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why my boy once more ...erghhhh lets make it good
Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh... Once again huh..!?
let say... 30 max...
MS BATTLE..!
*plays Beanie Siegle's Truth...*
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Nevermind... I got enough 1's in the verse...
Bribe getting punches off Av 1) cant stand the clown
2) can't give thumbs up..to lines that I handed down...
We're going 30 a'piece, wack dude I'll gas your team
told me to match you, and I will... after the gasoline...
You're the worst period..., face it ya text is dormant
when Bribe hits the pad..... he uses extra absorbant...
My force folds your verse.. stop Av'll crack the mold
ya verse has dots 'n dashes.. it's read in morse code...
In text ya weak bud.., your scared making a pain for it
kid soils his pants, added water n created a rain forest...
and I show no blame..... I guess you aint a hot writer,
true Bribe puts out flame...., as a volunteer firefighter...
n' I won't us a set up................ya already been beat
since you are what you eat, Av's now both ass n' butt...
you remind me of JayZ out there wreckin the sales
minus the flow.. album hype... plus everything else...
yea that line's recycled.. but it'll be the funniest in this
since I used it on Young P... n' can't tell the difference...
simple sentence kid...........of MS Av's best of the batch,
to win you'll need a voting ring, chain n' watch to match...
Rapmusic, then straight to the league... ya done duke
..cus even weak heads didn't take 2 mins to shun you...
I'm fuckin this pussy up quick...fuck uppercuts n' jabs,
cus you'll be back on Av's dick like ghonnorea n' crabs...
my style has aged..? sit down.. let me get you straight
Jac meant Im married to skills the way they past dates...
take a look at ya verse, n' watch ya writing get snuffed
after you lose... blame the e-z boards for hyping you up...
I hope you don't post........................son it's finished
cause when Av show the clutch on his nuts,
..........................Bribe'll still try to come through in it...
*drops mic n' walks away*
^^damn.
^go ahead and spell that with a capitol D.....
Avalon......
(*picks Avs mic up*)
...and serves purpose........
damn Av where u been man, it's such a small world
is it that bad you have to warm up to another mans girl.(peep the sig)
you know whats im talking about, thats how it starts off
but do we need any more evidence that Mr. Av has gone soft
I randomise bullets make 'em in tune with the mind
I spray a second coat, once I see that he's thru with his prime.
I hope voters got that ^ is too complex in the clutch?
but I dont need a Jackson one to say this guys lost his touch.
when i first got here you were the guy to look up to.
but things do change specially when I'm two feet above you
I come Louiville equipped if you try matching my stats
Van Helsing would'nt be close to u, when catching them bats.
in my favor they say the odds are even, so this guys leavin.
but AV brings a long verse to make up for his size given.
hes never been hit this hard to leave the game with stiches
your punches are like our relationship..it's a shame he Miss es.
dude who you faking, witt all the moves you be makin....
here for years and The End........... left you out on the check in...
remember that, only elite who got excluded..
funny we watched you grow to stay the same like Frankie Nunes..
I thought you knew this, That I can also flip a cliche
im colombian and your wife burn foreign rubber ...like a mitsubichi...
yes I'm from there and this match comes courtesy of feeble.
we bring it pure, you just cut it to crack..... to kill your own people..
bribe ain't pleased till AV's done and he quit breathin
says hes got a deal but for some odd reason he's not leavin.
sorry I'm not beleiving, but dude why you frontin for
The painted chapel is the only tale of the Mike I'm falling for.
your head to the floor pretender, arent you a biting offender
well I leave u an exposed cover up like Rumsfelds hidden agenda
Legend type battle. I'm not sure if I can vote on this, but I will if yall want the feedback. First of all, thank you. Thank you for putting something on this board that makes me happy when I read it. Now for the breakdown.
Av:
"You're the worst period..., face it ya text is dormant
when Bribe hits the pad..... he uses extra absorbant..."
Good wordplay here..nice punch really feelin' it.
"simple sentence kid...........of MS Av's best of the batch,
to win you'll need a voting ring, chain n' watch to match..."
I liked this also.
BribeOne:
"I randomise bullets make 'em in tune with the mind
I spray a second coat, once I see that he's thru with his prime.
I hope voters got that ^ is too complex in the clutch?
but I dont need a Jackson one to say this guys lost his touch."
Dope on both punches.
"yes I'm from there and this match comes courtesy of feeble.
we bring it pure, you just cut it to crack..... to kill your own people.."
Lol..dunno exactly why, but I liked this.
"I come Louiville equipped if you try matching my stats
Van Helsing would'nt be close to u, when catching them bats."
Although it wasn't a personal I liked the wordplay here a lot. Nice new non-played punch. Obviously it aint played cuz Van Helsing just came out.
Av:Pretty good flow..and easy read. Sometimes you didn't rhyme to me. "My force folds your verse.. stop Av'll crack the mold
ya verse has dots 'n dashes.. it's read in morse code..." Mold and Code don't rhyme..not even in audio really. And then the ass-n-butt line. Good punches, however I only saw a couple personals in there. Nice use of wordplay tho..multis..n all that dope shit.
