Yep nothing else to do.....so
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Diss Yourself.........................
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Yep nothing else to do.....so
Rules
Diss Yourself.........................
10 lines within 30 mins.
Good luck
checking in
yo man i g2g out soz man.........just post your shit ill spit l8r today.............
damn im a faggot, if i was a dj i couldn't properly scratch
fuck equaling my flow and punches.....my clothes barely match
im rappingly dislexic, most the good jokes...i dont get it
only reason i battle elite heads, cuz 4 losses i have a fetish
me having sick rhymes....... na, ive seen iller doctors
fuck judge leads the way like a QB, me im just the blocker
i lack every skill needed to rap effectively on this board
i keep battling every day, like oliver twist " losses, can i have more"
i suck, literally and figuratively, i mean i should just quit
i mean even when i spit hot shit, i dont do it justice
coo all fun all fun
im wack..couldn't rap if i invented the shit
I meen even if i was in sdizzles sig..
..i wudnt be next to $pit
i rap like the amount of lines...cause basically im a infant
i suck i meen i had a good crew..well for an instant
dressing like eminem at the beach..
..coudn't make me a emsee
my sigs only balck and white..cus colour dsnt suit me
got a good record but with nothing to show..i lack
i meen i cant really be proud with OLI_DOGG as my throwback
people think im good but basicaly..really im a poser
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left such a fat gap..as im so embarised of my closer
its all good
sdizzle def took this 1 becuz punches win battles an sdizzle came wit less filler, more punches which hit harder not really nethin more to say more an harder punches = win
vote=sdizzle
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^you are wack as fuck........your ment to read the rules...hes not punching me we are dissing oursleves herb
Yeh wit punches...dun step to me like ur shit
Lol good laugh here boys,both you came hard with the disses on yourself,liked the Oliver Twist line from dizzle,and the fetish 4 losses,Judge also had good shit with the Eminem at the beach and the ender.
But goin for Sdizzle on this with a slightly better verse.
Peace
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this is sad....... guess i should stick to dissing myself :(
I hate to be on the bandwagon here, but i've also got to go with Dizzle. He just seemed, well... more pathetic. While reading it, I almost felt sorry for him. I also felt sorry for the judge, but it wasn't the same type of sorrow. Lol. Anyway, good read both of you.
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Guess I'm not the only 1 who's wak lmfao
lmao at you to going at this
judge takes it though s dizzle some of ur shit was funny as hell aswell....sdizzle u had no personals on urself where judge did and his were good......
overall tho judge takes it
fav line from both
me having sick rhymes....... na, ive seen iller doctors
fuck judge leads the way like a QB, me im just the blocker
Judge
i rap like the amount of lines...cause basically im a infant
i suck i meen i had a good crew..well for an instant
nice shit i also liked judges closer
pz
could you both plz hit up my om in my sig plz "Torn Apart"
thnx
thank fuck................sum1 experienced who nows how these work.thx man i will peep ur om inabit
1st
Nice flip on the battle. Good to see some different shit. Funny as hell too.
Dizz- You had a pretty good verse. Few nice lines here an there. The QB line was
pretty good. Although played to death. But the " ive seen iller doctors" don't really make that much sence. Doctors treat illness. No really clever lines used. It flowed pretty good though.
Judge- Good verse. You had some pretty clever shit I think these other peoplez missin. Opener was pretty dope. Seen the idea before but a fresh flip to it. An the EM line I almost missed you should have bolded the EM in emcee too. Wasnt really fealin the throwback line but the closer made up for it. Once again ive seen the idea before but a damn nice flip to it.
Overall- I think judge took this pretty easy. Way better consistantsy with clever harder hitting punches an metaphores.
ive seen iller doctors" don't really make that much sence. Doctors treat illness.
^ exactly, doctors arent ill....... and there ILLER than me
damn im a faggot, if i was a dj i couldn't properly scratch
fuck equaling my flow and punches.....my clothes barely match
ok
im rappingly dislexic, most the good jokes...i dont get it
only reason i battle elite heads, cuz 4 losses i have a fetish
ok
me having sick rhymes....... na, ive seen iller doctors
fuck judge leads the way like a QB, me im just the blocker
no
i lack every skill needed to rap effectively on this board
i keep battling every day, like oliver twist " losses, can i have more"
blah
i suck, literally and figuratively, i mean i should just quit
i mean even when i spit hot shit, i dont do it justice
no
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im wack..couldn't rap if i invented the shit
I meen even if i was in sdizzles sig..
..i wudnt be next to $pit
ok
i rap like the amount of lines...cause basically im a infant
i suck i meen i had a good crew..well for an instant
lol god
dressing like eminem at the beach..
