No crew.
No feed.
No bite
No d.r.
Etc...
10 lines.
You spit first.
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No crew.
No feed.
No bite
No d.r.
Etc...
10 lines.
You spit first.
Yo E-Mortal Nigga this aint no Concecpt Game...
Mortal Combat im Rip u n like that shit imma make u lose ya fame...
(Mortal Combats Whack now Lost all its money)
So now when i rip this kid he will take bakk what he sayz...
ill wont juzz leave clipz in ya body imma make shure this kid iz DEAD...
Now u might think im whack but think again bitch...
im sikk ill leave E-MORTAL and little as Lilo And Stich...
Yo Fire on da mic will rip him im a Deadly man...
u chouldint start Greasy is u was useing spam...
WEll now since i spit this shit sikk n quick n im new...
E-MORtAL quit n i lit my rhymez on fire n used some Deja vu 2 killa u....
its whack but i neva seenu spit probley a L on ma Record ay but i ono
NO FEEDING
:laugh2:
MWUAHHHH i messed up so heres the right 1Quote:
Originally Posted by FiRe Fl0w
THERE it is 1Quote:
Originally Posted by FiRe Fl0w
Thought he had it figured out...thought he had the win
Than he came back to his senses...
Shit's down right ridiculous...I got more wins than his ageQuote:
Originally Posted by FiRe Fl0w
Told him to come wit' hot lines...so he burnt a Hilroy page
This boy can see the future...someone give him an award
Predicted the outcome of this battle...
I am just having fun now...but you all can probably tellQuote:
Originally Posted by FiRe Fl0w
Look at this kid's verse...he still is learning how to spell
Your flow aint on fire son...be sure and take my advice
Go back to the sand box...just remember to play nice
Fire Flow
structure is ok....try and even ur lines out more.....flow falls off due to the uneveness of ur lines.....a few metas......wordplay is ok.....some of ur punches connected, some were just wack though.....an attempt to play off of his name, though it came out wack....
E-MORTAL
structure was good....flow was on target.....their were some metas.....wordplay was decent.....most of the punches connected......personals were tight.....
Conclusion
they both had metas.....wordplay was about the same as well....E-MORTAL had a better structure....a more stable flow.....his punches connected harder.....he had better personals....so basing off of that....E-MORTAL gets my vote....
VOTE - E-MORTAL
Ill come back and poll once at least one of u leaves a vote on this battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=130937
fire flow only had a few real punches...most of da punches fire flow had were fairly weak and not creative and have been used by many emcees before....fire flow battled to me like he was basic and jus is now learning how to step up his game a bit...still fire flow had a aight verse but I wasn't feeling it...e-mortal had a good opener and da best personals.....da punchlines connected very well and his lyrics were well thought of and creative...e-mortal killed dis guy in battle...fire flow ya need to elevate and get somewhat better...e-mortal did okay and impressed me actually with his flow and constant punches...nice.
vote= e-mortal
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=117124
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=130718
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=126716
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=130575
*vote on ma battles here*
how the fuck where they used by many emcees im new 2 dis damn site shit
^^when I finish getting votes on my battle......i'll show ya ass what a real battle is.
Uppin. 1.
Fire Flow - That wasn't bad. You should change your structure. And the flow was completely wack dawg, most of your lines were stretched. Punches didn't really hit him hard, you should be more creative. Work on your flow, structure, and punches. Elevate.
E-MORTAL - Your verse was really good. Flow was almost perfect. I liked the structure too. Punches really hit him hard. Good use of personals, they hit him hard too. Everything else was great. Creativity was there too.
Please hit this up in return:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=130781
Try not to get a disqualified vote. :thumbup:
Peace
Here's how I saw it.....
Fire was pretty weak in this one. He didn't really throw any punches, he was just basically using gun talk (I'll kill ya wit my gat and leave ya with holes in ya body...). That shit just doesn't work anymore. You need to have some sort of wit behind your punches. Your flow was off too due to some lines being really stretched and others being too short.....
Yo E-Mortal Nigga this aint no Concecpt Game...
Mortal Combat im Rip u n like that shit imma make u lose ya fame...
(Mortal Combats Whack now Lost all its money)
^^^Probably your best line and it still sucked. Never explain your punches. If you don't think we will get it, try to reword it....
E-Mortal was OK. His punches weren't that bad and he had a few personals. HIs verse flowed well and he had a little bit of wordplay too. I didn't like how he fed off of Fire's verse but I think that he had the overall better verse.....
Shit's down right ridiculous...I got more wins than his age
Told him to come wit' hot lines...so he burnt a Hilroy page
^^^This was probably your best line. Not the best I've seen from you but it got the jopb done this time....
Vote - E-Mortal
Return the favor.....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=130655
Uppin. 2.
if i cus vote it wud mak ea difference but i cant so dont worry but as soon asi get my posts up ill vote for every1 as soon as my battles finish
check some of my past battles out and both have not bin finished so u can vote!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=129865
vs gills
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....php?p=1430254
vs mc kiwi
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=129865
vs rippar
Don't freepost!
Uppin. 3.
Leave a link.
Please hit this up in return:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=130781
Peace
Structure:Tie
Puchez: E-M
Enjoyed: E-m
Vote: E- Mortal
fire-your verse was weak and your punches have been used by loads of emcees before which aint really that good, flow was of alittle and structure i thought was wack also, you just need to elevate and yall get better.
e mortal-your verse was pretty good man i liked your constant punches and your flow was always on song which is nice, your personals hit him hard as well which really killed fire from the start and i thought you had some real good creativity, i can see you doing well on here,pz.
vote e-mortal