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Check ins due Wednesday night.
Verses due Friday night by 11:59 Eastern Time.
Battles will be 10-20 lines, agree on it with your opponent.
Any swaying will deduct one vote per incidence of swaying.
wow it's savir like it was meant to be...
meant to be?...i'm no comp...in for the loss..
^same dude as me ...
edit: keepin the option for 20 lines.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=134124
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=134122
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=134133
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=134130
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=134129
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=134132
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=134131
He came faced the best left him dead instead
when it comes to what I do to you I'm a step a head.
put this bitch to a test he came out failing
put shells in your eyes quick without the need of saline.
your times faiding, sorry about it happy camper
cause I can shit on your verse while u still wearing pampers.
fucking newbie I hope U can say you seen that
ive been at RM RTM, and you got my dick as were you been at.
take notes and I'll tell you were your fault be.
your sentences only come out good when saying that u battled me.
so now your pouting and quickly draw a blank
save your words so I can be the one to break your piggy bank.
Im rude with women in ways thats bad for your health
he doesnt go after them- cause of how well he handles himself.
I'm just trying to ridicule this fag anyway I can..
jack him for his - to prove that weightloss ads are just a scam..
you can't diss me.
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i stomp on crowds,leave ya peeps in dungeons & traps, doomed
Sav'll destroy your whole fan club.......bludgeons and bats too
shots to crack you, you'll never do text again, its fairly obvious
cuz i be taking more bribes......then the mexican federali does
kid's articles aint up to par......u aint on my level i smash vets
cuz the Times "BribeOne takes the title"...is loaded w/bad press
i envy the crew he's repping...& i run to him first for attention
but for now ima have to leave bribe alone..........for a second
stuck on his gears....its best u follow the steps of ya crew leader
i mean BribeOne never merks quads....let alone a two-wheeler
this bitch, he aint bad, ousted in tourney’s so sit in ya place man
cuz kid is filled with more early exits...then recent NBA drafts
arms’ll hammer any person, its an easy win when im verse him
I can easily get rid of BO, with the world’s leading antiperspirant
cheating sucks...Av bites..and you’re barreling the same highway
now scratch off a vote...cuz ya verse is swaying the votes my way
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16....good verse bribe...
votes eh?
gayness of the non voteage.
no wonder no talent comes to this site..jesus christ..wtf
i think bribe came decent... the "step a head" line, the "piggy bank" line and the "handles himself" line were all dope... the rest was average
savir didnt really have anything except his closer which was quite good.. but not enough to take the win by a long shot
vote Bribe..
finally a vote..woot....is it possible for line to line breakdowns...just
for my satisfaction and so i can see what sucks in my verse..and what
sucks more than the sucky lines...so i can elevate..
well this was an aight battle. but i think savir took it. he had the federali, bad press, two wheeler and high way lines that i liked. Birbe, it seemed you didn't really try that much this week. but i think you underestimated savir. the lines i liked from you was you're opener and piggy bank.
v) Savir.
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Originally Posted by Savir
this was close... bribeone had horrid rhyming, i dont know what happened to him this week. but he had aight punches. i like savirs opener, but thats about all from his verse. im voting bribe for consistancy. savir what happened to the rest of ur verse? lol. vote- bribe. hit up feeble vs god. !!! and obviously, yes i am feeble.
Savir wins this...
Wittier. Better personals.
A couple of nice nameplays that made me chuckle.
Bribe didn't seem to try, I dunno.
I liked nothing from him but his last 6 lines.
Savir really did some nice work here.
All the way through, much more consistent.
Peace
Bribe:
He came faced the best left him dead instead
when it comes to what I do to you I'm a step a head.
witty...
put this bitch to a test he came out failing
put shells in your eyes quick without the need of saline.
decent
your times faiding, sorry about it happy camper
cause I can shit on your verse while u still wearing pampers.
no...
fucking newbie I hope U can say you seen that
ive been at RM RTM, and you got my dick as were you been at.
ehh...
take notes and I'll tell you were your fault be.
your sentences only come out good when saying that u battled me.
no...
so now your pouting and quickly draw a blank
save your words so I can be the one to break your piggy bank.
almost
Im rude with women in ways thats bad for your health
he doesnt go after them- cause of how well he handles himself.
lmao tight
I'm just trying to ridicule this fag anyway I can..
jack him for his - to prove that weightloss ads are just a scam..
almost...
Savir:
i stomp on crowds,leave ya peeps in dungeons & traps, doomed
Sav'll destroy your whole fan club.......bludgeons and bats too
decent
shots to crack you, you'll never do text again, its fairly obvious
cuz i be taking more bribes......then the mexican federali does
half
kid's articles aint up to par......u aint on my level i smash vets
cuz the Times "BribeOne takes the title"...is loaded w/bad press
nice
i envy the crew he's repping...& i run to him first for attention
but for now ima have to leave bribe alone..........for a second
decent
stuck on his gears....its best u follow the steps of ya crew leader
i mean BribeOne never merks quads....let alone a two-wheeler
ehh...
this bitch, he aint bad, ousted in tourney’s so sit in ya place man
cuz kid is filled with more early exits...then recent NBA drafts
nope...
arms’ll hammer any person, its an easy win when im verse him
I can easily get rid of BO, with the world’s leading antiperspirant
tight
cheating sucks...Av bites..and you’re barreling the same highway
now scratch off a vote...cuz ya verse is swaying the votes my way
decent
i thought Savir was a little bit more consistent, Bribe had a few iffy punches... the opener/handles himself lines were the best of the battle, but Savir had more good lines...
Vote - Savir
i think this was a lot closer than expected..
bribecame nice..a few lines i really wasnt feelin
the RM RTM line was kinda blah to me
but i was feelin the pampers even though it was kinda predictable
ad th closer the scam line was dope ass fuck
i new savir was capable of beatin bribe...after reading bribes
and i honestly think savir had the better verse..
the bad press line was nice, the BO/anti line was dope
and the closer pretty much sealed for me
my vote goes to
savir
nice battle guys..
Upping over the closed
Savir wins 4-2 .. +10
Bribe loses .. -10