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Agree on a line limit of 10-20 lines, nothing more nor less.
Winner is in the LW Matchup next week.
10 lines son.
Yep coo..spit soon as i will
Brass knuckles Per-mitt, still couldnt Drive a hard punch bitch,
State ID card say'n ur dope, ... haven't seen a worst Lie-since;
Aint takin chances with this battle, like throw'n Dice,
Merk Judge Per-roll, leave him Slippin tryna Surf-ice;
'Soon as name ^ punches are played out you'll probly be elite,
But no one Defends ur Honor... so I continue slash'n At-ur-knees;
Until Fusion too is here, for an Instant then falls off,
See I own each one of ur Cliques, ... ha jus like Microsoft;
You must be Ill Mentally, even tryna out verse this mortar,
I jus fuck'n Diagnosed and Served you, here's ur Diss-order;
coward doing nething to make and take the piss
but how you spost to connect a punch..
..when everylines like-----this;
turn you crazy like epilectics...having a fit
i no i dropp'd second..but you live to be next to $pit(sig)
ill kurupt your style..
..and shot you like a dillinger
ive beaten most of your crew..now u no y i look so familiar
check'd your verse..to be honest..it wasnt fit for this board
cus you seem'd like prisoners wanting out..
..desperate for that level record(4-4)
mix some black with a bad boy..still cant cum like-whoa
aisle gave me a rappad victory last week..
..and now through me a KayOhh.
Brass knuckles Per-mitt, still couldnt Drive a hard punch bitch,
State ID card say'n ur dope, ... haven't seen a worst Lie-since;
Good set up..very creative and effective punch..had me laughing..9/10
Aint takin chances with this battle, like throw'n Dice,
Merk Judge Per-roll, leave him Slippin tryna Surf-ice;
Eh, liked the first line..wasnt really feeling the second 6/10
'Soon as name ^ punches are played out you'll probly be elite,
But no one Defends ur Honor... so I continue slash'n At-ur-knees;
Straight punch...wasnt creative..but you got to the point..8/10
Until Fusion too is here, for an Instant then falls off,
See I own each one of ur Cliques, ... ha jus like Microsoft;
Haha...pretty decent punch...simplistic though..7/10
You must be Ill Mentally, even tryna out verse this mortar,
I jus fuck'n Diagnosed and Served you, here's ur Diss-order;
Blagh..just saw something like this in another battle..6/10
36/50..your verse was pretty straight..but you focused on wordplay too much..but
the point is you dissed your opponent effectively, so I really cant complain
Judge:
coward doing nething to make and take the piss
but how you spost to connect a punch..
..when everylines like-----this;
You do mean dots correct? He didnt use dash marks...either way blagh punch..5/10
turn you crazy like epilectics...having a fit
i no i dropp'd second..but you live to be next to $pit(sig)
LoL....nice personal....straight set up...8/10
ill kurupt your style..
..and shot you like a dillinger
ive beaten most of your crew..now u no y i look so familiar
Eh...straight..wasnt really effective...but I do get the point...6/10
check'd your verse..to be honest..it wasnt fit for this board
cus you seem'd like prisoners wanting out..
..desperate for that level record(4-4)
= /....started off like it was going to be real creative...then it ended ineffective..6/10
mix some black with a bad boy..still cant cum like-whoa
aisle gave me a rappad victory last week..
..and now through me a KayOhh.
Best punch in your verse..and it was a gimme..9/10
34/50 points..you came decent..but I wasnt feeling some of your lines..too simplistic..try some creativity or something
Straight battle.
Vote-KayOhh
You do mean dots correct? He didnt use dash marks...either way blagh punch..5/10
^
wack bitch did u even read his shit.......lmfao
*cough*swayer*cough*
no man i ent ....i just mean he sed you meen dots.................when i didnt as if he cud read you see ldsa *-* at the end.newb
...Quote:
Originally Posted by KayOhh
Brass knuckles Per-mitt, still couldnt Drive a hard punch bitch,
State ID card say'n ur dope, ... haven't seen a worst Lie-since;
^first line is reaching second line is fine...
Aint takin chances with this battle, like throw'n Dice,
Merk Judge Per-roll, leave him Slippin tryna Surf-ice;
^its suffice not surfice.....so i can't give that too ya..
