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gluk
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10 lines
Blind spit
no crew / d/r
150 posts to vote
gluk
Like bad roadside rescue I "leave u broken"
Got u callin me mase the way my flow "leaves u chokin"
U might win this batt got kids on ya dik like "fungal infections"
But ur shots don't come off like junkies "who have trouble injectin"
Ur fake an all talk like "lies from politicians"
Like bomb threats at the olympics this "guy's 'no competition"
U like unearthed microchips the way I "damage ya wit static"
U aint a rapper u an actor witcha "amature dramatics"
Act "hard then get owned" u get touched like "cards sent from home"
ILLunatic wouldn't 'rock' crowds if he "carved them from stone"
Int3rm3nt4l: but I joined here in Nov an got like a 9-1 battle recordQuote:
Originally Posted by intermentals
Int3rm3nt4l: how can I get in elite
For having a 9-1 battle record, you suck. And ya better note this
If ya spittin wack lines.......
............such as you did against So Sik, you'll never get noticed
Look, you set it up, didn't bother to check in, nor wait for me to
Claimin you a vet...
...................kid your not equivalant to spit, like us true vets do
Shit, you mind as well quit. Cuz at rapbattles.com you will never fit
Nor will you be legit....
..I mean come on, you should proof read your verses before clicking submit
Damn, this battle is so unlevel'd. Meaning its easily one sided
What the fuck am I talkin about?...
.....just seeing ILLunatic in the title, tells which the winner is decided
Askin me if you can get in elite..plz, did you honestly need a reply
In elite, talent must be apply'd.....
..and intermentals you have none.. cuz your the weakest link, good-bye
Blah!
Uppin#1
Nice verse can't say I liked the bit's of the AIM convo that u took out of context but hey that's life uppin for votes
Like bad roadside rescue I "leave u broken"
Got u callin me mase the way my flow "leaves u chokin"
-eh.... no, take otu ""
U might win this batt got kids on ya dik like "fungal infections"
But ur shots don't come off like junkies "who have trouble injectin"
- eh..... no take out ""
Ur fake an all talk like "lies from politicians"
Like bomb threats at the olympics this "guy's 'no competition"
- this was good mad me laugh ... take out ""
U like unearthed microchips the way I "damage ya wit static"
U aint a rapper u an actor witcha "amature dramatics"
- decen tat best ....... " "" "
Act "hard then get owned" u get touched like "cards sent from home"
ILLunatic wouldn't 'rock' crowds if he "carved them from stone"
ha this was great ....... take out ""
For having a 9-1 battle record, you suck. And ya better note this
If ya spittin wack lines.......
............such as you did against So Sik, you'll never get noticed
- eh, no.... filler... a fille rpersonal..
Look, you set it up, didn't bother to check in, nor wait for me to
Claimin you a vet...
...................kid your not equivalant to spit, like us true vets do
- good
Shit, you mind as well quit. Cuz at rapbattles.com you will never fit
Nor will you be legit....
..I mean come on, you should proof read your verses before clicking submit
-ha , good
Damn, this battle is so unlevel'd. Meaning its easily one sided
What the fuck am I talkin about?...
.....just seeing ILLunatic in the title, tells which the winner is decided
-filler, but i gues sa good filler :)
Askin me if you can get in elite..plz, did you honestly need a reply
In elite, talent must be apply'd.....
..and intermentals you have none.. cuz your the weakest link, good-bye
- funny as hell but a FILLER
damn this was a good battle, and visionz i know u can drop better from rapboard, just a tip though, on this site, they frown upon using extra punctuation, ex. ~""!
vote illuntalic for having a funny ass verse, both of yall flowed relatively well, ill ur flow seemed a little stretched. vote illunatic
Aiyyo I'm not known to bitch unfairly about votes so I feel justified in sayin this, that was the biggest d/r vote I've ever seen for a start he thinks I'm visionz from rapboard an I aint, 2nd he said more good stuff about my verse than ILLunatics sayin mosta his was filler but good filler, wtf is good filler in a battle he then after all this goes on to say that he thought ILLunatic won neway this is CLASSIC dickridin, 3rd punches win battles an I had 10 punches count em, I've asked peeps whose opinions I trust from other sites to look at this I clearly won,
[quote=sdizzle]vote illuntalic for having a funny ass verse, both of yall flowed relatively well, ill ur flow seemed a little stretched.[/quote/
oh I didnt see this wtf u d/r u put this right before ur vote sayin u voted for ILLunatic for havin a funny verse?
