20 Lines...By Tonight...Drop Like Jones
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20 Lines...By Tonight...Drop Like Jones
checking in g/l
ur a poetic head right?...and uve come back to take a stance
how bout i remove the awkwardness.. and u remove ur pants
this should be special, last time u battle was july... just about
and u got mad so i came in ur eye....... and i got the red out
dont get heated miss... take a second to calm the fuck down
cuz it seems ur heads underwater.... and ur waiting to drown
i guess reccas not betta.... by anybody on this boards standard
so ill teach her the tools of my trade...and let her get hammered
literally smashed, listen for her to hit the ground... then ache
shes seems to be toungue twisted...
.................................... but she prefers bound and gagged
seems we were meant to battle..... almost like its fate
but she'll feel like an ass... and then shell send it my way
damn this match is for fun..i could careless about a record
so we may as well get drunk...... and watch as i reck her
she had some good punches..... but now can she write
and ill leave flat on her ass..... damn, what a way to die
and if only i was that lucky.... but im not.... so hows it feel
knowing ull never walk in my shoes, cuz i dont own clear heels
man so many jokes against this ho.. let me kick my habbit
and recca must be talent..... cuz so many have had it
Sorry for the delay...girl dropped by ; )...
Another useless cat with no purpose, sitting at his computer with a vacant stare
And since theres little to spare, I think some enviormental extremist should knock him off to save some air
Because even though an apology is rarely given from God himself to another
About 17 years ago i'm pretty sure he gave a real real sincere one to your mother
Like "Listen, my fault, I was just screwing around, but maybe instead of keeping it south
You should have pulled away and let the guy finish in your mouth"
Now I can understand trying to stand up and fight for a cause that's right
But honestly bro', be serious here, who fights the power on a fucking rap site?
Out of all the righteous causes in this world, that is the best one you could choose?
Just leave it alone, I'm sure that even if the mods don't vote, you're still going to lose
And while I'm on the topic, I should point it out since i'm a nice guy and i want to be fair
Your crew has been PM'ing you like crazy trying to hint you off that you used the wrong "there" (Under Avatar)
Now I'm sure he's a good guy, honest too, so I really hate to come out and doubt him
But to me it looks like he just made a new name so his sig said something good about him
And I've never met him, or his "buddies" before, so its not like I really mind his rap
Even still, the Outsiders, should go outside RB, and find somewhere else to be outsiders at
So weak its sad, he gets hit with 1000 punches and all he can comeback with is"I HATE YALL TOO!!"
But listen drizzle, you should really get the hint when voters say your wack and you get de ja vu
Let me make it clear, if you were born with boxing gloves, you still couldn't begin to contend
Meeting me turned the story of your career front to back, meaning it's beginning to end....
and on a separate note, i'm a guy...LMAO!! not all poets are women homie
boo.... my assumption... i lose..... i just read over ur other posts and u seemed femenine... and the name recca... wutever......
it would have been a good verse against a women though..........
lol...i seemed feminine...i think i'ma lose on that diss alone...nah its cool, i dont know if they will...but as far as i'm concerned the voters shouldn't take that into consideration...and Recca (like recker) is an old ass name...the thing says feb 2002 but i was on the original RB.com before the crashes...so i can see the mistake...
NOW ON WITH THE MOOOTHER FUCKIN' VOTING...motherfuckers
Lol. Too Bad I cant vote.Quote:
Originally Posted by reccas
^^hes actually in the outsiders...so i dont know if that is a complement or if hes hating on it....so thanks if its a complement, and fuck you cockbite if your just hatin...lol...UP UP AND AWWWAAAYYYY
K im voting so both of plz return favor on my battle with dissonance in my sig
cuz its gett slept on
Dizzle, you came ok even thougb you mistook him for a girl
that did take away from your verse
but still you had some good punches
-man so many jokes against this ho.. let me kick my habbit
and recca must be talent..... cuz so many have had it
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your closer was good wther or not hes a girl
though he was a girl it woulda hit hella hard
-overall solid drop
Recca,- You came good too, i didnt like your line cuz they were pretty stretched
for next time make em shorter but you had good multies which dizzle lacked and goood punches
-example-Now I can understand trying to stand up and fight for a cause that's right
But honestly bro', be serious here, who fights the power on a fucking rap site?
