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Check check. I will post my verse after you post yours.
Feeble claims precious stones but more like a rock to the blind
Diamond minds fits ya lines when shine is hard as fuck to find
Ya light headed kinda intellect just isn’t gonna tip the balance
Cause ya rep diamonds are forever, unfortunately not ya talent
Crew lineup is like the Lakers an hall of fame like Sonny List-on
But like carriages of the past your obsolete when battling Pist-on
Ya punches fists are gone, you can’t even beat around the bush
Ya got hits like toilets on rewind cause you just shit out a push
While I knock the shit out this puss, Feeb still thinks he’s a vet
How can you win commin twice as played like double cassettes
Feebs vet status at RB’s soon over he’s like text without the T’s
Win with the quickness in ya title but ya text is not up to speed
dawg whats sad is . . i just got abused & hurtQuote:
Originally Posted by telekinetic
.. till he came down with a bad case of MYSTERY USED IT FIRSTQuote:
Originally Posted by mystery~murdera
i`ll kill this bitch, no efforts needed, i`ll test my thesis
& put an L in the shape of a pie graph so he can rest in pieces
im not anything great or dope, just ya average star
that'll make T disappear every second like his fucking avatar
?? the winner ?? . . kid, stop ya doubting and guessing
cuz ^ now we KNOW that you're out of the question . .
fuck this faggot talking smack, and all this fuss he's making
cuz he likes giving dudes mouth. . . to mouth resusitation
im nice with it, in secret this kids bound to agree
knew i was battling tele. . & already had the loser down to a T
Lmao. Crush central right here. Feeble took it on all categorys, even tho he came Wack central .
".. till he came down with a bad case of MYSTERY USED IT FIRST" Busted central.
Te is wack as fuckstick. his lines were too long and it made his flow very iffy. Even tho feebles were the same length feeble used multis, i didnt expect the other cat to. and he didnt
Damn tele, you have shitty luck. I know you had that written early today but you was waiting on Feebs ass to post. Tele's not a fucking biter, I fuckin know. Dope drop from both of you though.
Hey vylint suck my dick your 15 and didnt even understand half our shit. Be gone you ignorant fuck. Thats from feeble too for callin his shit wack too.
Nice feeding too feebs. Is that why you wouldent drop first?
Ohh and the piston line. My wordplay has 3 meanings and I never knew about M~M using something like it. Ohh an my line was better ;)
I liked both peices
Telekinetics had more content but was kinda streched
Feebs was straight to thr point with awesome multies sending some hard punchs
were do i start???
the quote line was good
-the mouth to mouth one was nicee
-the out the question flowed great
Tele
you had good punches but your flow and multies jsut couldnt stack up
your first 2 bars were your best and flowed pretty good
but the way you played on crew is really played
still not bad though
v/feebs
Ill pol once you vote fair on my battle vs dissonace in my sig
yeah, it is. considering i already knew you were going to use a pist-on line ;)Quote:
Originally Posted by Telekinetic
And how did you know that? You reading minds now days?
you missed an "a" there, buddy. ;)
feeble could you vote on my dissonance battle?you too tele
i voted honestly
LMAO!! you changed your custom title and fed off my shit haha
yes i changed my custom title.. whats your point ?
Upping............................................
Telekinetic and mesmorise have the same ip's (both IP: 3A9B 72B5 in posts #6 and #7)
telekinetic, dont sway the votes on your alias.
For your information mez is my girlfriend and we live together. She didn't sway shit she was just taking up for me saying I didn't bite. We don't vote on each others shit or battle one another. This is also the first time either one of us has posted in the others thread. If your not voting why even post in here?
same thing. trying to make a comeback for what your opponent says that isnt part of the battle is the same as swaying.Quote:
Originally Posted by Telekinetic
Everybody just fuck off...
Vylint's an ass, he sucks mod cock.
He even PM'd saying he's scheduled me a blowjob late next week.
As far as this battle goes...
Tele did lose, and lose big.
Feeble killed you with that opener.
Harsh, mean, and personal as fuck.
The "pie chart" line was great.
"Mouth to mouth", and the closer were real nice.
Tele, I found your rhyme to be very witty, but unfortunately...
(and I'm learning the hard way on this one myself)
Peeps don't wanna see the everyday wit and wordplay...
Like your "carriage" line, your "cassette" line.
I dropped a fuckload of that in LLL, and I'm losing, it's close, but still, I'm losing.
I think the "loud" metas, for lack of a better word, are getting tired.
Peeps want less imagery, more subtlety.
Feebs delivered that, Tele didn't.
Peace
This is kinda close, since i didnt really like either verse...but the winner is still clear...and he did it with one line...Feeble took it with the opener, everything else after that really didnt matter...but...
I also gotta give the flow to feeble, not because it had a nice flow, but when i was reading telekentic's verse, it sounded forced with no real flow to it...words just didnt sound good together
As for punches, each of you had one good one...
Telekenitic had....
"Cause ya rep diamonds are forever, unfortunately not ya talent"
that was decent...definitely a good concept...i just dont see how diamonds have anything to do with feeble
Feeble just had his opener, and for me that was enought to make it pretty clear...
vote-feeble
ps...please vote on mine... http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=133225
Soembody end this shit............................
word. although man, if u really think it wasnt fair since i fed i can close this & not take the win. its up to you, not a big deal to me either way.
Hey thats cool if you want to do that man. What did you think of my verse? Im looking to elevate.
Okie Dokie this was a crushing..
Feeble ripped Television:laugh: limb from limb and i no feeble wasn't at his best..
better punches better flow Good quote's used them pretty well..
Television:laugh: you wern't that bad you had some decent stuff it was just you were out of your leauge abit.. you had some good punches and an ok flow so if you can develop that you will be better off in big battles..
\/0te..Feeble..
Please..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=132507