What do you think, 5-8 bars, 3 for KO, 5 to win, no dickriding/biting/etc.... you name the time limit whenev you check in.
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What do you think, 5-8 bars, 3 for KO, 5 to win, no dickriding/biting/etc.... you name the time limit whenev you check in.
waiting on you.........................................
damn a vet skerred to take on a flyweight, well guess thats all for this battle. another no-show, 3 in a row, wtf, i aint that intimidating am i?
No. The rules are as follows:Quote:
Originally Posted by Angry~Cracka
10 lines (5 bars)
5 Votes To Win (No KO)
No DR/Bite/Crew...Etc
30 Mins After Check-In
You Spit 1st
Good Luck!
Checkin in and droppin, sorry it took a while, had to work a lot of overtime lately.....quick keystyle for you, nothing fancy.
Too bad you let me spit first cause you gonna get outversed
I'll be spittin hardcore Biggie while all you gonna spit is Durst
I'm really just cold-hearted, reppin Philly since I started
Kid ya just another Looney tune acting silly and retarded
A quick flow for a murder, using words ya never heard of
When ya see me preach you know my thoughts are the word of
God, so bow down before me, touch your lips to my timb
Perhaps I'll show ya mercy and leave ya a workin limb
Here's your ten lines after ten hours of workin in the sun
Now I'm done, I'm out, finished merking another one
^^ I dropped too cause its like 2:40am so I doubt you'd be on in like 30 min.
whenever you ready........................................
drop by tonite kid or this battles over................
forget this shit, im done with it.................
close this battle, admin chiefs, aint nothing else going to happen with this one..........
Even if your name was Bell it wouldn't help you express your view
I don't understand why you're in such a hurry for me to merk youQuote:
Originally Posted by Angry~Cracka
Cracka? What the fuck? I only wanna see you when it's mealtime
And your verse had so little flow that you dehydrated your rhymes
Stop begging for admins to close this. Did you realize your mistake?
Your hope of winning this is like glass because it's easy to break
And why are you so angry? Be a man and learn to take the heat
It's a everyday thing on R.B. for newbies like yourself to get beat
Now you can hop of my dick bitch and don't ever bother me again
I wasn't battling you for the challenge, I just wanted my 13th win
Uppin 1.
Leave a link.
^^^prolly ur two best lines......first line was pointless.....second line didnt hit as a punch.....overall ur verse wasnt good at all....structure was good.....flow was nice.....no metas......no wordplay.....punches hit nothin but air......no personals.....Quote:
Originally Posted by Angry~Cracka
^^^those were ur best lines......good wordplay and the punch was pretty good.....overall ur verse was pretty good.....structure was good......flow was on target......some metas.....wordplay was nice......most of ya punches connected......personals were decent.....Quote:
Originally Posted by E-MORTAL
Overall -
E-MORTAL had a better flow.....more, and better, metas and wordplay.....his punches and personals both connected......angry didnt have metas or wordplay, and his punches and personals didnt connect.....so basing off of that, E-MORTAL gets my vote.....
VOTE - E-MORTAL
Uppin 2.
I don't have enough posts to vote but please know that E-Mprtal killed this with wit, much harder punches and a good clowning style. Kracka threw one decent line with his opener and then went completely soft and silly, "looney tunes"...please.
No contest, E...
Please hit my battle in return vs. The Judge.
Vote- E-Mortal
Cracka- Not good at all. As Daedal said, your first 2 lines were pointless. In fact, most of your lines were pointless. Decent struc and flow, but the rest was horrible. Only decent line was your retarded looney tunes line. You need more punches and more personals. Elevate.
E- Good verse. You had hard hitting personals, and you made Cracka look bad. Good punches, but I thought your bars were too long, they could've been shortened. Your verse was funny, and you easily beat him. I just think you need shorter lines, but otherwise no complaints.
Return the favor:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=129603
he was a lil sad that you made him wait and with his distress signals you used for personals....
my link: http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=129959
this was one sided.
craka-you didn't come with alot... you need sumthign more. it seemed more of a audio freestyle then a text. nothing really to say about it.
emortal- you spat pure personals on this man and thats what took it. the craka meal time line was good had me chukkling and thats why basicly i saw this as one sided cuz you had me on the enjoyment.
craka- you need to come harder with yea verse.
what the hell is with all these crakas?
lmao
Uppin 3.
Uppin 4.
Leave a link.
Last uppin...so vote.
hmmmmmmmmmmm..............I don't know, they both good
ok this was a good battle...
Cracker- First off, get a name chane newb. Second of all, no wonder you wanted a admin or mod to close this cuz your verse was horrifing. punches were brutal, they didnt hit him at all. you need to up your punches more. Personals need work also. They need to mak me laugh or there not good. They didnt make me laugh. Flow was off and structure was ok just work on it.
E Mortal had a good verse. Punches were a lil but played but they hit him. you didnt need to come hard,l you didnt but you still won this battle., FLow was good and structrue was good also. Personals hit also. Good job.
Cracka...just keep workin at it...you got some potemntial...eleavte
V. E Mortal...Go Poll
Wasn't too pleased with this battle.....
Cracka wasn't that good. He didn't eally have any punches. He was beefing himself up instead of dissing his opponent......not a wise choice in a battle. His flow was OK but he had no wit behind any of his lines......
E-Mortal was OK. He had a few punches that hit but most were just average. His flow was OK and his attempts at wit weren't bad, just needed to be reworded a little.....
Vote - E-Mortal