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10-14 lines?
due within 30 minutes
sorry m8 i cant now.you took to long already in another battle.maybe another time..
Judge lacks witty concepts, flow, & talent, serious
He left Fushion to elevate..
& as far as that sentence went was..well, period.
If Judge is fair game..Then i'll be on shooting raids
& all bullets hit Buddy lists..
Cuz all his lines come from his buddy's on AIM!
Don't take this serious...Cuz really i'm just puttin' around
I'd go a full 18 wholes..
But i've done birdied Judge's peep in the ground
Stop now..We don't need no visuals of how u look fruit basket
& I'll rest asure..
That Judge would look best if it was a closed casket
So pick up the evidence, & try ruling what's whack
Only God can judge us..
But ourselves...Well man you really should Judge that
bastard i just keyed that up..u better post :)
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Judge don't be gay
i dont' even regularly text battle...
and u do this..
just show
yo soz man.........i cudnt you took to long to set and i got in another battle.but i will post by tonight if you say thats ok?.........
sorry bout the wait...................
Make you deny you no this herb..and take away your trust
cause Fag Q had the energy to beat me..till he lost his thrust
hes got a wack structure..i meen he did 15 lines
hes in 2 topical crews...yet none of 15 rhymed
we no that he gives...but never takes
ill leave feeling like his mums diet...a piece of cake
ima make it in this game..no matter how you put me down
but you'll still be triangled shaped..the way u wont be a~round
wants to be down...you dont battle so stick to topical
o yeah and posting shit loads dots..dsnt make you unstopabble....
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wow i really thought jusge had merked fah q...... until i read two bars...... first
we no that he gives...but never takes
ill leave feeling like his mums diet...a piece of cake
ima make it in this game..no matter how you put me down
but you'll still be triangled shaped..the way u wont be a~round
^ those lines belong in a newbs verse who has under 10 posts...... ahhhhh, i wanted to give u the win... really i did, becuase ur first 2 bars were so good......
Stop now..We don't need no visuals of how u look fruit basket
& I'll rest asure..
That Judge would look best if it was a closed casket
^ fah q..... this line sucks..... it belongs with jusges two bars
so based on consistensy, ........ fah-q
................. punch stregnth....... judge
............... flow........ fahq
.............structure...... judge (the line breakup is now a newb style)
..............votel....... fah-q
Aight here we are:
Fah Q
Best Line:
Judge lacks witty concepts, flow, & talent, serious
He left Fushion to elevate..
& as far as that sentence went was..well, period.
Your best..nice personal.
Worst:
If Judge is fair game..Then i'll be on shooting raids
& all bullets hit Buddy lists..
Cuz all his lines come from his buddy's on AIM!
Played and worded all wrong
Judge
Best Line:
ima make it in this game..no matter how you put me down
but you'll still be triangled shaped..the way u wont be a~round
I just found this cruel and funny
Worst:
we no that he gives...but never takes
ill leave feeling like his mums diet...a piece of cake
Never do another mom line.
Vote-Judge
Judge had the harder punches and a better structure. Both had an even flow but Fah Q just dident hit hard enough. A mixture of consistant punches and a good solid flow made Judge just beat out Fah Q.
ight cool up up up
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thanks for dropping judge
np man thanks for understanding..................................... .....1st
2nd everyone.thx agen..................................
Damn this was 1 nice battle.....Fah Q seein as ur topical you came real good
both came with the strong punches
and personals
flow was on point on both
nice structure by both
overall thought i think judge took it
fah Q i thought u focused to much on personals....
...this ment u didnt have many punches and sum wernt as hard as judges
judge you didnt come as personal in my opinion but u came wit more punches
and they connected better
overall though it was a close battle and i think judge took it
pz to both and good luck
I seen two bars from Fah Q that i liked
and 1 from Judge.. This wasn't that great
of a battle but based on the bars i liked
v/ Fah Q
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...92#post1455392
In return
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Ambiguous
dq'd lol.....................3rd....................... .........
1-1/............................please vote up..................thx..............4th
5th 2-1 to me...thanks alot people who have voted......................
Please hit up the battle(s) in my sig...
Ok this wasnt a bad battle at all. Some weak points but overall it was good..
Fah Q- You had a good verse, except for one or two bars. The punches hit and the personals were good.
That was your best punch of the battle. Also the verse flowed well and it had an okay structure. Opener was your best and the closer was decent, even though plays on his name are well, played lolQuote:
Originally Posted by Fah Q
Judge- On the other hand, I also think you had a good verse except for one or two bars. Punches hit him and so did the personals.
I thought that was your best bar. Your flow was good and so was the structure. I think the only thing that you had that fah q didnt was hard hitting punches. Thats why you get my vote. Oh, also, opener was good but the closer was weak. I also like the circle line. Creative.Quote:
Originally Posted by Judge
V/Judge.
Hit up those battles in my sig please
Vote disqualified for suspected d/r. Crew vote. - Ambiguous
Oops,!
Sorry i totally forgot that Judge was in my crew.
Sorry Fah Q.
Count that or not but it was done in complete innocense
Sorry.
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ok not a bad battle, heres how i seen it
Faq - not a great verse from you, your opener was decent, a good personal to start with, but it sorta went down hill, aim lines are played, and ya used a momma line which is useless so that made the closer wack, structure wasnt bad, flow was good but didnt fall off at times.
judge - pretty good verse, some good wordplay and good punches wwhich were connected with personals, you came alot hard than faq did, and you did kinda stay constant throughout ya verse,
judge wins this for harder punches and better personals.
Polled.
-Amb
oh i cant vote on the poll now. dunno why. .
This was an OK battle.....]
I thought Fah came pretty weak in this one. His punches weren't really connecting and his flow was off. His writing style just hid the fact that he had some pretty stretched lines. His personals weren't that great and his wit could have used some work. I think you need to practice some more before you try battling again. For now, stick to topicals....
Judge was OK. He had a few wack lines like other people were saying, but his opener did it for me. It was personal, and just a plain old good punch. His flow was better than Fah's and so was his wit. Personals were better too. Good Job :thumbup:
Vote - Judge
fuck sticking to strait topicals..i'm poetry too biatch! lol...
umm...why not just text battle for the fun of it..i don't take none of it serious
Hey i didnt realise ya needed to register to poll vote, ive PMed the admin, so ill poll my vote when i get added to the list
erm nice battle,
my fav line from from both verses was judges opener,
nice punch and play of name changes,
overall both had nice verses
but judges was more consistent
and punches were harder,
prohbly bcus he battles more regulary
but anyway vote = judge
Good verses from both of you, let me break it down real quick.
Fah Q, your structure aggrivates the hell outta me. Maybe it didn't rhyme to me because of the structure, or maybe it jus didn't rhyme at all I'm not sure. I had to read it twice just to get it. You made it a lil too complext. But Your best line was.
Dope line, and good personal as well.Quote:
Judge lacks witty concepts, flow, & talent, serious
He left Fushion to elevate..
& as far as that sentence went was..well, period.
Overall you're verse was straight. The punches I saw were good. That structure = No
Judge's Verse
I saw nothing but constant heat from you. You're structure and verse was simple, but all you're punches hit. You had good personals, like this one right here:
^^Great opener and personal.Quote:
Make you deny you no this herb..and take away your trust
cause Fag Q had the energy to beat me..till he lost his thrust
Good verse.
Vote - Judge
Both of you did good, but Judge came harder in every area, especially punches. His structure was better, personals were good too. But, leave the mom jokes alone. Lol.