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^Read & Good Luck...
shit's getting heavy, Time to unload……
Lay God flat on the pavement
………………..and get this show on the road
Hold his own? I doubt even his Bladder could manage
Holy shit
He's on a roll...… while I'm eating a God sandwitch
get the cameras… here's the shot of his life
kid's ground breaking
comes fat as fuck, & he's skatin on thin ice….
I been nice… now I'm bein mean, they tell me
Laughter's the best medicine
……………and you got me feelin hella healthy
I'd use a sdizzle punch on you, but that's sad….
Besides
we all know God's the real deal on RB, like Av….
Got the kid reelin….. Fallin down & squealin
Touch him?
I'ma stick my fist up his ass, I got a gut feelin….
Proceeded to school God, damn I'm a genious
No luck needed
fuck knockin on wood, I'll just punch him in his penis
Aight, check it...
Damn, this fag done shown the world many ways of bein' rich
He wasn't good at what he did, he just became Smoka's bitch!
Holy shit! $pit just be bringin' those rhymes we all love to hate
And if I wanna catch wack flowin' in water, this guy's the bait
Damn straight $hitacular's played, and u can quote me on that
Although that's his profession, but nobody here's feelin' his raps
Token inducted u in the crew? I guess even mods make mistakes
$pit's been headin' down dead-end road all his life w/out the brakes
Shivers & shakes! He's a Ghostbuster? Well every kid has a fantasy
Neglected his whole entire life, so this Casper's a little too friendly
This fools a certified vet? For that, all at Rapbattles would scoff
You had your shot at fame in the LLL, but your aiming was off
Royce wanted to Roll with the big boys, but he forgot his liscense
And RB ain't seen a bigger disaster since the Cuban Missle Crisis!
Later
Good battle, $pitacular.
Wow...this was better than I expected...not bad at all from both..
$pitacular's Verse: 33/70Quote:
Originally Posted by $pitacular
Notes:
You had mostly good metaphors....but when you need work on putting them into better use for a punch...most of them were good...but some of yours seemed completely careless...(the closer and a few others)...overall not bad though...
God's Verse: 35/70Quote:
Originally Posted by God
Notes:
You came with a bunch of pretty average punches....which..in the end helped you out I suppose....you had one good one like $pit did...the rest was ok....good job to you also...
Overall:
If $pit wasnt careless for those 3/10 lines...he wouldve taken this battle by about 6 points above God at least...but due to that...and God being more consistent..and personal....God takes this match for more punches....and consistency...
Vote - God
lol. i think you missed the 2nd bar. God on a roll = a God sandwich....
i won't vote cuz we are crew (although nobody seems to care about that?), but good battle to both.
^ That was the line that got you the battle.. it was real close, props to Spit...Quote:
Originally Posted by God
But i thought god came abit better with punches.
v/God
LOL this is sad Smoka, truly....Quote:
Originally Posted by SmokaJoka666
I didn't expect $pit to drop somethin' like that. Damn, anyway, God had better punches, which got him the battle. $pit fell off in this battle a bit, anyhoo...
V/God
Yeah surprizingly, God got this.
He had punches and that casper line was ill.
Good job to both. It was close.
V/.god
Thanks for the votes. Good battle, $pitacular.
congrats fucker
Ummm... Thanks, I think.
$pitacular-
You had a few nice lines in there...the "gut feeling" and "punch in the penis/knock on wood" lines were tight...but the rest of ur verse primarily consisted of fillers..and bad fillers at that...you're in a big battle, you can't be dropping half assed like u don't care about the outcome if you expect to win...
God-
Nothing in your verse really stood out that much to me, but none of it was wack...you stayed about average the whole time, which is why I'm givin u the vote....
V/ God
meh i was feeling spit more...vote spit .... even though some of his wordplay was just stupid =) pz.
LMFAO.
I'm just being honest here.
Spit killed God.
But I'm in his crew aren't I..
oh well.
V/Spit
/v Spit.
I'm too lazy to explain. But that's how I see it :)
God - 5
$pitacular - 2
Good battle, $pitacular.
Haha@this.
God wins and attains the Undisputed Championship, closed.
$pitacular (3-1)
God (3-1)