kautious vs the judge

10 lines
time limit= 30 min to 45 minutes
i don't have time dsplay s withing the hour max.

all rules...no crew votes especially.

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in.................................be quick cus im going to be

The cold killa's back..still light to punch like a feather
"no crew votes especially"...dn't rub it in..
..o shit you ent bin in 1 ever
records 23-21 lol...what you trying to be born to kill?
glad The Good Bad and Ugly thread is up..
..cus good is a strugle for him to forfill
i spit ill..so watch this herd feeling nautios
you havn't drop'd in a while..so i spose im a lil over Kautious
asking for votes in your sig...is were herbs begin
but your response is always.."want me to vote if i didnt u win?"
you can see ive elavted alot man..and youve stayed put
ill give you a kick up the ass..and i ent talking bt u fucking my foot


thats enuf

i dunno bout mine lol

Rape this junior champ. You a bitch flashing a title n I got a numerical stamp…
You up for this battle wit fire? He starves 4 for biting lines like concentration camps…
This judge hitting the wood… on caskets…. I got em sentenced to 10 lines and death… cut out yea lungs for your hands… braise yea self… kid catch yea breath!…
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you’ll neva get passed me, so I’ll leave you n yea crew with shock value
n with a ‘k-o’ it’s hard to get people to vote with a dick in the ass on pal view… (pm list)
seeing how I lyrically sever this mans neck, like terrorists recoding a sharp statement…
N you quick to kiss the ground when praying for a win…I’ll have yea hugging the pavement…

So fuck a judge. you a net bitch with dick riders rod
You can never be the LLL.Champ… n why you the judge? You could elevate n still not be god.

meh lol lets see....

sorry if mine looks liek alot but my lines is a lil stretched cuz i did it on microsoft word. i can neva tell how long it will be.
want me to take sum out?

also since you didnt' have explenations i wont give any but i hope everyone gets it. theirs alot of metas and personals

na we coo but it took ages to rite.lol.......1st..

gotta go wid The Judge on this 1, kautios' lines were gd but they were streched an there were hardly ne punches...

Aight. This is a hard battle because both of you were pretty ok actually.

Judge-I know alot of people are structuring their pieces like that but you definetely ruined it. It completely threw off your flow and rhyme scheme. Big downer for you man. Punches were below decent but very original, I felt as though they were forced a bit. I was very unimpressed by your piece, especially considering all the good things i heard about your battles. Rhyme scheme was decent. Flow was off sometimes and it was hurt by the structure. Vocabulary was horrible, I'm not sure if you spelled all those words wrong on purpose. theres no such word as forfrill. Overall id give yours a 4.5/10

K-yours was better overall. Your rhyme scheme was eh, iffy but still better than the judges. Your structure was also a bit off but still better than judges again. Your structure didnt disrupt the flow like his did. Punches wern't as original as judges but original isnt always better, K had the overall better lines. I felt that was a strange turn in the match. Well overall, Id give you a 7/10

Vote-Katious

Judge VS Kautious who next time should write his verse in something else than Word...try posting directly in the thread it works better...breaking the verses down...The Judge your opener was good,nice personal punch on the crew deal...the second line was medium meaning that the punch could of had a more relevant setup to it...third line was your best I think actually I'll quote it

Quote:

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i spit ill..so watch this herd feeling nautios
you havn't drop'd in a while..so i spose im a lil over Kautious

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nice solid punch and personal....the fourth bar was a filler slash weak punch and the closer...well the closer had the concept dead on but could of been worded a bit better...
Kautious didn't like your opener the setup and attempted punch didn't connect at all...the second wasn't a punch the lung deal wasn't going anywhere...if you thought that mentioning Shock Value and Fusion crew battles was a personal you're dead wrong...the battles aren't even up yet they are due Tuesday!That really didn't have much sense....I guess there was a concept behind your fourth bar but you kind of blew it with the wording.The closer was straight out wack...and stretched to death.
I don't think there is anything to be added...Judge takes this one for at least having some real punches

Vote The Judge

Judge...
Best Line:
The cold killa's back..still light to punch like a feather
"no crew votes especially"...dn't rub it in..
..o shit you ent bin in 1 ever
you so mean

Worst:
i spit ill..so watch this herd feeling nautios
you havn't drop'd in a while..so i spose im a lil over Kautious
alright wordplay but..iffy


Kautious...
Best Line:
This judge hitting the wood… on caskets…. I got em sentenced to 10 lines and death… cut out yea lungs for your hands… braise yea self… kid catch yea breath!…
pretty good

Worst Line:
So fuck a judge. you a net bitch with dick riders rod
You can never be the LLL.Champ… n why you the judge? You could elevate n still not be god.
would of been good..worded differntly

Vote-Judge

Judge took this one because he had harder punches...kautious your lines were vague and diden't really concentrate on dissing judge personally...try to get more personals...that's all battles are today basically...over nice battle though...peace.

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yo check it...TJ had nice flow...i seen it...
right off the bat i knew K gunna have a shitty 1
cuz right when i seen ya struc ya wordplay was fucked
so it cost ya a lot of points in my department...
i liked the wittyness that TJ had...decent shit...
didnt see to much wittyness from K...which is to bad
i felt TJ pulled off punches...i felt they landed harder...
as for K was throwing some but the hit weak at points
personals n this battle were kinda blah but both had em
slightly n favor of TJ...id like to see more multis form both
but overall TJ won this battle just had better performance

vote on my battles please...

3rd....................i.t if i forget get at me on aim and ill put an honest vote down............

judge is fucking dope...................killed him but i cant vote so..he he

^brend you make me laugh lol....................now get of my comp and go home...4th

Easy to decide...

Judge
Not the best I've seen from you but still had nice punches and personals. Best was the opener and your worst was the Born To Kill-Forfill one in my opinion. I spotted the flow and it was actually quite good but structure was all over the place. But overall good job...

Kautious
You aint elavated since I beat ya months ago it seems. You still have the potental but your wordin your punches and personals wrong. Don't use MS Word.....for obvious reasons. Flow was choppy too. But stay at it...

Overall I vote Judge for an overall better verse

5th sum1 please close this shit/..................thanks everyone for the votes

vote- judge

Reason:
Judge- ur spit just look better in every way. Ur verse was easily red, and had alot better flow. Structure was aight, not the best but aight. Didnt really effect the flow of ya verse. Ya vocab was good as well, nothin special. Punches landed pretty good. And personals was set up aight, and then whent he punch came around, it ended up being good.

Now Kautious- ya verse was really hard to read. It seemed like ya verse was jumping everywhere. I couldnt really read through ya verse good. Ya structure and wordplay a huge part in why ya verse had sorry flow, i suggest better structure for the near future. Vocab was not bad. Personals were straight, nothin special.

Vote- Judge

hey judge hit ma future topical up when me and the other kat spit, thanks.