It's prolly worth knowin that this kid got banned from rapboard for bitin an thats y he's wit u guys here
blah blah blah blah blah, i dont htink ur visionz, i know u came WITH visions, maybe i worded that badly earlier...... dont count my vote then, i could car efucking less
I do not moderate my own battles
vote ill..............reason
alot harder punches and a proper battle verse
i just came wack with no punches really and
kinda a song verse niot hitting ill personaly
ill had a coo vet like structure and nice flow
i came with a lot of filler and blah
unlike ill who actually punched here that simple
illl man please put a good vote on this now
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=127343
thx dogg get at me soon
cough upping for the playas
*cough*sdizzle, dont up my battles*cough*
2-0 Uppin#2
I can see ILLunatic is gonna get d/r badly her, I shown this verse to plenty of peeps an mods from other sites who all said I murked him, they said I had many more punches most were multis, plenty of wordplay, whilst ILLunatic sounded like he was tryna son a herb an had like 2 punches or suttin, this pisses me off a lot an I know several people who have quit battling bcuz of this, please can we have some honest votes. Also me an the judge have had small cross words today concernin a vote so I dun think his vote should count.
Btw it's easy to just make it look like I'm a bitch ILLunatic cos ur on home ground here but a tru vet would kno wat to do
Swaying shall get you dq'd, and I did not try in this.. it was nessessary on my part.-ILLunatic
ok
Illunatic- good verse...had alot of punches and personals that ht...flow was good...structure was stetched a bit..it hurt the flow a bit but thats abotu it.....closer and opener was good...and the personals hit hard..punches were pretty nice
good verse keep doing it
inter- had an ok verse..but the personals that you had didnt hit hard..there was barely any personals...punches didnt hit as hard and they were pretty wack....dont use":!@#$%^&*() in your verses....flo was off and so was the structure
v/ILLunatic
Uppin damn it.. drop links
we'll both hit them up
Like bad roadside rescue I "leave u broken"
Got u callin me mase the way my flow "leaves u chokin"
what the fuck, man hell no, hella whack
U might win this batt got kids on ya dik like "fungal infections"
But ur shots don't come off like junkies "who have trouble injectin"
umm hell no again, all filler wheres the personal or punch?
Ur fake an all talk like "lies from politicians"
Like bomb threats at the olympics this "guy's 'no competition"
man just stop, and again hell no, all filler no punch
U like unearthed microchips the way I "damage ya wit static"
U aint a rapper u an actor witcha "amature dramatics"
no and no again, all filler, you suck
Act "hard then get owned" u get touched like "cards sent from home"
ILLunatic wouldn't 'rock' crowds if he "carved them from stone"
yur best bar u said his name but it wasnt directed good at all
man this was whack as fuck theres no reason you should be swaying
you lost so just say close this and give ILLunatic the win seriously
your verse was intirely filler u said his name once but it didnt help
you just rhymed words at the end you had no multis and yur wordplay
sucked everything about this verse was whack man please elavate
For having a 9-1 battle record, you suck. And ya better note this
If ya spittin wack lines.......
............such as you did against So Sik, you'll never get noticed
ok personal, i see two in here, overall ok bar, multis
Look, you set it up, didn't bother to check in, nor wait for me to
Claimin you a vet...
...................kid your not equivalant to spit, like us true vets do
mostly filler, kinda personal but weak
Shit, you mind as well quit. Cuz at rapbattles.com you will never fit
Nor will you be legit....
..I mean come on, you should proof read your verses before clicking submit
ok punch at the end, mostly filler, kinda long bar, attempted multi
Damn, this battle is so unlevel'd. Meaning its easily one sided
What the fuck am I talkin about?...