BribeOne:Best flow out of the two. Best personals out of the two. My fav punch of the battle was definitely that 4 liner I quoted. When I first read Av's verse I thought you were done, but you came through and won. You also had a line that didn't rhyme too. Cliche and Mitsubishi dont rhyme. Cliche is prnounced kleeshay.
Again, dope battle.
V/ BribeOne
Both came great, I must say. One of
the best battles in a while. I just think
Av came more original. Dope battle still
fellas. Av was just more consistent.
v/ Av
Mystery had his mind made up before the battle.
But he did choose the right person.
Vote-Avalon
And in all honestly, I usually dont compliment anyone, but Av is nice. Bribe came good but Avalon was consistent with his punches..and they were effective..real effective. Good read.
nevermind... 2-1...
Av took it...
decent battle here kids
bitch dont ever comment on my mind and noQuote:
Originally Posted by Action
I didnt have it made up. I read all of Bribes
verse to make sure it was fair n legit. Av's was
just better. That's all I could say.
^ Ex MS representer... You can always tell who we are...
true
stop followin me punk... I'll still slap shit outta you... :-D
v/ Av
Bribe came good, but av came very creative
and original and I just overall felt he had a bigger
impact on bribe than bribe did on av
Yea..like alot of people have been saying..this was a very good battle.
Both came pretty nice..with some creative and hard-hitting punches and personals to fill in their verses. Bribeone came much better than he did last week..so i'm assuming he wasn't trying last week.
Having said that..i'm going to say Avalon edged Bribe. I say this based on the fact that AV had some damn creative punches...and had a few more hard-hitting ones.
Close battle though../v Av
Motherfuckin shit...
This is really Legendary, peeps.
One of the best, hardest hitting in quite some time.
I'm not going into it, way too many quotables.
Kudos, Bribe, that was fuckin tight.
But Av takes it by just being crazy creative with those punches.
Fuckin rainforest...
Winner: Av
Peace
Av. it's 2-2 now overall im keeping score ..lol
good battle man. and thanks everyone for the good feedback.
remember that, only elite who got excluded..
funny we watched you grow to stay the same like Frankie Nunes..
LMAO
i had a tear in my when i read that shit
Props to both tho, but i think im going with Bribe on this shit
Pz.
okay..i'll vote..
i ain't quotin and shit...but i'll put it like this..
when i read Av's...i was like....yup..still same ol' Av wit the ill ass
punches and wordplay..verse was nice...not suprised..i know u slut
but..
i never seen bribe come like this...especially no 30 liner....dukes came
nice as fuck...his personals were insane..okay i gotta quote this..
damn Av where u been man, it's such a small world
is it that bad you have to warm up to another mans girl
lol...shit was funny and nicely delivered...also..Bribe matched u
with that wordplay and punches..the Jackson line..the prime line,
all that shit was nice...i'm actually impressed Bribe..seriously..
i'd still beat u...but nonetheless...shit was ill :thumbup:
good battle to both of my bitches..
v/Bribe
*knows Av*
*leaves room rappin*
*'u can hate me now....cuz i won't stop now...cuz i can't stop now...
u can hate me nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnow'*
:thumbup:
im going with Bribe on this one even though it was a close battle i was just feeling his creativity alot more came with dope personals..and punches..
realy dont think its an Awesome battle..
EDIT....Red the verse's again and changed my mind..
Quote:
Originally Posted by RASCAL
coming from the guy who can actually lose a battle...to himself
im tired dont pick on me it 1:30am hear ill read it again for the 3rd time tomorrow and it will hit me...
dont pick on me im 15-8 now :p
Avalon
Bribe getting punches off Av 1) cant stand the clown
2) can't give thumbs up..to lines that I handed down...
In text ya weak bud.., your scared making a pain for it
kid soils his pants, added water n created a rain forest...
n' I won't us a set up................ya already been beat
since you are what you eat, Av's now both ass n' butt...
yea that line's recycled.. but it'll be the funniest in this
since I used it on Young P... n' can't tell the difference...
simple sentence kid...........of MS Av's best of the batch,
to win you'll need a voting ring, chain n' watch to match...
Rapmusic, then straight to the league... ya done duke
..cus even weak heads didn't take 2 mins to shun you...
I hope you don't post........................son it's finished
cause when Av show the clutch on his nuts,
..........................Bribe'll still try to come through in it...
