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U spit 1st - Deadline: 12 am(Eastern Time) Monday
Good Luck dawg
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10-14 lines max.
No crew, d/r, hate votes
No recycling
U spit 1st - Deadline: 12 am(Eastern Time) Monday
Good Luck dawg
Obviously Imma win since this dog sucks
And since you stated no crew you cant bring your squad up
You blow at text but have no hope in sound click
Id insult were your from if i could only pronounce it
Foresight would make you quit , you should heed this call
Cuz gayness wont win like when....
When you called me out you werent ready for this evil rantQuote:
Originally Posted by lethal kahn
I can hear you pant when you realize your a lethal cant
I take emcees in one hit but your a slow feeder
You desperate enough for attention you labbeled yourself a co-leader
I can tell you idolize em But your av used to say you ghost writ
your retarted and most hicks could flow with more speed than your bitch ass who slow spits(refereing to 2 day time span)
Answer back pussy
aight pussy... by the way, that quote was an explanation in one of my battles since i used it agaisnt my opponent... so quit makin up gay shit faggot...
fuck that monday shit, i'll post sometime on sunday, so be on the lookout
Ill be on the fucking lookout and i can quote whatever the fuck i want
Check it...
Your reputation on this board doesn't exist bitch.. no one knows you
The only thing people got used to doing to u here is to just "hoe you"
Writing this shit down, it's like i'm sentencing your sorry ass to death
Make sure u dont read the last line, coz it'll prolly be your last breath
Here's proof no one even knows or gives a damn fuck about this guy
He posted a thread looking for a crew, and only got 1 fucking reply
Yet he disses me about how I labeled myself Co-Leader of Squad Up
After this battle, u'll be like the pornstar Nicole Kristen, Top - Fucked
I put the deadline on Monday coz I thought ur bitch ass needed time
But hey, it's all good, he elevated, at least now... he actually rhymes
Know what? I just can't believe how wack your verse can actually be
Dont go agaisnt ppl like me, stick to ur interests, beating fake emcees*
You kept failing, when you did your best trying to send a "hit -to- me"
Face the facts son, that's it boy ur done, I ripped you........ Literally!!
* - His interests in his profile.
i vote kliff...why...well he came consistent...
had decent punches...some bland but they was ok...
some played concepts...so work on that originality...
S9 had a simple verse...but hes elavating...
ive seen him improve over the last couple weeks...
but unfortunatly u had semi-bland punchlines...
personals were weak in this battle but kliff takes them...
i just felt he brought more to the table...
i'd like to see more multis from both...
and harder punches...and be more witty...
but vote/Kliff for an overall better battle verse...
peaceout...hit my battles up...
Obviously Imma win since this dog sucks
And since you stated no crew you cant bring your squad up
You blow at text but have no hope in sound click
Id insult were your from if i could only pronounce it
Foresight would make you quit , you should heed this call
Cuz gayness wont win like when....
Quote:
Originally Posted by lethal kahn
I felt his LP" = Lovely Penis lol
When you called me out you werent ready for this evil rant
I can hear you pant when you realize your a lethal cant
I take emcees in one hit but your a slow feeder
You desperate enough for attention you labbeled yourself a co-leader
I can tell you idolize em But your av used to say you ghost writ
your retarted and most hicks could flow with more speed than your bitch ass who slow spits(refereing to 2 day time span)
Ok if you didnt see those multies which i did on every bar your either dickriding or retarted
wow...yur gay...i learned a long time ago not to sway...Quote:
Originally Posted by Stryk9
u should do the same...
welll if you want someone to believe you even read it then dont say something thats blatently wrong
Uppin' #1.........................................
strke lost this due to a wackish verse
there where no hard punches atall...
you both came streched with poor structures
try to come witty with lil lines....
it will come in time read sureals old
battles he used to be v/good at this
lethal hit more personal with betta punches
nothing outstounding but atleast he hit
also his flow came a lil betta not v/good
battle overall but 1 clear winner
and dont bitch about votes its only a battle
..........ghost
Multi =Quote:
Originally Posted by Stryk9
Stryk9's a retard....screams louder than a police car
Just to get ahead you gotta leave both of ya knees scarred
^^^Merked.....lol
Stryk9 had an OK verse overall. He had a few good punches and even a few personals. His flow wasn't that bad, until he finished with a very stretched line.......
