10-20..
House rules..
Drop Friday Midnight or ASAP..
Agreed over Pm's..
G'luck..
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10-20..
House rules..
Drop Friday Midnight or ASAP..
Agreed over Pm's..
G'luck..
she god/ the wake of emtion your the blood of faggits/ frutline abunndens treat me as if my rap was a gaggit/ geting you off in the shower from behind with POWER/ im setting you a thousend feet across the street/ your legs standen at attenchen/ lain BUT! FUCKED! naked screming to the heavens/ am a willo beast wind throwen smoke out my pips from a created feast/ respect the rain sun fallow my lead am given you thought when you sow the suiside seed/
Wasn't Gonna drop because page got banned but his Alias posted so ill drop summit soon... Btw his verse was post 2.....
Quikest key iv'e done took me 15mins...
Came to battle Difrent page, who the fuck is tinker bell?
..You wanted to win so much.....
you tosed your life savings into a wishing well..
..with posts like that no wonder you'll lose.....Quote:
Originally Posted by tinker bell
People get tired of you like they do fire drills...
Your verse was so and easy to follow like a turtle
..he has a multi-track mind...
to bad it goes round so slow in a circle........
wath cnat yuo splel mna yoru twenty..*1
send you back to school they can teach you plenty..Quote:
Originally Posted by tinker bell
"tinker bell is not a member of any public groups"
seriously i dont think any body is surprised..
So go try-out for Aines his crew was lookin for more troups...
Look at this bitch its just a skeleton spittin......
.....No surprise why....
He's so wack that not even his flesh is feeling him..
*1.. i typed like that because of how he typed Poetry..
Wow rascal done merked you cat , you never stood a chance...
well this is how i saw this even thought it ovis who won..
Rascal
Flow was okay, personal's were really hittten hard really liked it , punchlines were just killen this newb, multies was okay , even thought there wasnt that many, structure was alittle off those quotes were good for some personal's but it killed the structure
overall was a pretty good drop seen you've do better but it was enought to merk tinker bell .
8/10
tinker bell
structure was horrible made the piece very hard to understand , punches were bad werent hitten hard, multies well werent any and rascal deserves to win for that, personal's were bad werent hitten hard , flow was basically the only think that you are good at but even then rascal mererked you . overall you really need to elevate..
5/10
vote rascal
please return the favor in this battle and ill drop my poll vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=122921
or
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=126222
RASCAL-personals were aight, put the punches were murken this kid, you had some good multies yeah i also thought the qoute messed up ya structure a bit but you had the punches and multies that hit hard
tinker bell- didnt really know what to think your a newb
structure was terrible it messed up your flow your punches didnt hit you didnt have any multies. personals were aight. but your verse just couldnt compare to rascal's you got blown away by his punches.
vote/rascal
PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOR LINK IN SIG
YO YOUR HIPAKRITTICALL THE WORST TIPE OF MC TO ASTAPLISH ANY VURS ON COMPUTER TV, SO WHATS YOUR SKILL, CAUSE THE SHIT YOU SPIT WAS CONVERSAYTION
REHURT FOR 2 DAYS DELAY/ AM THE REASON YOUR CAREER ENDS THIS SEASON AM A TELL THESE PEOPLE WHO RASCOL DESIVES IN/ A FUCKEN EDIIT TWEST UP IN AND CANT RIME / PROBLY TOOK THIS FAGGIT ALL NIGHT EXPLANIN TO HIS KID SISTER HOW HE SHOULD PERFORM ON LINE/ ERASEN VURSES WAS HIS STEP TO ATTACK IN IN CONTER REACT /ITS COOL, ILL STELL COME HARDER THEN HIM , PUNCH HIS ASS OUT THE MALLINEU/ "KNOCK OUT" FUCK YOUR WAKE UP ,I HOPE YOUR DEATH IS FANTISY WHCIN REPLAYS OF YOUR LIFE BEFOR ME / YOUR A BITCH INGAGIN A GAY SAMARRATEN ,TELLIN YOUR HUSBEN ABOUT YOUR PAST CREATION / THANK ME FOR KILLEN YA AND SENDEN YOU TO YOUR FEUTER .......FUCKEN BITCH ........... :shoot: YOUR WAKE :laugh:
WHAT THE FUCK IS STRUCTURE THIS IS HIP HOP IF YOU NEW WHAT THAT MENT YOU WOULD OF KNOWN THAT STRUCTURE DONT EXEST/ CO EVERY ONE PUT MY VURES IN TO CONSITERATION CAUSE THE EDDIT ERASED MY SECOND VERUS THANKSQuote:
Originally Posted by Rapid fire
My Second Vures In Consiteration My Second Vures In To Consteration
uppin this for more votes please...
leave links ill peep them...
~GURU~ ill peep your's when i get in 2nyt...
Shut the fuck up.Quote:
Originally Posted by tinker bell
RASCAL, I got this battle later for ya.
And I always vote honestly, so before you even say it, shut the fuck up.
vote rascal
he had a better verse, ok personals, and decent punches. flow was a bit scrappy though, you can work on that. your quoted punched didnt hit hard tho. your structure was a lil bit strecthed. this is certainly the best i've seen you do, keep it up.
tinkerbell- came weak, very basic. make ya lines longer, actually punch him, your elementary. oh, and dont sway :nono: your flow was off, and your structure was fucked. go to rb help center and peep the tutorials. elevate.
hit this up, i'll poll after you vote here.
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=125041
Uppin -2-
i peeped them links from above so if you leave a link ill peep yours..
Uppin -2-
first of all bitch your a follower and then you try to fit in
bitch you ant no mc you a fucken joke like the rest of these my vures beat the shit out of him and you no it he ant even battlein stuped bitch
Uppin 3
:laugh2: shut the fuck up you fool.. if you gonna bitch:flipoff:...
Uppin 3
vote-rascal
come on now rascal you are way better then to ever battle this nnob never do it again. for a 15 minute key it wasent bad...your best line was the closer...really nice...the personals did not really hit that hard but it was good.
tinker bell...your structure is messed up and you really need to diss your opponet more. once agin structure is a big problem...try to get some spelling fixes in there to...punctuation does not really matter just make it flow...you dident.
RASCAL...Vote On My Battle With Fer On This Page...Link Won't Work.
Okay, let me break this down.
Rascal, that was pure crap and I think you know it. Althought you did key in the better verse of the two, it still was not anything to be proud of. The personals were there but nothing spectactular, the punches were there but again nothing spectactular. I did not care for your structure as too many kids are doing that kind of thing now a days. I think you could come harder with complex punches not soemthing can be seen landing a mile away. Improve your vocab for one thing, as that would have made the compelxity of the drop. It was very simple and basic, althought waybetter that what tinker bell dropped.
Tinker bell, STFU and stop bitching! You got your ass handed to you by a very sub par drop. I understand why youre mad, shit I would be too, if I lost to something like that! Fact is, you have no structure in your drops, your lines are mismatched like a mother and you have zero content in my eyes. I was not feeling a damn thing from you, your vocab is horrendous and your spelling (which is not a thing) is worse than my own. Now that is bad since I am the first to admit my typing is sorry. You need to learn what a decent verse is comprised of, instead of talking shit about someone not knowing hip hop, when in fact you are the one who knows shit! Face it, that verse sucked ass, you can not compete on any level here on RB with that kind of drop. Clean up your structure, make the lines even, make good use of syllable count and try to set up some decent punches. Improve your vocab and learn to use imagery in your drop, not just some random fucken words that ryhme.
vote = rascal Just because his verse did not suck as much as tinker bells!
~Bounce~
you could of polled your vote atleast.....
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