Bribeone
damn Av where u been man, it's such a small world
is it that bad you have to warm up to another mans girl
I hope voters got that ^ is too complex in the clutch?
but I dont need a Jackson one to say this guys lost his touch.
when i first got here you were the guy to look up to.
but things do change specially when I'm two feet above you
remember that, only elite who got excluded..
funny we watched you grow to stay the same like Frankie Nunes..
bribe ain't pleased till AV's done and he quit breathin
says hes got a deal but for some odd reason he's not leavin.
sorry I'm not beleiving, but dude why you frontin for
The painted chapel is the only tale of the Mike I'm falling for.
your head to the floor pretender, arent you a biting offender
well I leave u an exposed cover up like Rumsfelds hidden agenda
Both had the same amount of lines i liked..but that Frankie Nunes was straight fire...thats what took it for me yo
damn gosh darn doggie its 6-5 him
Bribe getting punches off Av 1) cant stand the clown
2) can't give thumbs up..to lines that I handed down...
cool
We're going 30 a'piece, wack dude I'll gas your team
told me to match you, and I will... after the gasoline...
heard it.. like ten times..
You're the worst period..., face it ya text is dormant
when Bribe hits the pad..... he uses extra absorbant...
ehh
My force folds your verse.. stop Av'll crack the mold
ya verse has dots 'n dashes.. it's read in morse code...
above avg
In text ya weak bud.., your scared making a pain for it
kid soils his pants, added water n created a rain forest...
lol
and I show no blame..... I guess you aint a hot writer,
true Bribe puts out flame...., as a volunteer firefighter...
couldve rhymed better, wording maybe.
n' I won't us a set up................ya already been beat
since you are what you eat, Av's now both ass n' butt...
ok .
you remind me of JayZ out there wreckin the sales
minus the flow.. album hype... plus everything else...
at first i was like.. i saw u use this..
yea that line's recycled.. but it'll be the funniest in this
since I used it on Young P... n' can't tell the difference...
then i knew i'd seen it and laughed, good lines.
simple sentence kid...........of MS Av's best of the batch,
to win you'll need a voting ring, chain n' watch to match...
nice..
Rapmusic, then straight to the league... ya done duke
..cus even weak heads didn't take 2 mins to shun you...
ok
I'm fuckin this pussy up quick...fuck uppercuts n' jabs,
cus you'll be back on Av's dick like ghonnorea n' crabs...
nah.. kinda dissed urself almost..
my style has aged..? sit down.. let me get you straight
Jac meant Im married to skills the way they past dates...
avg.
take a look at ya verse, n' watch ya writing get snuffed
after you lose... blame the e-z boards for hyping you up...
ha, amusing.
I hope you don't post........................son it's finished
cause when Av show the clutch on his nuts,
..........................Bribe'll still try to come through in it...
nah .
damn Av where u been man, it's such a small world
is it that bad you have to warm up to another mans girl.(peep the sig)
lol! ..
you know whats im talking about, thats how it starts off
but do we need any more evidence that Mr. Av has gone soft
ok
I randomise bullets make 'em in tune with the mind
I spray a second coat, once I see that he's thru with his prime.
sounded like some jay z shit..avg
I hope voters got that ^ is too complex in the clutch?
but I dont need a Jackson one to say this guys lost his touch.
ok
when i first got here you were the guy to look up to.
but things do change specially when I'm two feet above you
above you lines are played... this one wasnt bad...
I come Louiville equipped if you try matching my stats
Van Helsing would'nt be close to u, when catching them bats.
cool..
in my favor they say the odds are even, so this guys leavin.
but AV brings a long verse to make up for his size given.
nice
hes never been hit this hard to leave the game with stiches
your punches are like our relationship..it's a shame he Miss es.
good... i had to ask on aim why the hell the miss and es were separate.. apparently for dumb kids to make sense of it lmao..
dude who you faking, witt all the moves you be makin....
here for years and The End........... left you out on the check in...
this doesnt rhyme?
remember that, only elite who got excluded..
funny we watched you grow to stay the same like Frankie Nunes..
abv avg
I thought you knew this, That I can also flip a cliche
im colombian and your wife burn foreign rubber ...like a mitsubichi...
ehh
yes I'm from there and this match comes courtesy of feeble.
we bring it pure, you just cut it to crack..... to kill your own people..
ok
bribe ain't pleased till AV's done and he quit breathin
says hes got a deal but for some odd reason he's not leavin.
good
sorry I'm not beleiving, but dude why you frontin for
The painted chapel is the only tale of the Mike I'm falling for.
hmm.... ?
your head to the floor pretender, arent you a biting offender
well I leave u an exposed cover up like Rumsfelds hidden agenda
ok...
overall... both these verses were very close... i thought this battle to tell u the truth was good... but not legendary. it may be close to a nomination for legends but i dont think it was good enough... according to me there were plenty of ehh lines as well as good ones.
vote -?
i have to re read, be back later
if you hoes do topical vote on my topical battle..
feeble vs. sureal in write of passage
:( im cool with both of you, but that rainforest line had me rolling
vote Av
but much respect to Bribe
p.s. the mitsubishi line was fucking nice
7-5 Av...
God damn. Beaute.
V/ Av.
in a good ass battle... AV wins..
Bribe loses..
both of you are basically in season already, unless you pull some no shows.
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