..coudn't make me a emsee
my sigs only balck and white..cus colour dsnt suit me
no
got a good record but with nothing to show..i lack
i meen i cant really be proud with OLI_DOGG as my throwback
nice
people think im good but basicaly..really im a poser
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left such a fat gap..as im so embarised of my closer
no
Judge wins for dissin himself a lil harder and more creatively
Bad vote. Vote gone. -Token
lol at this thx for the votes everyone...................favors wil be returnd...........3rd
judge got this.....he dissed himself better lol
he had better lines against him......overall a better verse too...
ill poll when i get to 100
^ no u wont..... judge u want to be a dick about EXPLAINING VOTES? why all of a sudden now?
i will explain more when i get to 100 i meant...
i was upping it for you
calm down bro
^dsnt count cus you didnt explain the vote man..thx neway...happy dizzle
Yea but you should have fliped it ALOT better. The meta was weak.
Bet you made up the punchline an wrote the setup after you made it.
In my opinion it makes your meta weak doing that.
Cause you just try an put anything that will rhyme as the setup... I been there.
Not dissin ya shit by no means bro.
I just think you need a little more time to find ya style.
It will just click one day an you b like ohh shit thats it.
Keep writing tho man, peace
^exactly................5th thanks agen everyone..
i wish i had posted my pic before, i coulda won this with ease
NO MORE FREEPOSTING.
Remember the up rule and do not post again unless you are saying 'up'.
Stop swaying, NOW!
Both dissed themselves fairly.. poorly
sdizzle was going simplisticly.. which wasn't good
The Judge was a bit basic as well...
..but he had a few harder punches agaisnt himself
this was all pretty close...
So i'm gonna judge off the finishers...
Judge had a harder hitting finisher
v/The Judge
id say TJ dissed himself better because he came more witty,
with himself and had some overall funny yet effected means
sdizzle was aight too but im pretty sure he could of dissed,
himself i lot harder fo real, he could of knocked himself out
but i think TJ knocked himself out better because of punches,
toward himself, so this was some new shit here dont really,
like this type of battle for some reason, but TJ did win this
he had personals to himself that were good as for sdizzle,
did lack them some and he came with a lot of filler which,
hurt him here, structure and wordplay on both sides was,
pretty good didnt see to much fucked up flow so it was aight
but vote/TJ for just hitting himself harder thats it man, ok battle
hit my battles up or i will committ suicide.. .. .. ..
flow : sdizzle cos some of the judges bars were quite unequal
personals : judge : I meen even if i was in sdizzles sig..
punches: judge had betta an more punches
disses: judge I thought his were more on point
similes: sdizzle basically judge dint have ne
opener: judge dint like sdizzles 1st line at all
closer: sdizzle, jus prefered his
vote=judge
Vote Invalid. -ILLunatic
funny ass battle
judge.......your verse was okay..........i like your structure more then dizzles and you had better punches on yourself.............shit was funny man.........ytour flow was good and i was feelin your verse
sdizzle-........your verse was iight..........your structure could use some more work man kinda throws off your flow........makes it choppy and shit.........your punches was okay but you deffintly could have bashed yourself even more........work on those 2 things and keep elevating man........and why they hell you in that stupid ass crew
v/judge
Uppin this for the both of you cause shit is being slept on
Ok my vote got takin away so here it is again better explained
damn im a faggot, if i was a dj i couldn't properly scratch
fuck equaling my flow and punches.....my clothes barely match
ok
im rappingly dislexic, most the good jokes...i dont get it
only reason i battle elite heads, cuz 4 losses i have a fetish
ok
me having sick rhymes....... na, ive seen iller doctors
fuck judge leads the way like a QB, me im just the blocker
no
i lack every skill needed to rap effectively on this board
i keep battling every day, like oliver twist " losses, can i have more"
blah
i suck, literally and figuratively, i mean i should just quit
i mean even when i spit hot shit, i dont do it justice
no
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im wack..couldn't rap if i invented the shit
I meen even if i was in sdizzles sig..
..i wudnt be next to $pit
ok
i rap like the amount of lines...cause basically im a infant
i suck i meen i had a good crew..well for an instant
lol god
dressing like eminem at the beach..
..coudn't make me a emsee
my sigs only balck and white..cus colour dsnt suit me
no
got a good record but with nothing to show..i lack
i meen i cant really be proud with OLI_DOGG as my throwback
nice
people think im good but basicaly..really im a poser
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left such a fat gap..as im so embarised of my closer
no
Judge wins for dissin himself a lil harder and more creatively...I thought both had some good lines...mainly Judge dissin his old crew...that was the best bar by far...Judge had 3 non whack bars and Sdizle had 2 so
Vote=Judge
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