No d/r, crew, hate votes
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U spit 1st - U have an hour
I spit one hour after you
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No d/r, crew, hate votes
10 - 16 lines max.
U spit 1st - U have an hour
I spit one hour after you
I could've sworn I saw a check-in from you earlier. How the fuck did it get deleted?
checkin in
for the first time
i have an hour from now...
so you can have two hours
ahah
14...match me Amir...ahahah
i love facing arabs - red dots snipe your forehead
with more hair on your back...
...then on the top of your head
reppin' your squad up - but you squat when you piss
and your rep here's squat - so when you talk you get dissed
you aint lethal youse a bitch - and you ask how come?
cuz your the type a dude to make a text albulm...
i thought you arabians hated americans right?
but you find yourself jerkin off to your avatar everynight?
i guess being a camel-jockey its easy to make an enemy
but fourteen in dubai....
...shouldnt you be blowing up an embassy?
thats why your not a friend to me - your suicidal tendencies
make one thing clear - sand niggers can never be emcees...
one more thing
what do you call and arabic virgin like this fag?
oh yeh - a camel that can run faster then an A-Rab
You should consider addin' "gay" to your name.... i guess it will suit ya/
Dont worry folks, even if "killing" was his karma.... he still cant shoot ya//
His verse sucks, so he thinks that the only way to merk me is to swear/
Yeah Im growin a beard bitch, but you, you're still countin' ur pubic hair//
I just fuckin realized... everyone on RB would be gay, if this was ur house/
He chose that avy coz it reminds him of how wide he can open his mouth*//
You've just entered the battle field, and u dont know that im ready to kill?/
I'll blow u up into so many pieces... more than a bank's value of dollar bills!//
Bitch, the deadly look in my eyes will make ur blood flow completely stop/
You're such a lil' pussy, before u check in this battle... you actually knock//
I really can't believe I fuckin' stooped to a level so low to battle a lil hoe/
Know wht bitch?I can't see shit when u submit, coz u can't spit, u blow//
But I guess ur already use to that*, since u asked us if we wana feel this/Quote:
Originally Posted by Karma `Shootya
& plz stop right there, we dont wana knw how u felt Kayne's Lovely Penis*//
Explanations
1st * - When he sucks dick
2nd * - Read the line before, when he "blows", he's use to blow jobs.
3rd * - "I felt his LP" = Lovely Penis lol
lol at you explaining that...
i didnt know that a wide open mouth was in refrence to me sucking dick...
and LP stnads for Long Penis?
thanks for the info
uppp....
^^That LP thing was a joke... so stfu lol...
Uppin' #1
Uppin' #2.........................................
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bam
bam
bam
Uppin' #3.........................................
Can we get some fuckin' votes?
Uppin' #4.........................................
aiteee simple man
fuck hahah Y khan can rip us
first OFF if ya tried ya whole Life ya WouldnT ya bitch Im an arab and yeaH bitch Id keep fuckiN ya ass Over and over till ya quit spittin wack
NOW let me break dis battle DOwn?
Flow: Tied Both Were niceee ....ACtuaLLy khan was a BIT simpler
Punches: Lmao no doUBT Karma at leats he had sum! UNlike khan Bytch talKIN lil gay nurserY punches wtf is that u must be fuck Insecure to relate all ur punches 2 fags and gayness what a trick
Metaz: NONEEE didnt see anY good ONes ....Khan had 1 GOOd One bUT stIll weak
about da checkin IN and knock LOL
Enjoyment: Tied
Vote: KArma
p.s and karma stop ya fuckiN racist shyt woNT ya
arabs dis and arabs THAt before a real holdin It down rips ya so CHill wid ya sand nygga cant be emcees fuckin stereo types
i should add that im arabic to - which is why i did all that arab shit - cuz i never had the chance to do it before...Quote:
Originally Posted by ~KeMiKaL%WzA~
reppin Damascus!
This battle sucked.
It was horrible.
But it was clear who won.
Karma had the better verse, punches and personals were better than Lethal's.
But still, you gotta make your verses better. The strcuture was horrible and the flow was bad too. The only thing that won you this is that lethal came beyond horrible. All of his lines were simple and most were sex lines. Sex lines are a no-no. Anyways, Thats why karma wins. Elevate and read some vets battles.
V/Karma
I didn't really like this battle either.....
Karma had some OK punches but none really hit that hard. His flow was OK and he needs to work on some wordplay. Other than that he had an average verse.....
Lethal wasn't that good in this battle. His punches weren't really there at all. He could use some shorter lines and his wordplay kinda sucked too. Also, don't explain anything as blatent as what you did. If I'm not gonna get your punch, you need to word it better, simple as that.....
Vote - Karma......he had the more well rounded verse
Return the favor.....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=130655
aite karma cool damascus
that aint far from where IM at
RepPIn Cairo
Uppin' #5...
Lol at you dissin' me coz I'm an arab when you're one too... Anyway, can we get some more votes?
Peace
v/ karma
karma: what can i say..?? your verse was fucking racist....like bannable racist but fucking funny....man that embassy line had me rolling...lol kinda only payed that hes an arab...but still funny ass lines
lethal: your verse was super "eh" nothing special....no punches that stick out....very little creativity and wordplay...very basic stuff..you need massive elevation anyways...you lost
uppin this like r.kelly raped a little girl...
...
Aight im gonna break this bitch down..
Karma- Yall had some good punchlines, and some pretty whack shit as well.. which is why I give you a 8/10.
Why?- I give you 4 points for your stucture.. not too shabby.. I give you 3 points on word play.. not too bad.. and i give u a point on flow. Overall.. u didnt do too bad... but shit.. lay off the arab shit..
Now onto Lethal..
Lethal- Hmmm.. not too great dawg.. but ya did good. You had it simple. You kept it awsome. I didnt mind your flow.. it was hot. So heres what I give ya.. a 7.2 out of 10.
Why?- I give your flow a whopping 4, I give your Word Play.. which wasnt too bad.. but kinda weak.. umm a whopping 2, and ofcourse I give ur structure.. which wasnt too good. a whopping 1.2. Not to shabby dawg. I enjoyed your pretty funny punch lines.. but they were weak.
Overall- I think Lethal Won.. because his flow was better, and he had some pretty funny punch lines..
Oops o! I meant a 8.2 for Lethal.. didnt mean 7.2. Sorry for the mix up yall...
FUCKEN 300 posts to vote.. that sucks.. That pisses me off.. oh well.. Lethal I was gonna vote for u.. oh well..
I DONT KNOW WHAT THE FUCK EVERYONE IS TRIPPIN ON
Karma- yes i agree that u had some OK punches that hit him lightly, your flow wasnt that good but your wordplay made it better, your structure was pretty good, i see u built fine around it but thats ok
Lethal-now this is where i dont know where everyones vote comes from because i think that u had like 3 punches on him and they hit pretty good, its just hard to know when to put sex lines in because not all people consider them punches but I do, so u got my vote
V/Lethal
vote : stubby's a white dude...
CRACKERRRRRRRRRRRRRR!RRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!
CRACKERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!
Lethal Kahn is dq'd for having 4 active battles.