intermentals vs So SiK

You think ur hot? (lol) if I had a molotov u wouldn't combust
I jus' hit ya an' u still wouldn't know a punch, are you concussed?
My minds a verbal laxative unforced shit flows for hours
Your rhymes couldn't be more forced if ya were usin' jedi powers
You gettin' "ripped kid" better do somethin' drastic
The only way you "flip shit" is failin' at gymnastics
I'm creatin' protege-kids when I post like a modern-day-BIG
Like coke addicts there's been dodgy lines you've-got-away-with
Shit man u so wak if I ate u wit chilli juice
That'd be the hottest shit you'd ever produce

ayo dawg punches from me will leave you blind sightless
have every1 in the world cryin for you like the WTC crisis
i spit flamez so excuse me i dont need 9mm or uzis
you arent a real rapper u have a ghost writer dont try and use these ( my wordz)
its time i show these emcees how i got the tittle So SiK
drop ya verse n spit i spit wet like the juice on ya moamz click
u spit dry from bein wack to scared to have additional info
but itz iight i dont need that to lyrically kill yo
my verse has left you runnin like Osma Bin Laden
but my verse flows in the air and crushes your insides n left you diein
theres no chance of you merkin me
my wordz kill ppl in every way including internally



wasnt the best but hey

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OK........
So SiK
*ELEVATED* This is much beter than your verse with ~Guru~ here you've got punches, you had a multie;), well done flow wasn't on and no wordplay. Your still using 'mom' lines TIP: dont use 'mom' lines.

intermentals
This verse was nice you had wordplay and nice punches. Didn't see no multies or persoanl's and ya flow was off. That gymnastic concept is played.

So Sik has elevated but need to work on his punches they aint hard hitting enough and you need to add wordplay and similies. Internals came harder hitting with nice wordplay. This is gonna look like I hate So Sik cos I've voted against him twice in a row but it aint I just vote for who i thinks verse was better. So Sik I think your battling people a bit to hard for you. Stay battling harder people and elevate more or battle weaker emcee's win but really dont elevate much. But your elevating so...................

Nice Battle.


Overall VoteINTERMENTALS

iight w/e man thanx 4 tha vote

I'm creatin' protege-kids when I post like a modern-day-BIG
Like coke addicts there's been dodgy lines you've got-away-with

that was a multi but thanx 4 the vote neway

Sorry I muta missed that man. Looks better with dashes(-) like that;).

Can you vote in my battle with BOX please.

Aight...

Punches-Intermentals
Similies- Intermentals
Multies- Doesnt matter but inter...

The coke addict line was filthy...

Fuckin killed this shit man..

Vote- intermentals

Quote:

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You gettin' "ripped kid" better do somethin' drastic
The only way you "flip shit" is failin' at gymnastics
I'm creatin' protege-kids when I post like a modern-day-BIG
Like coke addicts there's been dodgy lines you've-got-away-with

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Thought that these four line's were straight. You had punches and the hit your opponent effectively.

Quote:

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ayo dawg punches from me will leave you blind sightless
have every1 in the world cryin for you like the WTC crisis

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The only thing that I thought about liking from So Sik's verse. You need to work on your punches, personals, creativity. Everything. Just work on attacking your opponents better. You'll be straight.

Vote-Intermentals

Overall, he just came with a better, more consistent battle verse.

uppin 1.......................dont sleep on this shit

uppin

okay battle


Inter-okay verse.........structure was better then Sik's................flow was on and it wasnt choppy.............punches was okay........overall not a bad verse but you need to keep elevating

So Sik-your structur wasnt that bad but it could deffintly use some work........ it kind of threw off you flow cause it made it choppy........punches was okay sum played but some okay........no personals you should always have those
keep elevating man and keep battling

v/ Inter

if you 2 eva wanna battle pm me wit the link.......pc

and im uppin this for the both of you so that you dont have to waste ne of your upps........pc

O.K. battle

Intermentals you were pretty good. I enjoyed reading your verse for the most part... You had some pretty hard hitting punches and you had good creativity. Try working on your structure, cause sometimes you were really strechtched out and other times you were falling short... keep consistant homey.. other than that work on your vocabulary... ur concepts were bumpin'... keep it up amigo...

