Fatboyjoe vs lil mob

10 lines
you spit first
no time limit
no d/r votes
etc.

g'luck you'll need it :thefinger:

I'ma go first and rip the mic
Heres the first verse so just sit tight
i will knock u out and make you think its night
Its Fat Boy Joe vs. lil mob
Just so you know you about to sob
Cry home to your momma after you get beat
Your ass is a joke there's laughter in the streets.
I dont give a fuck about lil mob
Ima chew your ass up like corn on the cob.
Now get on your knees and slob my nob.

This kid thinks he's "fat", but he has no idea...
K.O you and transform you into a greate believa...
This fat shit neva held a mic in his hand...
I'm thinkin now is this cat a man or jawanna man...
He's just like a pool table lots of balls go in...
Me against you, you'll neva have a chance to win...
Like a life in hell, is to go against me...
It's incredible now I got a twinkie, as an enemy...
Wow my first win and I just came to this site...
Thats it you lost you shouldv'e held on ya life tight...

who wants a shot a me i will drag u to the ground.

just bring what eva u got and take a shot cuz u gonna get blocked

i challen u little mobster cuz u about to get yo butt kicked

dont be scared i wont bite but i will leave u in a seat screaming fo yo momam tonight

u suck u scared to challeng me to a battel come on if u aint sacred

lol thats hot cuz wen you get caught freepostin you'll be banned take that shit to bitch slap

uppin.........#2

.....uppin...#3........
.....will return the favor.........

hey yo lil mob....u know u losest that right?
cuz i killed you

yea sure you killed lol you must be smokin that whole shit was stupid uppin #4

what did u say...........u thought u really beat me?......

u want to go at it again............................................. ...?

iight y not you spit first you set it up no time limit 10-15 lines uppin for the last time will return the favor

fatboyjoe-first of all u had no crucial punches at all. Your flow was boring with a boring structure. If u elevate on ya vocabulary u will be better as well. Also, u did not have any personals. When battlin u have to have atleast one personal. That is apart of battlin and that is what mainly gets the opponent. also your lines did not fit with each other well. Work on ya structure and wordplay.

lilmobster-your flow was lackin a few things too. However, it did have some punches but it wasnt that affective. Also, some of your words didnt make sense. But your structure was pretty good though. Oh yea work on ya vocabulary and multis as well it will help u get the upper hand too. Your flow was nice and evened out so my vote goes to
lilmobster-for better flow and structure

Lil' Mob's verse was ok. I mean, he had good shit, basic, but good enough to beat his opponent. His flow wasn't bad, although, ugh you need to work on it man. Everything else was aight. Structure was good too.

Blah @ that other dude's verse. Man you should elevate, big time. Go to RB Help Center, they'll help you there. But first read tutotials and shit. Anyway, your flow was wack. Nothing was good in your verse. No punches. No personals. Blah, sorry man.

V/Mob

not enough posts to vote, but ill help you out by droppin my opinion and uppin the battle for you so you can get votes

Fatboyjoe-
your flow was weak, no punches, no vocabulary. It was just plain weak. Also i noticed you ended two of your lines with lil mob, thats really weak. Your similies and metas were all played out and lame. You really need to get better vocabulary. Keep practicing and elevating

Lil Mobster-
First lines were really weak, you played of his name and called him "fat" but then the whole thing about him being fat just stopped. Idea and believa dont really go together well. I heard that man or juwanna man from the new Kanye and Brandy joint so im not givin any points for that. Your ending was the best of your flow, its wasnt that good but it was a whole lot better than what fatboyjoe brung to the table

My vote- lil mobster, he clearly won this one with alot better vocab then fatboy, punches were weak but better than fatboys, both of you need to get some personals in your flows. Both of you keep elevating.

Punches and Personals -- Lil Mob hit harder and actually used personals. Fatboyjoe just was general. Point - LM

Vocab -- Fatboyjoe was as elementary as possible and therefore loses this category as well. Point - LM

Flow and Structure -- You guys both kept ur verses even but Fatboyjoe's was very very short and too simple to stand out. Point - LM

Opener -- Lil Mobster's was actually an attack and a personal and he spoke the truth...he said he'd KO fatboyjoe. Point -- LM

Closer -- corn on the cob/slob my nob? no way man....to "corny" and another general bar....again Lil Mobster gets the point cuz he actually had a punch. Point -- LM

Wordplay -- Decent wordplay from Lil Mob, and he wins again cuz there was no wordplay at all from fatboyjoe. Point -- LM

6-0 in favor of LM

Vote -- Lil Mobster

this was one of my weaker battles, but oh well. uppin#1

Fat Boy Joe- Your flow had no structure whatsover, your vocab was terrible, you rhymes lil mob twice and rhymin the same word twice is a big no no.... and your attitude was very bad...sore loser... I'm not hating I'm just saying what i feel about this battle.... Overall Rating- 1/10

Lil Mobster- Your flow was mediocre. You had some punches but some of the words didn't make sense.... you made it confusing to others by putting .... at the end of every line not finishing your words.... You had a better overall than Fatboyjoe though... Overall Rating-3/10

If I could Vote i would vote for Lil Mobster

someone vote for this so i can get in more battles

too much lil mobster that was this shizzles you riped that shit

I'ma go first and rip the mic
Heres the first verse so just sit tight
WEAK WEAK WEAK 0.9/10

i will knock u out and make you think its night
Its Fat Boy Joe vs. lil mob


WEAK WEAK WEAK 0.9/10
Just so you know you about to sob
Cry home to your momma after you get beat
WEAK WEAK WEAK 0.9/10
Your ass is a joke there's laughter in the streets.
I dont give a fuck about lil mob
WEAK WEAK WEAK 0.6/10
Ima chew your ass up like corn on the cob.
Now get on your knees and slob my nob.
WEAK WEAK WEAK 0.9/10


This kid thinks he's "fat", but he has no idea...
K.O you and transform you into a greate believa...

WACK WACK WACK 0.7/10
This fat shit neva held a mic in his hand...
I'm thinkin now is this cat a man or jawanna man...

WACK WACK WACK 0.7/10
He's just like a pool table lots of balls go in...
Me against you, you'll neva have a chance to win...

WACK WACK WACK 0.7/10
Like a life in hell, is to go against me...
It's incredible now I got a twinkie, as an enemy...
Wow my first win and I just came to this site...
Thats it you lost you shouldv'e held on ya life tight...
WACK WACK WACK 1/10

Vote/Fatboyjoe

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Ambiguous

I'm a go with fatboyjoe on this because his shit rhymed and it flowed ok...

*toss4es coin* lil mobster wins..


uhhh.. lol ...

i cant vote but if i could mob would have tooken this win cuz his punches were slightly harder but ya gotta work on personals.....and fatboyjoe did ok but it was sumthin i would have written when i was 11 years old..no hate...but your rhymes and punches here were just to simple u should both check out other verses and study there ways and how the battle i recomend checkin out battles in LLL..so my vote basically goes to mob..hit my sig up ya thx 1

fatboy - It's a crime a single person voted for you. Your verse was ass. Use complex rhymes, find a consistent structure, and throw punches at him instead of talking about "slobbing on his knob". Read other battles here to get a clue.

lilmob - Not a great verse, but easily enough. Very basic, very easy to follow though so that was good. Your punches didn't hit him hard so work on more creative and fresh ideas, but you have the basics down so keep working at it.

Vote - lilmob