10 lines or more
1 hour is deadline
no feeding
no biting
dis is not my check in.....
when you check in ya only got an hour on da clock.....
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10 lines or more
1 hour is deadline
no feeding
no biting
dis is not my check in.....
when you check in ya only got an hour on da clock.....
checkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkin innnnnnn
check in........................................peace
You are not cool/
you are not a spool/
you are not in a pool/
you are not a stool/
you are not not a tool/
you are not going to win this duel/
you are not in school/
you are not a precious jewel/
you are not Jeff/
Peace
I'll shoot dis nigga up more than heroin addicts with needles
vanilla ice either going to get melted or popped like a weasle
WTF he gonna name himself after a wigga dats a fake ass thug
he wanna sport da red colors so, i'll baptize him in his own blood
I'm a cleptomaniac so I can take any shit dis bitch throws back
ya don't need an updated Almanac to know his whack is a fact
Vanilla being passed over more than highways and interstates
he liked da entree' ate because I'm crackin his head with plates
vanilla ice getting his ass beat more than porn with egg beaters
Ice filled with lines thats down played, tarnished, and jus meager
ummm....was that his verse?
AK mixa wins this because he came harder with his punches and metas and personals....not too much wittiness or wordplay, but enought to take this battle obviously.....
Vaniulla Ice....dun know how to break your verse down....extend your lines...read other battless to get the idea
please peep http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=129774
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Ambiguous
Look, obviously you didn't read mine correctly.. I said he wasn't a precious jewel. Nor is he a spool. You can't, under any circumstances, get more personal than that. It's just not humanly possible.
You're just playa-hatin, nag
It's not playa hatin......
Vanilla- worste member on Rapbattles.com (ever)
cool,spool,....whatever....what does that have to do wit a battle?
Best Bar-
I'm a cleptomaniac so I can take any shit dis bitch throws back
ya don't need an updated Almanac to know his whack is a fact
Nice punch wit Vocab
Easy Vote- Ak-mixa
uppin............................................. .................................................. .
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=130634 Vote :mad: please...
vanilla ice your verse was very different but not in a good way it was poor.. bad.. awful.. you had nothing in it no punches personals length to lines..
0.2-10
ak-mixa not the best i have seen you done but after his drop you didnt need to drop amazing.. good punches and lines were an ok length so :thumbup:
5-10
vote - ak-mixa
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uppin for votes and i'll vote on yours............................................. .................................................. ....
uppin........com'n if ya readin dis then jus vote........................................
AK mixa wins this because he came harder with his punches and metas and personals....not too much wittiness or wordplay, but enough to take this battle obviously...for future reference....Stay away from net ganster lines...like saying your gonna shoot him and shit like that...stick to hard punches and personals and be creative in them also
Vanilla Ice....dun know how to break your verse down....extend your lines...read other battless to get the idea....throw some decent punches and personals...no...you didn't really have any personals....be witty man..not so simplistic in your shit
Please peep
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=129912
VI - I really don't know how to break your verse down. You should elevate, big time! Make your sentences longer, go to RB Help Center and read the tutorials. You obviously don't know anything about rap. Work on everything. Read battles. That verse was just wack as hell. You kept saying the same shit over and over again. Ugh that's all I can say about your verse. Oh and lol that Jeff line made me laugh, dunno why.
ak - That was good, could've been much better. Like your other verses, flow was almost perfect. Structure was ok, change it though, but it was still good dawg. Punches hit him hard. But you shouldn't have wasted all that on him. You could've came up with simple shit and it could've merked him. You had some multies too. Fav. line:
"I'm a cleptomaniac so I can take any shit dis bitch throws back
ya don't need an updated Almanac to know his whack is a fact"
V/ak
Please hit this up in return:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...54#post1429954
Try not to get a disqualified vote.
Peace
VanillaIce
uhhh...
ok,ok...i wont get my vote dqed....ur structure was wack....simple as hell.....flow was on target....Woot!.....u had a pimp rhyme scheme goin until the last line....You r not Jeff?...what the hell......no metas....no wordplay.....no punches.....no personals....
ak-mixa
structure was good....flow was pretty good......metas were nice.....wordplay was decent.....some of ur punches connected.....personals were pretty good....
Conclusion
both had a good structure, though aks was more complex......vanilla had a better flow, as his lines were like 4 or less lines.....ak had more metas, wordplay.....harder hitting punches....and harder hitting personals....so basing off of that....ak takes this battle....
VOTE - AK MIXA
ill come back and poll once at least one of u leaves a vote of this battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=130937
thats not what they mean by 'personals'.personals are disses about the person, that are either based on something true, or their name/avatar/sig etc.Quote:
Originally Posted by VanillaIce
'you are not a precious jewel' isn't a dis - its true. hes a human.
vanilla, u have got to elevate. at least try dissing him would be a start. how is a rap battle a battle if ur not gonna even dis him? ur rhyming words were so simple, a chid could have wrote them. No seroiusly, its true. iv'e actually seen u write better topical verses.
ak mixa Ur verse was okay. flow wasn't bad, good punches (u actually had punches ). um, not much more i can/need to say.