So Sik you were rippin it for the first half of your verse but than you kinda style changed and fell off toward the end. You also need to work on your structure... note above... you were inconsistent... try making each line have basically the same amount of syallables. you'll notice your flow improve alot. I Think you had some pretty strong punches and personals but nothing id ever quote... lol syke.... what else can I say... hmm.... read/work on vocab and elevate...

id say this one would have to go 2....

*drum roll *

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iight thanx yo get 100 posts so u can poll it Inter. good battle man ........... Blak Snizz good honest post man thanx 4 beein reel....pz.......o yeh uppin 2

uppin

I feel the same way Orfentik does---------So sik u are battlin people that are way beyond ur flow--------I didn't know u was only 14 i wouldnt have even battled u. But keep it up battlin hard mc's will only make u betta---- being straight up and to the point with u/ ur punch lines need work

SO SIK:

"my verse has left you runnin like Osma Bin Laden
but my verse flows in the air and crushes your insides n left you diein" WEAK

My Ni99a u could have reworded that sh*t and made it Hot
Jus sit down and think of wat u wanna say---dont jus say shit to say it(Understand) YoungCapo
So Sik
"wasnt the best but hey" DONT DOWN URSELF----JUST SPIT MY NI99A be confident

intermentals: Ur flow was aight too Money

"Shit man u so wak if I ate u wit chilli juice
That'd be the hottest shit you'd ever produce" from 1-10 i give u a 6 on that bar

u could have made some of ur punches stronger 2, but u ended the battle on a good note

My Overall opinion: intermentals won this shit
He was more confident in his flow than So sik

YC thanx 4 the honest vote but check our shit out........

Punches- so sikk
Similies- intermentals
Multies- so sick


vote- so sikk

Yoo Explain Ur Shit Mannnnnnnnnnn

Im Tryin To Give U Honest Opinion Mothafucka---------fuck U Mean Check Out Ur Shit-----------i Could Say U Fucking Suck--------but That Aint Me-------u Should Take My Advice Then Maybe U Will Start Winning Some Battles
Lol-----clown Ass Nigga

yea nigga i sed check our shit out i wuz gettin votes till bullshit came up

uppin leave links........................................

intermentals..

your flow was choppy.. and punches were Kinda Corny..
No hate.. thats juss my opinon.. Multies were Ok.. Punches
didnt connect in the End.. YOUR (fINISHERS)..

I'm creatin' protege-kids when I post like a modern-day-BIG
Like coke addicts there's been dodgy lines you've-got-away-with


^^That was your best Line.. Good Flow.. Punch Is Funny..
Plus I dont think iv'e heard this Before..

personals_4
Punches_6
multies_5
flow_6

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So Sik..

your verse had Better flow.. (ryme scheme).. Vocab could
have used a little work, but some of your punches made up
for them..

ayo dawg punches from me will leave you blind sightless
have every1 in the world cryin for you like the WTC crisis

^^that was your best Overall line in my opinion..


personals_5
Punches_6
multies_6
flow_7


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hey this is sabotage I rated your battle under my account " Agility " as part of my agreement with Ailse Phive to unbann sabotage. I am here now to explain this to you and to
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This battle was aight, but...

intermentals: I enjoyed ur verse for the most part, even though it was weak. U had no personals, but good punches and decent metas. Good flow, structure was a little off. Keep elevatin'.

So SiK: Ur verse was not good. You had no personals, played punches, and played metas like the WTC. Work on originality and punches. Keep elevatin'.

Vote: intermentals

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Intermentals-overall u had a really good verse, i think that u had some real good structure build up, and u had some reall nice punches in there, i agree with the others and i also liked your creativity, i think that you just need to elevate a LITTLE more then you will be REAL GOOD.

So Sik- hey man i think that you did good in this battle, but let me tell you what happened, you started off really good, man but then about halfway through u started slipping off, and not landing any punches, u did have some good ones in there though

V-intermentals

ok

so sik - not a bad verse from you, some ok punches, alot better than other verses ive seen you do, you do need to work on your personals tho, i didnt see any good personals that hurt ya opponent, just elevate and keep battling.


inter - a pretty good verse, you had 2 bars that were decent, great creativity and imagination and very original, you had alot of good punches and i think ya had some good personals. flow was pretty good and structure was ight, but some lines were strecthed, but good verse

vote inter

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