BATTLE : Mc_Scibidy Vs. Rippar

normal rules
10-15 lines
u spit first

check some of my past battles out and both have not bin finished so u can vote!

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=129865
vs gills
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....php?p=1430254
vs mc kiwi

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yea i checked in but i g2g soon so quite quickly plz or youll hav to wait til 2mura
n vote on the mova battles plz

safe

aight, yo lets go

ok scibidy,with that name stolen from d&b,its spelt skibadee
did u think no-one would notice, but i noticed ur a "mad mc"
they should lock u up,mental asylum man,throw away the key
do u even think when you spit that elementary
read your shit man,it stings like a butterfly not a bee
ur structure is fucked,ur ryhmes are wack

Quote:

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so this boy better flee

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i'm trying to stretch the same rhyming words purposely
just to show you it only works if youre battling a newbie
it works against rippar, shut up fool, not even when i'm rusty
heres some advice,elevate,u need to if u want a chance,trust me
aight i'm thru with this bitch, try again rookie

u think your bad//
u think your good//
using my words just cause u could//
just cause my words ain got copywright dont mean u should//

do you think your smart?//
i dont htink you are//
cause rappings an art//
if rapping was a car//
your car would not start//

so next time try this//
by this.................i mean rapping//
you better stop cacking//
cause battlings for the big boys//
you better go play with your toys//
and all them little boys//

uppin for votes now................................

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wow easily rippar wins...he had better disses...
while MC scibidy had all misses and no visions...
cuz u suck...so go kill yur self...lmao...j/p...
i mean shit rippar actually had punches...
weak ones but shit it did the job...word...
MC man seriously u suck...go elavate now...
u had all filler so nope...dont ever, ever do that
how u guna drop so whack man?...do u have drug,
problems cuz seriously...ur on volume or some shit...
cuz ur posying like if yur shit even means anything
which it doesnt...so u suck and u also lose...sorry...
yo rippar hit my battles up dogg dont forget...1...

safe it at least u votin i need 8 more posts then ill hit up your battles but safe for voting would u be able to explain punches n personals to me in bitch slapped or pm me but will u b able to help me

This was an ok battle . . . . :S


Alright neither of you flowed well. Rippar your lines were dragged on and scibidy yours were short as fuck. You guys didn't have too many effective punches or personals. In general I would say Rippar took the pie in both categories though. u2 both need 2 work on delivery. I was pretty much falling asleep reading this jargon. Elevate, read more,write more, listen 2 more rap.

Vote - Rippar

yo cheers for hitting up the battle guys, i'll vote up on yours in a min
uppin 2................................................. .................................

This battle was not good at all...but Rippar took this very easy cause his punches were better, but they werent that great. Your flow wasnt that great either, but you did the job. MC you really, really need to elavate and i mean alot so before you battle anymore get some help. And i mean both of you
VOTE=Rippar

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Ambiguous

aight to be real i dont think neither one of you brought any heat to this battle, but even through the whackness I think its safe to say Rippar won by a damn landslide, cause you had some type of punchlines, maybe not good ones, but good enough to get the job done son. ~ScreamAtMeEarly~ :gfy:

V/Rippar

uppin 3................................................. .....................................

uppin 4................................................. ........................................

ok this is my last time uppin some can some peeps close this

Rippar

ok scibidy,with that name stolen from d&b,its spelt skibadee
did u think no-one would notice, but i noticed ur a "mad mc"

okay punches being used

they should lock u up,mental asylum man,throw away the key
do u even think when you spit that elementary

poorly rhymed, not very strong punch,

read your shit man,it stings like a butterfly not a bee

okay

ur structure is fucked,ur ryhmes are wack i'm trying to stretch the same rhyming words purposely

okay punch, i see what you're doing

just to show you it only works if youre battling a newbie
it works against rippar, shut up fool, not even when i'm rusty
heres some advice,elevate,u need to if u want a chance,trust me
aight i'm thru with this bitch, try again rookie

you shouldn't rhyme only one sylable. Both sylables of the last word should rhyme

scibidy


u think your bad//
u think your good//
using my words just cause u could//
just cause my words ain got copywright dont mean u should//

this isn't even a punch

do you think your smart?//
i dont htink you are//

not a punch

cause rappings an art//
if rapping was a car//
your car would not start//

i see what your'e trying to do, but this punch is weak

so next time try this//
by this.................i mean rapping//
you better stop cacking//

this isn't a punch

cause battlings for the big boys//
you better go play with your toys//
and all them little boys//

this isn't a punch

scibidy, the whole point of a battle is to at least offend your opponent. i can see only one line in your entire verse that does this.

Rippar, you didn't need a lot to beat him and i think that's the only reason you battled him...
...but you did have better punches and a structure so

vote: Rippar