10 lines
blind spit
due tonight sometime..
..no real time set on it
normal rules,
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10 lines
blind spit
due tonight sometime..
..no real time set on it
normal rules,
checkin in i will go ahead and spit now..............
So it looks like another battle to someone on this east coast
And another dumb ass fucka who should be good, with 799 free post
Shit your fuckin delays is makin my dope as dizzyQuote:
im not spittin first..
set it up..leave it due tomorrow sometime, i'm busy.
You said that your interest are girls, sports, and music
Shit after all the tips that i have given you still dont use em
You and your gay ass name CAMROK, we aignt on the Flintstones
So give up rappin man, and give up your fuckin Trent Loans
Oh shit already on line 9, and i've got people tellin me your merked
Damn, bro look as the votes come in they are right it WORKED
Kid, the fuck is with the name, calling STUBBY?
Wack "emcee" sittin at home, over blown, fat, & chubby
Sonny, u must be thinking "Oh shit, I made a mistake."
Calls himself a rapper, so bad can't even hide he's a fake!
No named nOOb, but I hear he has d/r's lined in a ring...
Buncha gay Rb emcees, so dumb they call it a "voting thing"
Atleast I'm told, and I suppose u called me out as a Mission
To rise to the Next Level, but they don't understand...
..fairytales are fiction
Point must be missing, being in a crew doesn't make you cool
Kid's so plain and dull... he's Stubby like a worn out tool
ok ima vote on yours and i expect you to return the favor SOON Thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=133926
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=133962
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=133989
Stubby analysis:
Opener was not so good because #1 him being on the east coast is just filler, and #2 the part about him having 799 free posts where did u get that info? decent flow tho, 2md bar was good because you quoted, but the second line was a little hard to understand and I had to read it twice, 3rd bar was good cause u attempted a personal but not so good cause it would only be something that would rhyme in audio, 4th bar i like the flintstones part and it had a decent flow but I didnt get the trent loans part, closer was not so hot because is it really true? because if it is you would have to other people in the room watchin u as you keyed, so it doesnt exactly make sense. Overall it wasnt horrible i see some potential I like how you tried to go after him personally, no metas, vocab could use some work, structure and flow were so so
Overall 5/10
Camrok analysis:
Wasnt feelin the opener that much cause it seems like you were just forcing something to rhyme with stubby and the flow in the first line wasnt great, 2nd bar Eh callin someone a fake is a little played, not really a personal, 3rd bar was not too great either cause he isnt really a noob flow was ok tho, I like the concept for the 4th bar but you could have worked the structure a little better, i didnt like the first line of your closer but the end was pretty funny. Overall you got a little humor in, you werent too far off but you need to actually attack him personally instead of generalities, and work on vocab and metas, flow was decent
Overall 4/10
Both got potential, not a blowout, but v/ Stubby
Now please return the favor
aight
Camcok:
nice rymes, tha whole "nOOB" thing was wack (what tha hell is a nOOB) flows didn't really flow, the only plus in tha battle was the line "Atleast I'm told, and I suppose u called me out as a Mission
To rise to the Next Level, but they don't understand...
..fairytales are fiction" Which won the battle
Stubby:
the start off whas way off (man what were you thinkin), but ur flows went along well together, the flintstones and Trent Loans was ur best line and basically ur only line, srry man
VOTE: Camcok
lol thanks for the feed man, uppin 2 just leave links i will return the favor
wow.... that's all I gotta say, Allevyate..
I didn't even read ur reasoning, and I don't want to.
The garbage goes out on Mondays.
uppin 1, for real votes..
my bad last one was my first up this is my 2 up, so can we get some votes please
Blah & boo @ Camrok, lol jk man.
Camrok obviously took this, and he obviously didn't give a fuck.
Stubby, you need to work on your punches. Flow's aight man. But punches didn't really hit hard.
I'd poll vote, but me & Cam are in the same crew. So blah...
Yeah right man, he didnt take this yet man, uppin 3
^^If he doesn't merk you in this battle, then I will :thumbup:.
i will take u even if he does merk me, or if i merk him, i dont care i dont like people eho talk shit.............
^^I'll handle your little sorry ass later.
This Is My Last Up Can We Please Get Some More Votes On This Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
lol @ kahn, thanks for setting this straight.
this proves why I pmed you a week ago, stubby, asking you to no longer vote on my battles ;) ... you're delirious or something..
uppin 2 for real votes..
STubby this shit u wrote is whack, I guess u didnt return my message cuz ur scared, and readin these lyrics i can see why
uppin 3.......................................... pz
God, watch yourself, buddy. lol..
uppin 4.. vote damnit.. I'l return favors, what more can I say...
Damn Camrok ripped this shit, about 40 more posts and I'll be able to vote
So it looks like another battle to someone on this east coast
And another dumb ass fucka who should be good, with 799 free post
yo yo yo I'm lovin that filler yo..
1.2/10
Quote:
im not spittin first..
set it up..leave it due tomorrow sometime, i'm busy.
yo real hot filler... how u make fillers so hot?
1.3/10
Shit your fuckin delays is makin my dope as dizzy
You said that your interest are girls, sports, and music
YEA REAL HOT FILLER THERE
1.4/10
Shit after all the tips that i have given you still dont use em
You and your gay ass name CAMROK, we aignt on the Flintstones
Ok... man.. wtf.. ya.. let me be your freddy flintsont
and u can make my bed rock.. hahahah filler
So give up rappin man, and give up your fuckin Trent Loans
Oh shit already on line 9, and i've got people tellin me your merked
Damn, bro look as the votes come in they are right it WORKED
hot pac style finsher
1.9/10
Kid, the fuck is with the name, calling STUBBY?
