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lets get ready to rumbleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!
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Checkin' in,
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OPENER
Its Rapid...my auto spits Caps Sick...Fallin overboard Drastic.....
Epithet Gets consumed by TitalWave like Bass boats in Oceans Collapsin
yeah ok there
Your no match in a battle...Fuck slangin the Heat i beat this kid with Rocks
Your Crew won't say but i will.....YOU NEED TO THINK SOMEWHERE Besides the BOX
Pandoras Ashamed of you ...shit your more less a Stain on there Roster......
Steelin ya Ego quicker then Championships with a Bloodied up BARRY FOSTER
your confused at that Last line I know cause your lackin the intelligents.....
Your Fag to a T..cause this Kids Spits the ALPHABET when Swallowing CONDEM-Mints
Closer
Your Carrer when Down hill...wihtout brakes your Name is definantly Fiction.....
Cause car chases end in Crashes Like your Attempt at Porn star Wrecked-Ignitions
signed and served....NEXT
rofl...
i'm not in Pandora....hoemoe
duke, u obiviously lack comprehension,
of yer idiocy and its just plain tragic...
so theres no pun intended, im speaking literally...
when i say go play in traffic..
cuz' a laughing stock is all u are,
tard, yer blatantly wack and i mean this..
but i guess u cant expect much more...
when your spits make Dipset look genius
and it seems shit bears a striking resemblence
2 yer drops, though u still stink worse...
herb, yer persona merely suggests u blow...
so you confirmed it w/ yer verse
cuz merked is an adjective commonly used,
to describe how u often end up...
2 come dope, nimo's got about as much of a chance...
as J-lo signing a pre-nup
so slut, just cut yer fuckin wrist,
and save your self the shame...
kid, you'll never be more than a bitch..
thats synonymous with lame
it looks like more than ten...
but its just the structure...
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yeah werd nice verse homie.....g'luck you prolly got it though.....nice spit No beef
werd.............................................. ...up
Against me...
aight this battle was decent...
FIRST OF ALL-ÞAÝÑîMØ
How could you mess up wit wat crew he in.man that made you lose a point.
"Your no match in a battle...Fuck slangin the Heat i beat this kid with Rocks
Your Crew won't say but i will.....YOU NEED TO THINK SOMEWHERE Besides the BOX Pandoras Ashamed of you ...shit your more less a Stain on there Roster......
Steelin ya Ego quicker then Championships with a Bloodied up BARRY FOSTER
"
this line really messed u up///
ur punches were not that strong.structure and flow was decent.ur verse was okay.
Second-Epithet
that was a nyce verse.
"cuz' a laughing stock is all u are,
tard, yer blatantly wack and i mean this..
but i guess u cant expect much more...
when your spits make Dipset look genius
and it seems shit bears a striking resemblence
2 yer drops, though u still stink worse...
herb, yer persona merely suggests u blow...
so you confirmed it w/ yer verse
cuz merked is an adjective commonly used,
to describe how u often end up...
2 come dope, nimo's got about as much of a chance...
as J-lo signing a pre-nup
so slut, just cut yer fuckin wrist,
and save your self the shame...
kid, you'll never be more than a bitch..
thats synonymous with lame"
i thought that the punches came from this line.STRUCTure was okay,DECENT.FLOW was DECENT.shouldn't make it so confusing.man ur verse was kind of difficult to read.Though punches were good,DECENT.
VOTE--Epithet
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sorry for triple posting........................................... ..........................
u got the idea.............................................. ......................
Decent battle we got here....
Epithet - I'm tellin' you from now, change your structure COMPLETELY. Seriously dawg, that structure was just wack. Your flow was ok, but could've been better. Good punches, this one made me laugh(since I hate Dipshit)
"tard, yer blatantly wack and i mean this..
but i guess u cant expect much more...
when your spits make Dipset look genius"
LMAO!!! But you also could've made 'em more creative. And try rhyming more. Plus don't always use the ABAB rhyme style in a TEXT battle, coz a reader might take a while to read it... Then he wouldn't notice it rhymed.
P - Decent verse you got there. Flow was almost perfect, had a few stretched lines though. Easy to read, punches definitely hit him hard. That's why you won this battle. You should work on your flow though. Like I said, it was a good verse. Liked the structure too.
