Check ins due Wednesday night.
Verses due Friday night by 11:59 Eastern Time.
Battles will be 10-20 lines, agree on it with your opponent.
Any swaying will deduct one vote per incidence of swaying.
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Check ins due Wednesday night.
Verses due Friday night by 11:59 Eastern Time.
Battles will be 10-20 lines, agree on it with your opponent.
Any swaying will deduct one vote per incidence of swaying.
Checkin' in... Good luck, Feeble Minded... I'll go as many as you'll go in your check in.
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16 lines then
lines aint urs, theyre played, u'd like to slam these vets bitch
but whoever had a hand in ur success wasn't ambidextrous
you heard about hottie biting, how can this whore ignore her
now when u write bars they're flipped more than ford explorers
ya full of malice yo, but cant knock me out of balance hoe
and you got beat by sdizzle at his all black talent show. .
you can't evade sparks, i`ll cut you cuz my blades sharp
rb lost its rep of wackness when god had it trade marked
but you got the chrit look, flow, and punches - my times done
& share a resemblance with Av.. thats where u got ya lines from
mentally incapacitated, your a retard, & you love to front me
but even ya state of mind. . wants to move to another country
a rhyme entrepreneur; but he sucks, i clown his practice
cuz God can walk on water. . but then drown in wackness
god loses, but according to the rules, feeble loses to.......
i feel stupid cuz i thought its saturday morning, when in reality its friday morning, please excuse my fat studpidity....... i will never posts in lll ever again. sorry feeble
you CAN at least compliment how dope i am.. we both know that was pure illness, im that good..
^swaying, yo...minus a vote!..
Aight, check it...
Feeble finally got his wish, he's obsessed with this ill textcee
I mean, he's even created aliases for a chance to battle me!
He's the worst of his crew, just a rock among Diamond Minds
And Feebs' pissed, cause he can no longer bite Avalon's lines
Feeble Minded owns no more respect, but what you expect?
Your punches don't connect, like mute rappers spittin' dialect
At the top of his RB career, his full name was said by people
But he has declined to the point where he calls himself Feeble
Takin' this battle? You know Feeble Minded's wishin' on a star
But the galaxy can't measure the distance between us, too far
Feeble's sucked off more than he can handle, his voice's hoarse
And there goes his opportunity to leave a good looking corpse!
He's easily controlled like obedient sheep, well, call me Hannibal
Cause I'm Silencin' this Lamb, and then turnin' his D/R's cannibal
It's a simple fact, this may be your League, but I'm just rulin' B
And that would be all she wrote but there's 5 min. for his eulogy
Later
lines aint urs, theyre played, u'd like to slam these vets bitch
but whoever had a hand in ur success wasn't ambidextrous
---ok
you heard about hottie biting, how can this whore ignore her
now when u write bars they're flipped more than ford explorers
---heh
ya full of malice yo, but cant knock me out of balance hoe
and you got beat by sdizzle at his all black talent show. .
---im tired of sdizzle in punches...no..
you can't evade sparks, i`ll cut you cuz my blades sharp
rb lost its rep of wackness when god had it trade marked
---almost...but eh..
but you got the chrit look, flow, and punches - my times done
& share a resemblance with Av.. thats where u got ya lines from
---not bad
mentally incapacitated, your a retard, & you love to front me
but even ya state of mind. . wants to move to another country
---ok
a rhyme entrepreneur; but he sucks, i clown his practice
cuz God can walk on water. . but then drown in wackness
---no
Feeble finally got his wish, he's obsessed with this ill textcee
I mean, he's even created aliases for a chance to battle me!
---no
He's the worst of his crew, just a rock among Diamond Minds
And Feebs' pissed, cause he can no longer bite Avalon's lines
---meh..Av's the biter...
Feeble Minded owns no more respect, but what you expect?
Your punches don't connect, like mute rappers spittin' dialect
---not a good comparison.
At the top of his RB career, his full name was said by people
But he has declined to the point where he calls himself Feeble
---no
Takin' this battle? You know Feeble Minded's wishin' on a star
But the galaxy can't measure the distance between us, too far
---no..your wording sucks..make it more of a punch..
Feeble's sucked off more than he can handle, his voice's hoarse
And there goes his opportunity to leave a good looking corpse!
---hmm...eh.
He's easily controlled like obedient sheep, well, call me Hannibal
Cause I'm Silencin' this Lamb, and then turnin' his D/R's cannibal
---best so far..
It's a simple fact, this may be your League, but I'm just rulin' B
And that would be all she wrote but there's 5 min. for his eulogy
---nay
V.Feeble..i just think he took this easily..God..ur punches arent
really effective...better wording should help..u got some concepts..
but not used to their full effect...
V.Feeble.
^^Doesn't count on account of Feeble swaying... LOL
Just playin'. Good battle, Feeble Minded.
damn god, mentioning his name in every single line..... i almos forgot who u were battle, till i saw his name in every line......
Sorry but I don't do breakdowns often sooo..
Feeble- Had a couple nice concepts. I noticed you have a nice concept you just can't deliver it as best as it should be delivered. Work on that man. Try to flip the concepts around as much as you can before you use them. Pretty decent verse.
God- Nothing really new. You had a couple that I really liked but it fell short due to the rest couldn't hold it up. You can't expect 2 nice lines to carry a verse.
Vote- Feeble
word. can somebody show me how they would have worded the concepts if you get a chance? itd be a big help. thanks
Feebles wasn't good.
But God's was wack as hell.
V/Feeble
Feeble with ease.... nice verse prick.
God you came aight at first but fell off horribly...
Hey... I liked my closer. :mad:
vote bitches. .
^ u want that 5-0 dont u....Lol...3-0! 3-0! 3-0!
i think that feeble got this win quite easily
God..
i dont know, u had some decent setups that actuall made me
want to read the punch,but most were not effective..
they just didnt land or hit as hard...
i think u tried too hard for personals too most seemed forced in most
cases
feeble had the better verse overall,
didnt seem like he even tried and still managed
to pretty much own God..
the opener had me rolling and the rest of his verse
was pretty consistent..
v/Feebs
God did aight...
But Feebs verse was way too fuckin good to be outdone.
Honestly, that's the hardest and wittiest, (hold on, I ain't done ridin his dick yet!)...
And really the best punching wordplay I've seen from Feebs in ages.
He always comes good with wordplay, but sometimes he forgets to make it punch.
This time he didn't.
God had nothing quotable, I couldn't, tried, but couldn't find anything.
Feeb's whole verse was quotable, cept the Dizzle line, didn't vibe with that.
Massacre.
Feeble wins.
Peace
Feeble wins by Shutout .. +15
God loses .. -10