Lethal wasn't really that great. His punches were kinda weak, plus he fed on most of them. His personals weren't that good and his lines were pretty long, so his flow suffered......
Vote - Stryk9......he didn't feed
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=130806&page=2
Lethal Kahn I Was Totally Feeling Your Structure...i Think U Had A Good Byte Back And My Vote Goes Straight To U No Questions Asked
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Ambiguous
Uppin' #2...
Thx for the votes...
Will hit links later.
Uppin' #3...
Can we get some motherfuckin' votes on this?
STFU bitch...is that how u plan to get respect... :nono:Quote:
Originally Posted by Stryk9
^^Stop freeposting.
Uppin' #4...
Wtf is this? Can we get some fuckin' votes?
^^Shut up.
Uppin' #5...........................
Stryk9 - You had a good structure and your flow was on point. The multies were there, which again, helped your verse flow even better still. You had the personals, which were all fairly effective, some more than others. I see your punches but I don't think they hit with enough impact. This was a decent verse.
Lethal Kahn - You had a good structure and flow, but I think you could of shortened your lines a little. You had the multies, which I think were a little better than your opponent's. Your personals were okay, a couple of them made me laugh. I also found your punches to be a little weak as well, but they seemed to hit somewhat harder. This was a decent verse from you as well.
V/ Lethal Kahn (An extremely close battle which can easily go either way depending on how the voters interpret each of your verses.)
Vote on this Stryk (Lethal already did):
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=131048
could we get some honest votes on this
votes are honest man...got to say that this battle was close...if i could vote i would not know who to vote for...except LETHAL is who ill pick...cuz stryker u can't make up shit DICK FACE...G/L both of you...check my battle honest plz
Upin and yes he really did say thay retard . who let the newb in the door
How i choose to contectualize his words is my choice
ok lets break this down..
kahn.
Your reputation on this board doesn't exist bitch.. no one knows you
The only thing people got used to doing to u here is to just "hoe you"
not liking the opener, lets keep going
Writing this shit down, it's like i'm sentencing your sorry ass to death
Make sure u dont read the last line, coz it'll prolly be your last breath
not feeling the punch, sorta non existant..
Here's proof no one even knows or gives a damn fuck about this guy
He posted a thread looking for a crew, and only got 1 fucking reply
lol getting better
Yet he disses me about how I labeled myself Co-Leader of Squad Up
After this battle, u'll be like the pornstar Nicole Kristen, Top - Fucked
dont get it, so ill leave that line
I put the deadline on Monday coz I thought ur bitch ass needed time
But hey, it's all good, he elevated, at least now... he actually rhymes
ahhahahaha nice!! simple but nice
Know what? I just can't believe how wack your verse can actually be
Dont go agaisnt ppl like me, stick to ur interests, beating fake emcees*
blah, nothing there
You kept failing, when you did your best trying to send a "hit -to- me"
Face the facts son, that's it boy ur done, I ripped you........ Literally!!
average finisher.. i give the verse a 6.5/10
now onto stryke
Obviously Imma win since this dog sucks
And since you stated no crew you cant bring your squad up
blah, average
You blow at text but have no hope in sound click
Id insult were your from if i could only pronounce it
heh, niceness
Foresight would make you quit , you should heed this call
Cuz gayness wont win like when....
Quote:
Originally Posted by lethal kahn
I felt his LP" = Lovely Penis lol
uhhhh, moving right along
When you called me out you werent ready for this evil rant
I can hear you pant when you realize your a lethal cant
i saw the multi's, and blah
I take emcees in one hit but your a slow feeder
You desperate enough for attention you labbeled yourself a co-leader
heh, ok punch
I can tell you idolize em But your av used to say you ghost writ
your retarted and most hicks could flow with more speed than your bitch ass who slow spits(refereing to 2 day time span)
ssssstttrreeettccchhhheeedddd
close battle, i liked both verse's.. but i really only liked one verse of stryke's verse....
stryke verse = 6/10..
v/kahn
Ok let me break down my opinion.
Stryk9-Your verse was not to good, your rhymes were good but they didnt really make any sense, get a better vocabulary. Your punchlines were simple, and you only threw in a couple personals but i guess thats better than none, your structure was alright
but it could of been better.
Lethal-Your verse was the better. You were on top of your structure, your whole flow made alot of sense, You used some good personals against your opponent, and your vocabulary was really good so my vote goes to...
VOTE-Lethal Kahn