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L.I...10 Lines
this bitch ass named Gabe cain't compare to my complex of truth spoken
this Ludacris Idiot determind his demise quika den a kid wit a game token
i'll have his rhymes sweatin harder den 50 Cent baggin in da weight room
turn this lil gay piece of shit quik to death, he'll experience a strait doom
Left Incapacitated this kid paralyzed,but he's been blessed dearly departd
i'll rearrange ur phalanges.ur body parts'll be pronounced as merely distortd
i'll accept the charge i commited the sin i'll do my time yeah i did the chrime
i dispersed of this kid, been rid, been shitted on, i excused him wit one line
i'm the greater of the rappers thus he's been denied the truth of existawnce
i've completely dismissed his life waste of time,breath lol u jus got pissd on
yeah baby...havein funn...fuck ya'll hataz...bitches...hos..whateva ur classified as...
Like Jewish children in the Nazi days, she getting fried in youth…
Only time she’s labeled good…
…………………….……..Is when she gets Denied the Truth…
Look at them stretched lines, they the only thing u got that’s big…
You’re my bitch…
…………………That’s why you gotta rep my name in your sig…
Aint got an ounce of skill, seems like in wackness your soaked…
But I gotta know…
………How does it feel to rep a crew everyone takes as a joke...
Leavin you blazed in this battle like you smoked marijuana see…
You’re a weak emcee…
…………………You AIM name says it best, you’re a WannaB…
Ripped in the early going, lines are done so I gotta conclude…
How you plan on being respected…
…………………..If no one knows if you’re a girl or a dude…
Quote:
Originally Posted by Macabre
/v L.I
He came with a surprisingly decent verse (better than what I expected) with some decent personals. Nothing was too witty or unique..b/c everything was a personal..but it was still decent. Some shit was filler..like the crew line..but still..props.
Denied didn't come too good /w stretched lines like I predicted, and some punches that simply didn't connect. I wasn't feeling her verse too much..she seems more like a topical writer or something. W/E..keep dropping, you can only go up.
haha... following in my footsteps. but yeah, v/ El Eye. demise came stretched, didn't really have much going on. not wit, no wordplay, no metas. elevate those...
LI... eh. the sig thing ive seen before (accomp does it like every other battle), but decent. opener was probably the best, kept it simple but hard hitting. up your wordplay a bit for my taste, but otherwise you set i think. oh and lose the links... but thats just me.
L.I came pretty decent, with some decent personals and punches...
Dep came pretty damn weak, with a pretty lame verse and the punches wernt hitting at all, the personals.. well, i coudnt find em...
v/ LI
I think it's obvious that L.I got this one. He had a few good personals, But he was lacking the wit. Also, I think you need to lose the links, kinda gay.....
Denied was kinda weak in this one. I didn't realy like her punches too much. She also had some really stretched lines. Wordplay wasn't really there....
Vote - L.I
this bitch ass named Gabe cain't compare to my complex of truth spoken
this Ludacris Idiot determind his demise quika den a kid wit a game token
you started twice with this...and THIS was not a punch
i'll have his rhymes sweatin harder den 50 Cent baggin in da weight room
turn this lil gay piece of shit quik to death, he'll experience a strait doom
nonononono 50 cent in da weight room?wtf...
Left Incapacitated this kid paralyzed,but he's been blessed dearly departd
i'll rearrange ur phalanges.ur body parts'll be pronounced as merely distortd
departed and distorted DO NOT rhyme...
i'll accept the charge i commited the sin i'll do my time yeah i did the chrime
i dispersed of this kid, been rid, been shitted on, i excused him wit one line
blah again
i'm the greater of the rappers thus he's been denied the truth of existawnce
i've completely dismissed his life waste of time,breath lol u jus got pissd on
another non rhyming line... :nono:
yeah baby...havein funn...fuck ya'll hataz...bitches...hos..whateva ur classified as...
glad youre doing this for fun cant wait till you get serious...if someone finds a punch in this verse PLEASE call me..
Like Jewish children in the Nazi days, she getting fried in youth…
Only time she’s labeled good…
…………………….……..Is when she gets Denied the Truth…
dont see a connection with setup..could of referred to being false or something like that I think..
Look at them stretched lines, they the only thing u got that’s big…
You’re my bitch…
…………………That’s why you gotta rep my name in your sig…
another disconnected setup plus I smell feeding here..
Aint got an ounce of skill, seems like in wackness your soaked…
But I gotta know…
………How does it feel to rep a crew everyone takes as a joke...
Ill refrain from comments on the crew..idem as above..less the feeding
Leavin you blazed in this battle like you smoked marijuana see…
You’re a weak emcee…
…………………You AIM name says it best, you’re a WannaB…
discon..fuck it Im gettin tired of saying it...
