posted by iLL Kahn
Aight, I wasn't bitchin', but it's ok.Quote:
Originally Posted by Ambitious
No hate though.
Pz
Calling my vote hate is far from truth dear Kahn....I could care less what your crew and my crew have to do with each other that doesn't interfere with me, my voting or LLL jr as far as I'm concerned.What you're doing is calling me impartial here which is also far from true...find proof and THEN speak because I don't want to hear you whine anymore.You can't expect to win just because you used some fancy "Chritesque" lay out, a shit line, a sick and ill line and a hardcore porno line...it's not just me anybody will tell you the same exact thing.So next time instead of complaining and wasting people's time try to appreciate the fact that I at least gave more feedback than saying "you sucked,Amb owned" and took some time in doing so.Thank you.
v/amb
came wittier with punches and a better verse....
kahn you came better than usual, but wasnt hard enough to beat amb..
ps. not every vote from TNL is a hate vote.
\/ote... Amb harder punches than ILL in this one..
pz.
Aight, sorry man.Quote:
Originally Posted by kapitolins
Pz
Man you aint a waiter, so what makes u think u can seat me
Plus u tryna elevate by studyin sumbudy who cant even beat me
^meh this is pretty basic on the punch good setup though..
I think i'm psychic, cuz I knew this was over before it started,
I saw a couple of ur battles twice...... n all four were garbage
^meh... ok wit but the concept has been done..
Yea ur gettin far... especially in Pandora's Box of all places,
Man ur on lock dawg face it, master punches give u lock jaw taste it?
^good punch good wordplay
^See ur leaders wack, so that virus been flitered through your crew,
You say ur ill but..... it appears u've bit off more than u can chew
^....... meh..the setup was good..the more than you can chew..meh
Leave u a chip'd at the heart, u can't rap should be stripped of the art
Ur verse is weak at the seems........... so it's easy to rip you apart
^nicenice .... good wordplay and i liked the internal rhyme..
Mondo Thugs..? please ur rhymes'll get cut untill the bastard's loose,
back to Mondo, how u gone be in gangsta clique named after juice!?
^nice NICE best punch of the battle right there =)
My verse makes it's mark........ bitch, dont confuse it's toll
Basically....
........I fuckin checked in..... then threw it in cruise control!
^good ending i thought.. cocky..not really a punch though =)
Ur simply nothin', get it bitch! Ur world's like, trapped in a cage
But ur on RB's ranking list...
...Well yeah, the last page!
^that don't make alot of sense....but it rhymes..so....not bad..
For me to beat ur sorry ass, I don't have to be real sick
Only time he'll stay ill...
...Is if he keeps his lips on Feeble's dick!
^gay punches are a nono even if its true.....
Enough with the shit talking, it's time for, the main hit
He's in the center of attention...
...Why u think they call him "The Shit"!
^nah ...not really feeling that one...
Props to Smoka, for givin' me a chance to clown you bitch
He ain't even underground...
...Well, until I beat him down to it!
^you flipped this concept its overdone but not bad...
Steppin' up to me? Let me son this..... Ridiculous hoe
Why I strive for this win?...
...Coz I'm just fuckin' Ambitious yo!*
^I thought this was pretty clever name play..your best punch by far..
Ur shit's old bitch, it's useless, like a broken saxophone
This guy can't be hardcore...
...Even if he performed in dog porn!
^................................................. ...................................
His custom title explains it all, 'Cause that's the distance which...
states "Wack newbs......>......You" See your distance thru difference bitch!**
^witty and and a good closer..
Amb just came with harder punches i felt there were times when i wasn't feeling ill so much but the kid has potential he showed the capacity for wit... Overall though vote ambitous.. pz. although i seen him come way better against me =).
Thanks alot man, you see, no one understood that punch.Quote:
Originally Posted by DeMiurgiC
But you do, which is good, you're smart, they're dumb lol.
But seriously, I'm glad someone found the name-play in it.
Pz
Ambitious wins by KO, closed.
Ambitious (2-2)
iLL Kahn (1-3)