Quote:
You're just playa-hatin, nag
:laugh2:
Was this a joke?
Anyway.....Vanilla was the wackest lyricist I have ever seen. All he did was rhyme words like a third grader. He had no flow because all his lines were like 5 words long. No punches were detected here either.......
You are not cool/
you are not a spool/
you are not in a pool/
you are not a stool/
^^^Are you serious?.....You need to learn how to throw a punch and maybe a little bit of wordplay. The whole point of battling is to diss your opponent to a beat and stay with the rythem......you did neither
AK had an OK verse. His punches were hitting a little and his personals were too. His verse flowed pretty well and he had a little bit of wordplay in there too. My favorite line was.......
I'm a cleptomaniac so I can take any shit dis bitch throws back
ya don't need an updated Almanac to know his whack is a fact
^^^A little bit of wordplay in there and clearly better than any of his opponent's punches....
Vote - AK-Mixa
Return the favor.....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=130655
Man this battle was all ak.... vanilla half the shit didnt even go in line
My vote ak
what the hell was that
this battle goes to ak-mixa
i admit i ain't good but that was horrible
but im gettin better
at least my shit made more sense then vanilla
i guess your structure was better then mine
but the wordplay was horrible
ak-mixa had the best verse(obviously)
his structure was good and his punchlines ripped vanilla
my vote=ak mixa
^ lemme guess. ctrl + c, ctrl+v then put in words that rhyme with 'cool'?Quote:
Originally Posted by VanillaIce
um... do u even care about rap battles?
Please hit this up in return:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...954#post1429954
Peace
Vanilla Ice- Ummm dawg! WHAT THE FUCK!! LOL! Is that your verse? HA HA HA HA HA! That is funny as hell. Lacking structure.. lacking word play.. lacking flow.. EVERYTHING! LOL! YOUR LACKING EVERYTHING! U need too work on Word Play.. Flow.. and structure.. damn.. I thought I was whack! LOL!
Ak Mixa- That was some good flow you have going. Awsome shit man.. You came hard on ya punches.. but u still need to work on ya word flow.. like I said.. good flow.. but u still need to elevate that.
Vote: Ak Mixa
Because: AK Mixa had him beat all around because he had a structure, a flow, and punchlines. Vanilla Ice still hasnt elevated from the 80s! LOL!. Nah.. Vanilla Ice you need to elevate on flow, and structure.. and all around everything! Yeah.. worste ever on Rapbattles.com.. Well Vanilla... ur not the worst.. just that stuff u posted wasnt too good..
no need 4 no analyzations , vanilla was wack ( jus like the real 1) n mixa beat him down ? but truesay it wasnt tht hard, id like 2 see mixa vs a mc wiv real talent .
im out.....
lmaooo wow y da fukk do u gotta explain ya vote in dis battle
opener-ak
strucuture-ak
punchlines-ak
creativity-ak
personals-nun
multis-nun
enjoyed-ak...ofcourse umm vanilla ice give up rap dunny 4 real its not 4 u
This is a joke, VI how young are you man? I this shit like 5 minutes ago and I'm still laughing my head off. You must be tajking the piss out of RB man, I suggest you shape up or shit out man.
AK's was ok, he annialated this guy completely man, not a bad verse but not the best either. Your wordplay was 50 mil times better than VI. Vanilla Ice is aptly named. Neither of them can rap.
V/ AK
In fact, from now on I'm gonna rap like Vannilla Ice man, you better watch out Rapchar, or you might get hit with... THIS!!!
YOU ARE as gay as the day,
I will annialte you in any form shape or way,
You ain't straight, you're just gay,
You don't belong on this site go back to 3rd gra... de
sorry... couldn't resist.
vote - Demon...lolQuote:
Originally Posted by Demon Pyrokronix
ak mixa my votes 4 u but as far as vanilla ice goes u need to retire the ice age is over.ak your structure was great and u were very creative with ur punches.i'm tellin u he took sum face hits!
holy shit VI !!!!! ur shit was WACK WACK WACK! i didnt think anyone could have a worse verse than my first vs demon ! elevate a lot dude, read some peoples battles to get ideas.
ak, your verse was gud, and obviously easily won this battle.
v/ak, coz VI's verse was shit lol
yo i gotta say mixa definetly,vanilla....wut the fuck was that man,ihope u were fuckin around cuz that was either the worst or funniest stupid shit i ever read
Vanilla Ice you are an asshole. I'm at work now reading these battles and after I read your lousy verse I was laughing so loud someone near by came by my cube to see what was so funny so I almost got busted not doing work!
Anyway - Vanilla Ice, let me try to imitate what you wrote.
You are Vanilla Ice
You are not nice
You are not spice
You are head lice
You are bowl rice
I am a fag
Dude you gotta use real rhymes and actually carry them out and make them less simplistic.
AK - your verse was ok man. Not great, but not bad and it's wasted on a loser like this.
"WTF he gonna name himself after a wigga dats a fake ass thug
he wanna sport da red colors so, i'll baptize him in his own blood"
Decent line like most of yours. You had good structure, you could elevate more, but decent job
Vote - AK