yes billy
10 lines
normal rules
on private messages we will choose hu spits first
safe bill
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yes billy
10 lines
normal rules
on private messages we will choose hu spits first
safe bill
safe bruv u spit 1st and its only jkz yer bruv safe
this breh wants to battle me?//
this cunt better plea//
that i dont give him the knee//
cos im a mad mc//
so this boy better flee//
before i count to three//
if he was a she//
or his name was lee//
he might not of turned out like he is now//
and to finish off if he was like his mum he would meow//
who's the cunt here not me//
ur so dumb u cant count to three//
u aint no mad mc wen u c me cumin//
u will be running........scared//
ill bust you up be prepered//
ill smash ur face up so bad it cant be repaired//
if i was a she i wuld sting u like a bee//
put u in casulty//
dis is mc kiwi//
here 2 get u livley//
since mc kiwi has been banned does tht mean i shud win the battle
aint the moderator meant to tell me if i win cos kiwi has beenbanned ive pm`d illunatic but i diont no if he is online
kiwi can still win, but u get a lose if he does....he wont get anything.
o k thnx for tht bruv
safe blad but illunatic told me tht a min ago by pm
this is even worse that the first one i read from you... both your lines ar too short, need more sylabbles.. i wouldnt even battle you at regualr battles... i could win with one punch.. seriously both work on ya shit, well the one who aint banned... this was that bad, im jus gonna flip i coin, cos theres nothing in it.....
... vote MC, no reason, jus the other is banned and both were wack..... ILLunatic, dont DQ this vote, you know someone has to win and if youread it, thwn its on a coin... no real punches personals,, fuck all.... [dont mean to seem harsh, but this is the facts]
Man i absolutely agree with Dev.. man this battle is wack, and was also about as boring as the other one, i dont think there was any structure or any punches or any personals etc... the only way that this battle would make any sense would be if yall agreed to rhyme with me, she and all that shit and still at that point this shit still dodnt make any sense......
V-Scibidy
man i swear to fucking god u are the same people...
but kiwi won this horrible battle wit this one line...
ill smash ur face up so bad it cant be repaired//
fucking whackest battle ive seen..really man...
all fucking filler...no nothing...just garbage...
seriously this shit is fucking pointless...
no need to even break jack shit down...
all i have to do is give both of u feedback...
1...never again use that type of rhymescene..wtf
2...never again think u had punches or personals...
3...so get some...and write more...shit...
4...u guys had no creativity...like if u both were on acid
5...dont ever use // in yur battles period...seriously...
6...just dont ever post in RB if yur guna drop like that...
7...actually try to have wordplay...use multis...shit...
8...omfg...those verses werent even 10 lines...
9...so this really isnt even a proper battle...lol
10...vote/MC kiwi for one line i liked...thats it...
11...dont hit my battles up cuz yur votes will be DQ'ed
thanks it for voting at least your well safe im gettig close to 100 posts so i will post on your aswell and vote safe
close battle... im gonna vote for scibidy. both verses were very short, but only 8 lines of mc kiwi's were sticking to the point, compared to 10 of scibidy's lines ( mc kiwi, here to get u lively << thats not the point of a battle)
all ten of scibidy's lines were close to being dis lines. kiwi's weren't.
oh yeah, i got 96 posts, i vote when i got 100 (very soon)
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Ambiguous
thnx fernoe it like me im very nearly 100 n thnx for the vote
DAmn this was a pretty shitty battle..
Nobody came that hard at all.. u2 were both of flow and structure was horrid. Punches and personals weren't exactly evident. u2 are too obsessed about counting to 3. u2 hardly flowed at all. Vocab wasn't anything impressive. So what it really came down to in the end was emotional depth. Neither of you guys were that deep but I felt that MC Kiwi had more anger pulsing through his fingers when he wrote his verse so im going 2 give this one to him..
Weak fukin battle
Vote- MC KiWi
This battle was weak. Both of yaw didnt have punchlines. I don't even want to embarres yaw less yaw new to rhyme.
MC scib... WTF was you tryin to do. Rhymin from one word like 50 times! seriously made rhymes out of it like 6 times? WTF??? You was weak man. Borin. Read books for real man, increase ya vocabulay and watch a lot of tv. You could get punchlines wacthin tv. And hit the man hard, I know you got some stuff in ya head think. If ya need some cereal and vitimins to help you think do it. weak rhymes try hard next time b.
MC kiwi.. ya name explains ya skills. you is sweeter then a kiwi. Dude you ain't no better then your oppenent, and you had the better chance of winning. Punchlines!!! Punchlines!! Yours sucked. I didn't no girls stung people like a bee? you horrible but keep tryin, i ain't the guy to call you garbage and thats it, keep worjin at it wacth tv read shit get info on the world. increase vocabulary.
Both batles were weak but I give this to fruit man kiwi. change ya name kid, stay up.
You Two Are The Kind Of Mothafucka's That Make English Rap Wack As Fuck..........
Weak as fuck...
MC S - Dude, you need to go to "Extreme Elevation" right now. I'm serious, that was fuckin' wack as hell. No creativity, no punches, nothing. I can't even comment on the flow or structure coz it's just not a fuckin' proper verse. Ugh elevate. Work on everything. And stop repeating the same rhymes over and over again. It's fuckin' annoying.
MC Kiwi - That was wack too. You need to go to "Extreme Elevation" with your fellow wack partner. But at least you came harder than him lol. At least your verse made sense, unlike his. You had no punches, everything was wack. Elevate son. Work on everything. Read the tutorials in RB Help Center.
V/Kiwi
Don't hit my battles up.