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Due: Monday Midnight.
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8-16 Lines
No Feeding.
No Recycling.
No D/R, Hate, Crew Votes
EXPLAINED Votes.
Due: Monday Midnight.
Checking in ... Good Luck
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bOX HERE JUST TO CHECK IN.....NO LUCK NEEDED..LET HEAR SOMETHING
Nah Acually Due Sunday Midnight
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..Signing Into This Battle I’m Gonna Make You +Regret-This+ Cause I’m “Pissing All Over You” Like +Bizzare-Sexual-Fetishes+..
..This Boy get’s “Played” More Than A +Brand-New-X-‘Box’+ OrFentiK Beating You “Hands Free” Like +Digital-Clocks+..
..Like “Bad Rally Drivers” BOX is +Crashing-Off-Course+ Your Something RB “Could Do With Out” Like +Gays-In-The-Police-Force+..
..I’ll Put “My-Name-Tag-Round-Ya-Dick” So +You-Know-Who-Your-Fucking-With+ When You Finally “Fuck-A-Chick” You’ll Offically +Be-A-Dyke-BITCH+..
..Like A “Dykes-First-Trip-On-Clit” I Got Box +Scared-To-Spit+ I’m The “Katt(cat) Killing You” Never Try A +Taste-Of-OrFentiK’s-Shit+..*
..I’ll Be “Stomping On Your Face” Like The +Riotors-800-Strong+ OrFentiK “Ending Your Career In A Instant” Like +Wrestling-Moves-Gone-Wrong+..
..Like “Street Racers With Flat Tyres” You Got “No Choice” But To +Finish-Last+ I’m “Ending-Your-Game-Fast” Like The +Production-Of-The-Sega-Dreamcast+..
SPECIAL-UNIT
*Katt(person) .. Cat shit contains something called “toxo-plasmosis” a taste of it and your dead.
DONT UNDERSTAND MY PUNCHES DONT VOTE
Oh shit he came wit it...it kinda sound prewritten,...but fuck it i'm box aka that boy a beast....fuck i'm let em have it....
They call me Box I was made for the block..
My bars so dirty the'll need rabbie shots...
I'll be lamping in ya crib fucking up ya pops....
The end of my nine is where all ya homo jokes will stop...
You the type to see my backing out the chrome...
Than ya ass will start moving faster than Marian Jones...
OrFenTik speaking on all that fetish
Till I peel his head back like a ball of lettuce
***is this enough..naw let me give him a lil more of dat gangsta shit***
What this dude want the nine or the tech for
Cause my blade will leave you all bones like skellator
Ain't no need for you to be running to the door
We all know u faking this shit like Ezale Falling in the Store
I don't think u want it anymore
Cause my votes thru the roof and yours sitting on the floor
Plus Box the truth, My bars stay fresher than bounce
Cause only a pussy comes up with a name that no can prenounce
*****Take dirt nap nigga this battle done..you did go though***
(oh yea if u don't know Ezale the crackhead from the movie "FRIDAY"
wow i thought box was whack and that orfentik won this
most of yur shit was filler box and it wasnt all that good
orfentik came with the better approach eventough his
structure was gay, and all that bold what have you killed
it, but punches were deffinetly hitting more consistently
when i was reading boxes verse i wanted to stop right away
as for reading orfentik well it had better flow to it right away
personals here were weak and they was wrongly directed
both need to work on structure and better overall punches
and personals and flow and multis and rhymescene but. . .
vote/orfentik without a doubt.. .. .. ..hit my battles. . . .
Thanks 'This'
Wun - Nil . To Me.
U P P i N’
uppin
yo orfentik was alright structure and flow was a bit wack, ur calls werent bad but they werent real smart u could see the ending. box on the other hand structure and flow was good but u didnt have much substance. on the other hand the calls were good. this one goes to box
vote - box
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You think I'm counting that voye? Joined 2 days ago with 4 post's. And then voting for BOX which aint gotta hope in hell in winning this battle. And calling my flow whack LOL.
Can we get some proper votes please. I'll return the favour by voting in your battle.
Uppin#1...........................................
u a funny dude how u not gone count the vote....lol....Be a man....
I went to one of THIS's battle and either one of us can tear him apart...lol..
but he voted 4 u ..and i ain't bitch...lol...be a man...
Uppin#2
Lets get some Votes
Whatever count it dude aint got enough poststo vote.
Uppin' #3.........
Do people vote on this site?
Punches-Orfentik
Personals- Orfentik
Similies- Ofrentik
All that fuckin matters, if it was a battle for flow then box would have eaten you, but punches are about similies, personals, name flips and punches, and orfent had them all.
Vote- Orfentik.
HaHa, Cheers bro.
How many post's ya got? Can you vote in the poll?
Iono...
But rest assured i'd rip most peeps on this site...
Does that count:D
FFS, Dont know 1 vote. I voted in people's battle's then asking them to return the favour and vote in mine and STILL NO VOTES.
Vote/ O he had better verse but his structure sucked he also had a good use of multis your punches were both hard hitting and personals were also ok O you dont need to use the bold letters makes no sense your structure also threwoff your flow
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - ILLunatic
ill vote in ur other one if you vote in my battle against Intermentals
Thanks for the vote.
The other boy aint posted his verse yet but I'll still vote for the credit and you can vote when he drops which is tommorow night max. Can you vote in the poll please thanks.
UPPiN
iight dawg i polled it now vote in my battle against intermentals
pz
uppin
MaW-FuCkAz Ya HeArDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
yo i thing both of yall came strong with the punchlines but in the end, box, you got ahead of yourself, cause you aint bring it as hard as you claimed too. The flow was decent but orfentik's punchers was better and they hit harder, hard enought to get my vote son. ~ScreamAtMeEarly~ :gfy:
V/Orfentik