Vote - P
^^^ima say that those were ur two best lines.......nice wordplay.......not really a punch though......overall ur verse was ok......u lost a lot of leverage cause hes not in pandoras.....so that made like two of ur lines fake personals......but ur lines were stretched bruh, u should take em down......flow was decent......there were some tight metas......wordplay was pretty good......not to many punches.....only a few connected......the only personals u had were fake, so whateva........Quote:
Originally Posted by ÞAÝÑîMØ
^^^ima say those were ur two best lines.......had some nice wordplay......punch didnt really hit that hard, but it was good.......overall ur verse was pretty good.....i wasnt feelin ya structure......i got lost quite a bit......so in my views that also affected ur flow, and made it fall off......u didnt have very many metas.......wordplay was pretty nice.......u had some punches that connected nicely......no personals......Quote:
Originally Posted by Epithet
Overall -
Epithet came with more, and better, wordplay and punches....while paynimo had a better flow and metas, so basing off of that.....epithet gets my vote.....
VOTE - EPITHET
ill come back and poll after at least one of u leaves an honest vote on the first link in my sig
v/ epi cuz he came harder, his punches were alot wittier, i saw some attempts at multies( even though i dont like multies) not much wordplay or personals.... i personally liked the make dipset look genious line......... pay, bad name, bad flow, poorly made multies.... punches that forgot to connect..........
v/ epi
Quote:
And try rhyming more. Plus don't always use the ABAB rhyme style in a TEXT battle, coz a reader might take a while to read it... Then he wouldn't notice it rhymed.
its not that hard to follow...Quote:
wasnt feelin ya structure......i got lost quite a bit......so in my views that also affected ur flow, and made it fall off
i just split my lines in half...
besides, its the punches that matter,
not structure or flow...
^^that would explain y i said u won.....
....though my vote has yet to be polled.....
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Its Rapid...my auto spits Caps Sick...Fallin overboard Drastic.....
Epithet Gets consumed by TitalWave like Bass boats in Oceans Collapsin
^^good wordplay, no real punch
yeah ok there
Your no match in a battle...Fuck slangin the Heat i beat this kid with Rocks
Your Crew won't say but i will.....YOU NEED TO THINK SOMEWHERE Besides the BOX
^^false personal, 1st line played
Pandoras Ashamed of you ...shit your more less a Stain on there Roster......
Steelin ya Ego quicker then Championships with a Bloodied up BARRY FOSTER
^^1st line false personal,2nd line no
your confused at that Last line I know cause your lackin the intelligents.....
Your Fag to a T..cause this Kids Spits the ALPHABET when Swallowing CONDEM-Mints
ok closer..but not real great at all
Closer
Your Carrer when Down hill...wihtout brakes your Name is definantly Fiction.....
Cause car chases end in Crashes Like your Attempt at Porn star Wrecked-Ignitions
horrible closer...no hate just not feelin it at all
duke, u obiviously lack comprehension,
of yer idiocy and its just plain tragic...
so theres no pun intended, im speaking literally...
when i say go play in traffic..
^^ok opener..nothin great
cuz' a laughing stock is all u are,
tard, yer blatantly wack and i mean this..
but i guess u cant expect much more...
when your spits make Dipset look genius
^^lol...nice punch
and it seems shit bears a striking resemblence
2 yer drops, though u still stink worse...
herb, yer persona merely suggests u blow...
so you confirmed it w/ yer verse
^^nice punch again...good flow
cuz merked is an adjective commonly used,
to describe how u often end up...
2 come dope, nimo's got about as much of a chance...
as J-lo signing a pre-nup
^^agh..it was ok, good flow again
so slut, just cut yer fuckin wrist,
and save your self the shame...
kid, you'll never be more than a bitch..
thats synonymous with lame
ok ender...not my fav
PUNCHES...epithet
FLOW...epithet
WORPLAY...epithet
PERSONALS...epithet
VOCAB....epithet
OPENER....epithet
CLOSER...epithet
MULTIES...TIE
STRUCTURE...TIE
OVERALL...epithet
i just thought he had the better verse ...it was pretty onesided...but ya
VOTE...EP
yeah i know...Quote:
posted by Daedal
^^that would explain y i said u won.....
it was aimed more @ Kliff
since it seemed that's what he based his decision on
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ayo good verse i know you won and all but yo hit me up for a collab on aim or yahoo
AIM: damessiah83
yahoo: paynimo
last up................................
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I hate your structurew Paynimo....and lose the multis cause they aint helpin your verse man...they look like they are jus there to be ther eyou know? they dun really help your punches at all...but a decent verse overall..a ferw nice punches...but Epithet is in Po'Ethics not Pandoras Box lol
Epithet...decent verse man....you came with nice punches...and a lot more consistency than your opponent which is what got you the win...you could still be a lil more creative with your punches and personals and meats..but overall a nice verse
Vote=Ep
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