'Soon as name ^ punches are played out you'll probly be elite,
But no one Defends ur Honor... so I continue slash'n At-ur-knees;
^good wordplay on the last line...meh good line
Until Fusion too is here, for an Instant then falls off,
See I own each one of ur Cliques, ... ha jus like Microsoft;
^eh...microsoft similes are kinda played but i'll give it to ya
You must be Ill Mentally, even tryna out verse this mortar,
I jus fuck'n Diagnosed and Served you, here's ur Diss-order;
^diss -order lines are played as fuck not givin that too ya..
coward doing nething to make and take the piss
but how you spost to connect a punch..
..when everylines like-----this;
^ aight not bad .....except the lines are what connects the punch..
turn you crazy like epilectics...having a fit
i no i dropp'd second..but you live to be next to $pit(sig)
^creative.....good....although the concept is played
ill kurupt your style..
..and shot you like a dillinger
ive beaten most of your crew..now u no y i look so familiar
^wan't feelin that line leave the wordplay out for you lol
check'd your verse..to be honest..it wasnt fit for this board
cus you seem'd like prisoners wanting out..
..desperate for that level record(4-4)
^meh i could see it.....
mix some black with a bad boy..still cant cum like-whoa
aisle gave me a rappad victory last week..
..and now through me a KayOhh.
^nice closer aight so its like this
Judge closer for sure
judge opener for sure..
pretty equal in the middle so i figure that judge takes this one overall
no hate ..pz
Lol. Obviously not.Quote:
Originally Posted by The Judge
You gotta admit, that was pretty dense of him.
:noob:
Anyway...I'll make this a vote in a second.
Brass knuckles Per-mitt, still couldnt Drive a hard punch bitch,
State ID card say'n ur dope, ... haven't seen a worst Lie-since;
Tight wordplay. Not a real hard punch. 5/10
Aint takin chances with this battle, like throw'n Dice,
Merk Judge Per-roll, leave him Slippin tryna Surf-ice;
Not enough punch in this, decent wordplay. 3/10
'Soon as name ^ punches are played out you'll probly be elite,
But no one Defends ur Honor... so I continue slash'n At-ur-knees;
Nah, didn't like that one. They are played out :laugh: 2/10
Until Fusion too is here, for an Instant then falls off,
See I own each one of ur Cliques, ... ha jus like Microsoft;
Again, decent wordplay, not a hard punch though. 4/10
You must be Ill Mentally, even tryna out verse this mortar,
I jus fuck'n Diagnosed and Served you, here's ur Diss-order;
Bleh. Not great. 4/10
18/50
Not bad Kay...try to focus a little more on the punches next battle maybe. Nice wordplay throughtout, and decent verse.
coward doing nething to make and take the piss
but how you spost to connect a punch..
..when everylines like-----this;
Lol, good personal, punch was somewhat played. 5/10
turn you crazy like epilectics...having a fit
i no i dropp'd second..but you live to be next to $pit(sig)
Nah, not feeling it too much. 2/10
ill kurupt your style..
..and shot you like a dillinger
ive beaten most of your crew..now u no y i look so familiar
Meh, not really, not much wittiness. 3/10
check'd your verse..to be honest..it wasnt fit for this board
cus you seem'd like prisoners wanting out..
..desperate for that level record(4-4)
Record punches are played. I used them when I first came here! 3/10
mix some black with a bad boy..still cant cum like-whoa
aisle gave me a rappad victory last week..
..and now through me a KayOhh.
Okay...just okay. 4/10
17/25
Wow, close. Very.
Overall this came down to a battle of wit.
Judge came with decent punches while KayOhh went for wordplay.
Neither was witty enough or came hard hitting enough.
But the useage of wordplay within punches was a definite plus for KayOhh.
V/KayOhh
And anyone who plans to bitch that this is a crew vote should die.
I always vote fair.
crew vote.................lmfao
Thanks for tha votes De, P (if Judge'll allow it...) n Action.
I read the verse..obviously since I broke it down..the point was..that is was ineffective..and it would of made better since-if-his-entire-verse-consisted-of-this...but it was only for wordplay..so "everyline" was not like that..thats why I said "either way..blagh punch" If you still fail to understand the way I voted. Read your verse and his over again. So I repeat..straight battle.
thanks for the votes..........1-2 thanks to 1 crew vote but fuck it woot im still alive
KO-
Brass knuckles Per-mitt, still couldnt Drive a hard punch bitch,
State ID card say'n ur dope, ... haven't seen a worst Lie-since;
Dope wordplay. Punch kinda lacking ...