.....just seeing ILLunatic in the title, tells which the winner is decided
kinda witty, but mostly all filler, overall weak bar
Askin me if you can get in elite..plz, did you honestly need a reply
In elite, talent must be apply'd.....
..and intermentals you have none.. cuz your the weakest link, good-bye
ok personal ok punchline, overall ok closer
aight man ILLunatic won, why? cuz he had actually punchlines and personals
attempted multis and was witty at one point, had better flow and overall was
more creative he just gave more eventhough some shit was weak aight. . . .
like to see more of everything from intermentals and some metaphors from,
ILLunatic but overall one sided ILLunatic didnt have to try so thats it.
vote/ILLunatic, and vote on my battles man and unbann my It alias would ya
its been 2 weeks hasnt it, fuck i cant remember it seems to me that its been 4 weeks
lol............................................... ................................................
damn i need 150 posts, lmao my bad ILLunatic :rolleyes:
Upping
Instru-
Like bad roadside rescue I "leave u broken"
Got u callin me mase the way my flow "leaves u chokin"
ok attempt but mase stings ur eyes, not chokes u
U might win this batt got kids on ya dik like "fungal infections"
But ur shots don't come off like junkies "who have trouble injectin"
1st line was going somewhere... 2nd fucked it
Ur fake an all talk like "lies from politicians"
Like bomb threats at the olympics this "guy's 'no competition"
again 1st line was going somewhere... 2nd fucked it
U like unearthed microchips the way I "damage ya wit static"
U aint a rapper u an actor witcha "amature dramatics"
lol good punch finally
Act "hard then get owned" u get touched like "cards sent from home"
ILLunatic wouldn't 'rock' crowds if he "carved them from stone"
pretty good closure not bad verse, structure gotta a little messed up at end but your punches got better towards the end 4/10
Ill-
For having a 9-1 battle record, you suck. And ya better note this
If ya spittin wack lines.......
............such as you did against So Sik, you'll never get noticed
ok opener, played personal
Look, you set it up, didn't bother to check in, nor wait for me to
Claimin you a vet...
...................kid your not equivalant to spit, like us true vets do
mehhh na, weak
Shit, you mind as well quit. Cuz at rapbattles.com you will never fit
Nor will you be legit....
..I mean come on, you should proof read your verses before clicking submit
lol liked it
Damn, this battle is so unlevel'd. Meaning its easily one sided
What the fuck am I talkin about?...
.....just seeing ILLunatic in the title, tells which the winner is decided
ok
Askin me if you can get in elite..plz, did you honestly need a reply
In elite, talent must be apply'd.....
..and intermentals you have none.. cuz your the weakest link, good-bye
nice closure was the knock out punch, structure was nice and rhyme was good also, nothing really that wrong, good verse 6/10
structure- ILL
rhyme - same Ill a lil better but not enough to give him this sec
personals - same
metas - Ill
punches - Ill
vote - Ill
honest vote re-pay the favor and drop an honest vote on my battles
links in sig!
Finally.. another vote
Upp
Vote- Ill (i'm not dickriding, he just beat u inter)
Intermentals- Some good punches, ok personals. I think they could've been worded a lot better, wordplay was simple at best. They would've been good, and you probably would've got my vote if you had better wordplay. Decent structure, and ok flow. Lose the "s
Illunatic-Decent punches, hit kinda hard. Some good personals, i liked the "cuz at rapbattles.com u'll never fit" line, that was good. Good structure, easy to read, also good wordplay. I think inter had the potential to beat you, if he had a more complex verse.
No, im not dickriding
Return the favor:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=127255
Well this was pretty one sided....
Inter - obviously a newb, you need to work not only on your punches, but understanding the concept of a battle.... it's not simply to rhyme while saying derogatory comments (i.e. you suck, you're mama I fuck, you better duck) but actually applying a sense of wit about it, use unexpected approaches and hit with a hard personal... hard to really explain in a paragraph... go read the LLL battles or LLL Jr., it will help you elevate
Ill - easy win, didn't drop as good as you should have, but enough to take this since he really had no personals/punches, ect. I'd liek to see more of a display of skill from you, but you did take this one.
Vote - Illunatic.
Can you guys return the favor and drop an honest vote:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=125679