you know the rules :gfy:
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you know the rules :gfy:
hu spits first n plus i didnt even no i was in this battle
shall i spit forst neway even if u aint gunna tell me
well i remember wen i was at skool//
i met a boy just like you//
had no mates thought he was a 1 man crew//
wen to a church and sat in his own pew//
didnt think it was deep back then//
then i met u, a grown twin of him//
the other day i thought i saw your mum, is her name kim//
if it is all she sed was my sons a dickhead//
cant i change that prick for him//
in the bakers//
i saw you-hu//
you only had a few//
wen i mean few//
i meant pheeew//
i didnt catch ur rabies//
from your babies//
im mc scibidy//
ive sent you all silly//
later on//
tell ur mum ill be round at 1//
MC_Scibidy/
wheres your remedy-your rymes are so wack its easy to find your tendencies//
What kind of name is SCIBIDY ill cut that shit like piccolo then call you babidi//
Fuck this shit wheres your real hobbies-rappings not your better off smoking a pound of weed//
So you believe you saw my mum a/
well its ok I fuck your sister an pregnated your mum today//
I think you need to stop rapping and pick a new name/
Scibidy's lame some other guy had that name/
Found out 2 years later he was insane//
You better off raping against rookies/
You might just win by giving them milk and cookies//
Now I think this battle is over/
Because Scibidy I made a meal out of ya/
and gave my dog the leftovers//
Ready for Votes Anyone............................
some1 vote plz cos there was no point in actually writing tht if no one is gunna vote
cmon this is so stupid that no one votes
safe if u do
cmon people vote for at least 1 of us for fuck sake
Uppin For Votes...................................
Votes Please......................................
cmon some1 vote please beacuse otherwise this battle was pointless dont you think?
a lame battle really both flows wernt that good, neither were personals or punches, but outta the two ive gotta say Gs was better he made more to the point perosnals, scibidy your verse to the end really went off real bad using a basic rhyme scheme and you were forcing the personals out with the basic rhyme scheme for example......
you only had a few//
wen i mean few//
i meant pheeew//
i didnt catch ur rabies//
from your babies//
your really forcing it out by sayin rabies then babies at the end, of you know what i meen, but anyways my vote goes to gills sorry scibidy,pz.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=129868
sorry forgot to drop my fuckin link again but its in my sig anyways.
and mc scibidy your only allowed to post once more in here, you post more than five times after your battle and you will be DQ'd, so wait till your battle sinks low down in this forum before usin your last post, just abit of advice for ya,pz.
i agree with AK here pretty shit battle,
scibidy man, u just try and push rhyming words out like content doesn't matter, you need to elevate, get some meta's, some good punches and some good personals goin. Ryhmin few with few and then pheew,
just far too simple really, get some creativity.
gills your shit wasn't much better. Although you had a better flow and u had some personals in there. There were some fucking lame lines tho, like "milk and cookies". Although i have to give it to ya for a better flow, structure and content generally.
V/ Gills
PS. Vote up my battle with Scibidy once he spits back
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...30386#poststop
Ok, I'm gonna vote cuz scibidy wants to battle me
Vote-Gills
Scibidy-This was fucking pathetic. I seriuosly think you are retarted. I cant explain how much you suck, but you do. You had like 2 attempted punches that came up with nothing, and you had nothing else even mentioning. Dont even try to elevate, you cant
Gills- This was pretty wack also. I thought you would merk this herb, but i stand corrected. The only reason you got my vote is because scibidy was so wack. You had some attempted personals, like the "im pregnating your momma" line. No punches connected, and struc was fucked. Elevate.
ok uppin for more votes thread is slowing down....
I agree with Rip and AK, this battle was a waste. I mean im new at this shit and my rhymes are way more interesting. They both were slacking personals and punches, but I can say that Gills gave an effort, and McScruffy was shitty.
vote...Gills
i agree totally this was a shit battle, both you need to read other battles, see hoe its done... personal punches make a decent battle.. simlpe as.. do your research... but one has to win, so...
.....im gonna have to vote Gills, it wasnt good, but jus the structure , setting up the punches was better,,, and they hit silghtly harder... both work on it..... cos nuthing quotable was there, or any wit.....
I aree with the other two i didnt feel any structure from either side, but i do think that scibidy had like one more punch than gills and considering the fact that i really dont think that either side was that good. then that one punch cost u gills
V-Scibidy
but stubby u got to vote blad unless u aint got eno posts
gills easily wins this...MC man yurs was whack...
u had all filler duke...really u did man...sorry...
gills man u attempted more thats why u won...
but dont think for a second that ur verse was good
cuz man it was also whack...u had hella filler...
so both of u stop that and use punches...shit...
and personals...the two basic components to win
plus u have to have good wordplay wit all that...etc.
so in contradiction to that both of u fix yur strucs...
vote/gills...hit my battles up man please...1...