Wack "emcee" sittin at home, over blown, fat, & chubby
hahah jus made me laugh.. 4/10
Sonny, u must be thinking "Oh shit, I made a mistake."
Calls himself a rapper, so bad can't even hide he's a fake!
ok.. 2/10
No named nOOb, but I hear he has d/r's lined in a ring...
Buncha gay Rb emcees, so dumb they call it a "voting thing"
hmm little weak 3/10
Atleast I'm told, and I suppose u called me out as a Mission
To rise to the Next Level, but they don't understand...
..fairytales are fiction
haha 4/10
Point must be missing, being in a crew doesn't make you cool
Kid's so plain and dull... he's Stubby like a worn out tool
iight finsher 3/10
v/Camrok
Punches/Personals: Both of you had ur whole verse as punches and personals, no self-glorification lines, which was cool. Punches and Personals, Stubby's just hit harder. Point - S
Vocab: Nothing great from either of you, too basic. Point - Tie
Flow/Structure: Stubby gets this cuz he was pretty consistent. Camrok's 2nd line of each bar tended to be longer than the first. Point - S
Wordplay/Creativity: Nothing real great from either of you again but i guess Camrok's last 4 lines were not as overused like everything else. More metas from Camrok too. Point - C
Opener: I've seen other battles of Stubby's and callin him chubby is used too much, its not even creative....its always the first rhyme popping into ppls minds when they hear his name. But stubby's was pretty lame and was uneven...but he didn't use something as overplayed. Point - S
Closer: I thought Stubby's was ok but Camrok's definitely hit harder and was more creative. Point - C
Very close battle but Stubby wins in my pt system...3-2
Vote -- Stubby
stubby had the better flow and camrock was bad
your vocab wasnt any good, both was very sad
you wordplays where very not great or unique
camrock knoked him hard, stubbys punches reeked
stubby had a bad opener and camrock gave tha hit
i say camrock won, i thought stubby could do it shit
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Ambiguous
damn this was a close battle...
Cam- you had a tight flow and some nice personals. structure was pretty decent.but you need to work on wording cus it sucked. i was like WTF is this.. and your punches were weak...
stubby- opener was wack because that quote stuff is corny, but overall i think u did a better job. your punches hit harder
vote- stubby...
my b i hit submit and forgot to type who i voted for
Ok Stubby your in my crew yes but for your own good ima set this straight..
Stubby was an ok verse but i have seen you do alot better you didnt use the quote as a punch well at all.. flow was ok and structure was pretty steady..you ha some good lines and some with potential but some were forced and only used because it rhymed..6-10
Camrok i enjoyed your verse it was a decent read.. you had good punches that hitt hard and a couple of decent personals.. flow was steady and structure was built up strong.. you did have some weak punches that have potential..fairytails and fiction line was decent..7-10
pz.
whatever, this is sad that this is even close....
I might've come like shit.. but seriously, com'n..
this is the most rediculous thing i've ever experienced on this site.
kwiksand, u might need a new poiint system..
rascal, thanks.
I'm retiring from text battling on (this) site cause of this shit.
D/r's... *cough*
last uppin. whatever... 2 votes finish this please. I don't care who it's for, so this isn't swaying.
Okay, okay....
This battle fuckin' sucked big hermaphrodite dick, but...
STUBBY: No. I done told you about tellin' stories in those battles. Good flow and structure, but they were measly personals and punches. You just need to hurt your opponent. Outside conversations about the battle won't help. Now a real personal is like,
God's a fag, man, his gay ass makes me sick
Cause when I asked him his preference, he said:
There ya go. Now, if anybody uses that as a personal, I'm gettin' them reported for bitin'.Quote:
Originally Posted by God
LMFAO...
Yeah, but you need real quotes if you gonna use em. Keep elevatin'.
CAMROK: You had an eh verse. Obviously you didn't try very hard, but you had a few good punches and personals. Your flow and structure was also good. You need to bring some moree fire in your punches in the future. Keep elevatin'.
Vote: CAMROK
*Get ur ass out of retirement!*
Okay Battle you guys got here
Structure-this goes to Cam better Structure with the internal rhyming while Stubby's structure was crap to me
Personals:Goes to Cam again better personals here period, Stubby's personals were kinda weak and looked kiddy made
Punches: Not really good punches from any1 only notable one came from Cam which is why he got this catergory.
V/ Cam
this battle was gay.. typical simplistic rapbattles.. battle though... both of yall niggas are weak as fuck stubby you shold retire your homo.. your verse was weak i didnt see any hard hitting or eye popping lines.. you had some seriously corny shit in there like this line "Shit your fuckin delays is makin my dope as dizzy
You said that your interest are girls, sports, and music
Shit after all the tips that i have given you still dont use em
You and your gay ass name CAMROK, we aignt on the Flintstones"
you should give dr seuss back his raps your verse was homo man
camrok- ok you can come harder.. stop comming half assed dude shits not cool..but your personals were ok kind of corny but ok voting ring shit was ahhh a nice diss.. wasnt really feeling that much else.. you had some witty lines ok shit
vote- camrok.. stubby's verse was first gradish weak ass crap looks like something mc hammer would type after smoking crack or something.. camrok had the better disses because they were actual real personals that came at stubby hard