Ripped in the early going, lines are done so I gotta conclude…
How you plan on being respected…
…………………..If no one knows if you’re a girl or a dude…
NO plain and simple
As Ive repeated to boredom you might want your setups and punches to connect more theyll hit much harder...word at losing the links.
Vote LI for actually offending his opponent..
for all its worth...since i'm checkin up on this....way i talk...existance and on do rhyme...figure'd ya'll wudn't grab it..and so do distorted and departed.....
...whateva...
pretty easy decision here.
Denied Truth- came with streched lines a plenty and no real punches at all. Just statements about him or you. And that is just no good. You gotta have some wit in there as well...which u didnt. Not a very great verse.
LI- at least came with some kind of punches. You also had personals which is pretty good...while you lacked in being clever, you really didnt need to be. All you needed was some punches, which u got in there.
Vote- LI
For your information what you are doing here is WRITING and we obviously don't know what "dialect" you "talk" so those words,pronounced in decent English,do not rhyme.Not much to grab.End of the story.Quote:
Originally Posted by Denied Truth
L.I. took this coz he had harder hitting punches.
Denied Truth didn't diss him really, it was more like, statements.
V/L.I.
Denied Truth...
You didn't do horrible...atleast not compared to some of the folks I've seen on here...especially compared to some of the femcees I seen on here...but you gotta do better than what u did...you had no punches...and ur lines were stretched so long that it'd only flow if you rapped at a twista like speed..which would be stupid for a battle anyway...you had some decent rhymes tho...nothing great tho..just not horrible...4.0/10
L.I
Damn..suprised the shit out of me here...the best verse I've read on this site in a while....full of punches and nice personal disses..flow was very good...
Only time she’s labeled good…
…………………….……..Is when she gets Denied the Truth…
^ best line in tha battle...
Overall: Denied...ur not very good..plain and simple...but u could be much worse...elevate and get better...and I can sense u getting pissed at getting voted against, you're gonna have to deal w/ it...shit happens...just find a decent emcee on the site that needs female attention, and get them to teach you how to battle...I don't NEED female attention but I never mind helping someone improve...
L.I coulda came harder but didn't need to...his verse basically stormed it in every aspect...not great, but sure as hell not bad...
vote- L.I.
Like Jewish children in the Nazi days, she getting fried in youth…
u should be banned just for that line
im voting for D.T becuause u used a rascist line...... even though im not jewish, i still find it offensive
^...this kid can't be serious? I find your picture offensive..
fer real..just b/c he had a line about nazi's killing jews, it makes it racist? I looked at it in historical context...if I were to say "I'll behead you, like ya name was Nick Berg" it doesn't mean that I'm anti-american, and I support Alquaeda for beheading an American...it DOES mean however, that I'm a cold person, and I'm insensitive to that subject....why the fuck should any rapper be all pussywhipped and sensitive over a war that ended back in the 1940's? Even if you WERE Jewish, you have no reason to bitch about it....how many times have you seen the played ass line, "You couldn't hang with me, if this was a KKK meeting"? personally I've seen it more times than I can count...I never ONCE thought the kat was racist..
stop being a pussy...you racially sensitive piece of ass...
lmao...sdizzle grow a set...
i though Li took this with a lot better structure
denied your lines were hella streched
which was bad for delivery
LI had some good punches though his structure was hard to get at first
still denied had solid punches its just that they were soo strectched
v/LI
btw...I think Sdizzle should be banned for essentially pussy riding in this battle...
now let the beefing commence....
shut the fuck up Smoka.
:)
^um thats not smoka...Li took this because he had 1 good punch.. Dep you gotta realize that your punches will lose there effect if they are stretched and they take like a week to drop... so.. work on your structure you got good enough wit to beat LI just work on structure and more direct punches... LI wins pz.
i forgot that voting is untill the time is up not untill u reach a certain number so okay...
.....Nice Sig DeMiurgiC ..... wrong crew... but clean sig....
Pretty cool verse L.I.
*sighs*....is it that hard to look at somebodies name? no seriously..I understand...you thought u'd be smart by looking and seeing that our IP's match..hence the clever little smiley face, thus proving that you found out some HUGE secret alias that I have...(or smoka has, depending on how u look at it)...Quote:
shut the fuck up Smoka.
<~ isn't smoka...
<~ IS smoka's cousin
<~ parents are letting smoka live in the same house with me, b/c of personal reasons...
<~ doesn't have 2 seperate computers, and 2 seperate net servers...
*sighs*
<~ just got another post
Vote Li.. but the diss on the crew was not needed at all :cussing: opener was quality..
Denied truth diss him next time dont use fillers..
pz.
L.I. wins by KO, closed.
L.I. (1-0)
Denied Truth (0-1)