Rules.
^Read & Good Luck...
Winner gets an FeatherWeight Title shot next week.
Rules.
^Read & Good Luck...
Winner gets an FeatherWeight Title shot next week.
Word.
No...
u can be a comp genius, dope? you still cant hack it
makin your pain is increase..like the pilot from Hatchet
u faggot, my lyrics mean like gettin a no from a proposal
his verse? trash it. i'll eat this mc like a garbage disposal
comin in this battle 2-1, with a name that is shadows edge
you played, sayin same shit everyday..
...like kids sayin the pledge
dog, you dead! - quotables?, not a muthafuckin chance, no ode
& quoting you is slim..
..like posting in enhanced mode
retired off relaunched, coming here? lay off the weed man...
ive come here to crush and succeed...
..like the drunk driver of Princess Diane
Sorry. I have to go somewhere tomorrow in the morning so this was rushed.
Good Luck Yo!
Yeah....
I heard this kid is sick as hell, clearly true when
Juggernaught’s only famous for fucking with x-men
This matchup is just laughable, jug a waste of space
n if he ever won, itd just be a Joke in the first place
This kid’s got no chance, crew best be praying for him
He’s so shook, he even got his sig swaying for him
Cuz shadow on a run that never shall end, yo
While Jug'll disappoint like a crappy talent show
Time to learn a lesson, u was whack from the start
So when I whip out my knife, u'll take it to heart
vote, bitches. good luck, again.
Both came wack as hell. Wait, as fuck. I've seen much better shit from them, meh...
V/Shadow's edge coz he had better punches, even though Jug had some good ones too, but like I said, both fell off, and anyway, obviously Jug didn't give a fuck about this.
Jug Uh Knot-
You had the rhymes in this battle..altho they wasn't much...the pledge line was kinda cool, but coulda been worded better I think...I didn't understand the "enhanced mode" line, but I think I know what u was tryin to say (only reason I don't know for sure is cuz I never posted in enhanced mode)...ur verse seemed like it was written in 2 styles tho...for the first half it seemed to be the style that u have on most other boards, then u switched to an RB style, w/ ur structure and everything....
<~ smells a fish...
Shadows Edge-
your whole first 4 lines were just boring...pretty much wack...the "swaying for him" line was kinda funny...the talent show line was gay...the closer was kinda nice, but not too strong...
<~ smells like fish...
Overall-
Jug Uh Knot, you had the rhymes in this...didn't have many punches, but the few u had were pretty decent...Shadow had a smaller verse it seemed, w/ weaker rhymes, but picked up where u lacked in flow, and he delivered a lot of punches...even tho most of shadow's punches were weak, he did have a couple of good ones...
This is mad close to me, but I think Shadow Edged it out here (pun intended)
V/ Shadows. Edge
i swear to god, i almost want to disallow those two votes. i'm not sure they understand my punches at all...
and smaller verse? wtf? we both went 10 lines...
^ shut the hell up, we voted for you....damn be satisfied...
^ key word, SEEMED..and key word SMALLER...not shorter...you had short lines, and ur verse looks tiny compared to Jug's...just look at it...don't get defensive b/c someone tries to give criticism...Quote:
Shadow had a smaller verse it seemed
my point was who the fuck cares? so my font is slightly smaller? maybe next time i should type
it
out
like
this
just
to
impress
you?
^ no stupid, the way you just wrote it was little in the way that your verse was....your lines were short...
stop being an easily offended fucknut and learn to accept criticism...obviously that little complaint wasn't bad enough for me to not vote for you, so why are you whining? I didn't say I gave a fuck, I just made the simple comment...
sheesh...the whiners in LLL Jr are starting to come out of the closet on a daily basis I swear...
im not whining. i just dont like bad voting. fuck it... thanks for the vote, ill just stop posting in this thread.
I only felt jug's Pledge line. The rest was either played or didn't work. I felt shadow's opener, and the swaying line. I just felt shadow's verse a little more.
Vote: Shadow.
Rapid..
Smells A Fish? As In Me Biting? Get
The Fuck Outta Here. Can I Not
Have A Styles Switch? Fuck It, I
Dont Even Care Cuz I Know I Didnt.
And Not To Bitch, But Bullshit Voting From
Kahn And Jack.
nah I know u didn't bite...simply b/c I know who u are...I could have said what I said better, but I was joking...sorry for not making that clear...but you could understand if someone thought it looked a little fishy right? not enough to accuse u of shit, but enough to make someone who doesn't know you, wonder...Quote:
Smells A Fish? As In Me Biting? Get
The Fuck Outta Here. Can I Not
Have A Styles Switch? Fuck It, I
Dont Even Care Cuz I Know I Didnt.
ok..I'm not posting in this thread anymore...
peace
yeah ive seen way bettter from both
but i think shadow tooks this with more clarity
and harder punches
jugs your flow was messed up and i think some more multies would add alot
shadows closer was the best line in the battle id say
but i ddint see anytnig super special
v/shadow
shadows.edge wins by KO and gets a FeatherWeight Title shot next week, closed.
Jug Uh Knot (3-1)
shadows.edge (3-1)