fuk all here.
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fuk all here.
This was a hot piece i give it a 8.5 out of 10 i felt the topic and all its like society talks about how horrible something is but makes it that way. This was a real good piece i felt it i wish more people could look at life this way, everything was good wordplay, vocab, metha, everything
Appreciated.
where ya been west dawg..?
I was feeling this, it gave a good personal
perspective on wordly events, You always
have had a way to do this, The flow was
pretty nice, try to expand your vocab, I've
seen you do better but it the complexity
appeared in your message, which i found
was the real aspect of this which really
intrigued me....
The first verse was superior to the 2nd
IMO, but both had a real, deep message,
Rhyming as i said could be more complex,
was a bit simplistic, but it was still tight,
dope Open mic...
"so let's climb into my brain but only problem there is no key
the only thing keepin me sane,is growing into becoming an emcee"
"to each other mary as our mother but we're no brothers
theres no respect in this world got me feelin smothered
i've discovered plenty of past ghosts jus like the others
so scary that at night i sleep with head under covers"
^dope lines....."3.9/5....
We need to hook up for a collab again, get at me on MSN.
nice one m8.
^ upity up.
Some feed would be appreciated plz.
nice post here good shit all the way thru, better vocab in the 2nd verse tho and nicer lines in the first one i like the last bar of the last verse the best tho
"i'll leave you diseased i encompass the beast in north south and east
like the mobb blood runs deep and as the prodigy of west i must speak"
Cheers.
^ Uppin for feed.
Anyone!
Uppin this shit for west, sleeping is ridiculous.
damn, looks so similiar to one of mine, so similiar
but according to some people you havent been here in while so i cant say anythig really
this wasnt a bad piece, good concepts and ideas
the flow was good too...it was emotional definatley
the wording was a little wierd in on or two parts
but it was fine
keep it up
please leave feedback int his
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=132195
Appreciated.
And trust me this is an old peice written before you even joined so don't worry.
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Good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!nice!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!
^that is not a reply.....i suggest you edit something else in be4 a mod see's it.
^Yep.
^^^^^