10 lines
no d/r
no cheating
u know the rest
just you go first
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10 lines
no d/r
no cheating
u know the rest
just you go first
checkin in........................................
come on homie just check in at least
then spit after
sorry man havent been on the net for a while. will post my verse tomoz so im checking in now
well i had more time than i thought here ya go!!
i dont need any puches, we all laugh at ya flow
i'll fuck this bitch up like im under a ho
after i make a pancake, i'll take you on
then i'll go to your wake and tell your mum i killed your son
i know your type, like to fight, when its light
but come out at night, and on sight, i'll kill you with two lefts and a right
he hated 2pac so much he became a bigomist
now he has to pay two child support checks, he's realy pissed
he's got many tricks,he's so ill it makes me feel elated
but like the matrix, its all computer generated
i would of preferd to do more lines but this will do for my first
Ready..Bitch...Fire
My rhymes are corrupting like a volcanoe errupting...
causing abruption and world wide destruction...
your rhymes dont hurt, it needs some construction...
for you liposuction is not even a deduction...
murdering you, then taking your mom under abduction...
reluctantly enjoying every second of her seduction...
your mama can't handle what my dick can function...
inserting my penis in her vagina is not even a hard junction...
your mom and I we have a great conduction...
london bridge is falling down Kazan, you need restruction...
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Ready..Bitch...Fire
My rhymes are corrupting like a volcanoe errupting
causing abruption and world wide destruction
your rhymes dont hurt, it needs some construction
for you liposuction is not even a deduction
murdering you, then taking your mom under abduction
reluctantly enjoying every second of her seduction
your mama can't handle, my dicks major function
putting my penis in her vagina, is an easy conjuction
knew you weren't gonna win, why'd you make the assumption
london bridge is falling down Kazan, you need restruction
my vote goes to genicide because of harder hitting punches and personals
i liked the flow off the verse and it flowed really good with the structure and the hard hitting punches.
Kazan didnt have anyt hard hitting punches or personals and his verse was all filler. i felt that he came wack and that he has toi eleavte and keep gettin better.
genocide had a gfoodf verse with every needed to win
Good battle but
v/genocide
please vote honestly on the links in my sig
both of you had similar verses. kinda played...
anyway, this match needs to be decided on by flow because neither of you had any real punches, just key and filler basically. your structures were equal and there was a lack of wittyness in both verses, but like i said, for flow...
vote- Geno
pz
Hit this shit up fuckers...it's old as hell...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114853
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very weak from both...but i'm going to have to go with Genocide
on this one...Kazan, not a good verse...you didn't have any punches
or personals...instead it seemed your verse was pure filler...i also
thought creativity wise, it was too simple and some what played...
stay away from Pac and matrix lines...plus for the most part you
came stretched...work on everything...particularly your punches
and personals....Genocide, also not a very good verse...like Kazan
you really didnt have any personals or punches...just primarily
filler...plus it seemed that you had a bit of a problem with
directing your disses, i.e. the lines about his mom...although
your structure was alot better, and it really made for a smooth
read...that to me, is why you just edged out Kazan...however
next time try not to rhyme 'ion' words the whole verse...it seems
kinda uncreative...oh and...i dont think 'restruction' is a word
regardless...
v/ Genocide...
^^^^^^uppin#2^^^^^come on check this out............................................... ....
uppin#3........................................nee d some more help in here........
Lets give this battle an outcome....Kazan VS Genocide....Kazan you're first up...first bar was not good and plus you do need punches!Pancake mom awakening could of been a good punch but you blew it wording it completely wrong...third bar had a played multi and zero wittiness...fourth went completely the wrong way...hated 2pac so much he became what?wtf?!!The closer was decent but could of hit A LOT harder Kazan...as I said you really did need the punches in this battle,I mean you tried some but lacked either a good setup or wittiness in the punch....Genocide...save the ready bitch fire shit next time...the first bar was plain old bragging...kind of liked the second bar but it could of been much better...the mom bar is decent...and the last two were so so...I'd trash the "your mom" lines they relly aren't that fly and don't,in my opinion, qualify as personals either...I do want to give you my props for the whole verse being in multis...you did a good job..keep that up and make wittier punches and you'll have some dope verses...
Vote Genocide
thanx for checkin this battle..........uppin#4.............
my vote goes to genocide, because of better punches, harder punches as well better flow, it was a little better, you guys also need to work on your structure
my vote genocide
yo do me a favor and vote for this battle http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=128746
we need some votes
Fuck okay im a noob lol forgot that you need 100 posts, im used to the relaunched site being only 20
sorry about that, i still gave you my opinion and i think genocide should win
sorry
Cide - Your verse was good, could've been better if you didn't keep using the same rhymes over and over again. It just gets too fuckin' annoying. Nice use of multies. Great punches, one of them could've merked this newb. Flow was great, but you had some stretched lines. Work on your flow and personals.
Kazan - Damn, you shouldn't have posted that man. It didn't have so much meaning. Only good lines were the last two. That was a good punch. But other than that, your verse didn't really make alot of sense. You should work on your flow, coz it was wack. And be more creative, work on your punches too.
Vote - Cide
Oh and Cide, you forgot to poll on this... plz do it(you voted for me but didnt poll)
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=125823&page=2