i liked that thought it flowed well
witha good multi,
-I liked both verses but sdizzle made a gender mistake and recca came harder
v/recca
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return THE FAVOR PLZ
THE BATTEL IN MY SIG
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Ambiguous
punches: go to recca felt his was original and not played out like sdizzle, sdizzle used the same old girl sucking dick theme thats played
flow:also goes to recca sdizzle seems to have lost me somewhere in the middle, i could easily go along with reccas verse
vocab: i feel both had okay vocab but could elevate a bit
originality: goes to recca because like i said sdizzle went to the whore theme which i feel is the easy way out and not original and recca threw punches directly at sdizzle
both emcees elevate but my vote goes to recca he just had a better verse
aiight...2-0 me....thanks for voting dreamer and stryk9....uppin for some more...lets go
ya upping..... g/j
i spent time to vote on your battle plz vote on mine
uppin....come one...wake up...your on a rap site, not a serta
where did the second vote go? anyways...uppin...lets stop sleepin huh?
damnit aight
I broke the shit down earlier but my comp fucked up and lost the shit so this is going to be short and sweet if it doesnt count then sorry
S I think it would have been alot closer and you probably would have won if this dude was a bitch but what can I say other than he isnt it was a nice verse and all just check your shit befor you spit
recca nice verse but change your fucking name I thought you were a girl too your lucky your not or you would have lost this one
sorry I didnt say more
oh and recca fuck you both of my verses were better than that finesse bitches
oh hey and anyone who sees this link could you hit it up so the shit will be finished
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=133321
uppin for my last time...lets get a couple votes...i'll return the favor in your battle
sdizzle
structure was good...flow was on target, for pretty much the whole thing...u had a few metas...wordplay was ok, alot of it was played, but still pretty good nonetheless...some of ur punches connected, the rest were punches about him bein a girl...which leads into personals...where almost all of them were fake...which hurt u greatly in this battle...
ReccA
structure was ok...ur lines were stretched though...ur flow fell off a lil, due to the stretchness of the lines...u had tight metas in every line....wordplay was ok..some of it seemed a lil forced though...more then half of ur punches connected...personals were pretty good...
Overall
sdizzle had the better structure and flow...both had metas...both had ok wordplay...recca had more solid punches, and because most of sdizzles personals were fake, recca takes that category as well...so basing off of that...recca gets my vote, as punches and personals r more important then structure and flow...
VOTE - RECCA
Please return the favor on the link in my sig
wow recca got this...i mean sdizzle droped a verse,
for a girl...and recca is a boy...so sdizzle's disses sucked...
recca fix yur struc...that shit looks gay...seriously...
but you came with the better approach...
considering the fact that sdizzle didnt no...
you had enough connecting punches to win this recca...
id like to see better shit from you though...
u can still elavate...sorry sdizzle but you had,
good shit if ya was dropping to a girl...
but thats the only reason you fucked this up...
so blah...vote/recca...better overall verse...
Alright ill vote on this cuz this is getting slept on...
Uhh s dizzle your opener was rather homoerotic... y u asking him 2 take off his pants... u had decent flow and sturcture. creativity was aight. Same wit delivery. metas were ok. try comin wit better concepts. punches were aight.. nothing great... truthfully you lost my attention at times. Recca you had a huge stream of conscious style in this one. you just typed what came 2 mind and that is admirable... especially when it turns out the better of the two pieces... you had a lot of creativity... not too played.... and you had decent flow... iono bout ur structure tho. none the less i enjoyed it more... good battle
hit up my battles
props 2both
peace
vote-recca