Aint takin chances with this battle, like throw'n Dice,
Merk Judge Per-roll, leave him Slippin tryna Surf-ice;
Again, nice wordplay..didnt hit hard though..
'Soon as name ^ punches are played out you'll probly be elite,
But no one Defends ur Honor... so I continue slash'n At-ur-knees;
Decent...I'm seein consistent nice wordplay..
Until Fusion too is here, for an Instant then falls off,
See I own each one of ur Cliques, ... ha jus like Microsoft;
First line was real nice personal, second..eh no
You must be Ill Mentally, even tryna out verse this mortar,
I jus fuck'n Diagnosed and Served you, here's ur Diss-order;
I think its already been said but dissorder lines are played..cmon, you knew that..
****
Judge-
coward doing nething to make and take the piss
but how you spost to connect a punch..
..when everylines like-----this;
Hmm..so so punch...ok opener
turn you crazy like epilectics...having a fit
i no i dropp'd second..but you live to be next to $pit(sig)
Nice sig punch & personal..seen this kinda diss alot though..
ill kurupt your style..
..and shot you like a dillinger
ive beaten most of your crew..now u no y i look so familiar
Kinda blah here..prolly weakest bar
check'd your verse..to be honest..it wasnt fit for this board
cus you seem'd like prisoners wanting out..
..desperate for that level record(4-4)
Nice actually..liked the thought and creativity..
mix some black with a bad boy..still cant cum like-whoa
aisle gave me a rappad victory last week..
..and now through me a KayOhh.
Started as what I thought was gunna be another dumb sexual joke, but very nice closer..creative name punch/personal..
Damn. This was hella close..kayohh was really consistent in his wordplay approach, which brought in creativity..however it hurt his punches and personals. Judge came with more punches and personals, less wordplay, but still had some creativity mixed in. Ima have to give this to judge, mostly because I believe that personals win battles alot, and judge just had more categories in his favor..it was close though, nice battle.
Vote- Judge
Kay Ohh- Very nice wordplay, however it took away from the punch itself. I liked your second bar the best, and also your opener was decent too. But the 3rd bar seemed forced, good setup in the second to last bar, the punch then fell off. Last line is very much played. But decent drop though.
Judge- Second bar was very, very nice, liked that punch a lot. Personals can be very much hard hitting and I haven't seen it if it is played. Also liked the last line a lot, but put a better set-up than something with cum. The record line was nice, again a nice personal but the familiar line wasn't great. Good drop though.
Overall, I'm gonna give this to Judge because of his personals, they hit harder than kay Ohh's wordplay. Very close though and respect to both, pz.
3-1......thanks alot everyone......................
aight battle seen both of you come wayy iller tho..
ok..
Kay:Nice verse in my opinion, went straight for the heart, good punches, wordplay was good..and a some decent personals..
''Aint takin chances with this battle, like throw'n Dice,
Merk Judge Per-roll, leave him Slippin tryna Surf-ice;
'Soon as name ^ punches are played out you'll probly be elite,
But no one Defends ur Honor... so I continue slash'n At-ur-knees;''---This was bit was dope..
Overall good verse..quick and straght to the point..
Judge:Good verse aswell..i just don't like your structure..and using bold didn't help your situation...you also had some personals and punches, but there were a few played conecpts there too..ive seen you coem much more direct then this before..
''coward doing nething to make and take the piss
but how you spost to connect a punch..
..when everylines like-----this;
^ aight not bad .....except the lines are what connects the punch..
turn you crazy like epilectics...having a fit
i no i dropp'd second..but you live to be next to $pit(sig)''--This part was blaze..but then after that you kinda fell off..
Overall decent verse, but lacked the edge that Kay had (in my opinion)..
V-Kay..
Honest vote guys..no hate..
Peace
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Brass knuckles Per-mitt, still couldnt Drive a hard punch bitch,
State ID card say'n ur dope, ... haven't seen a worst Lie-since;
very nice
Aint takin chances with this battle, like throw'n Dice,
Merk Judge Per-roll, leave him Slippin tryna Surf-ice;
good
'Soon as name ^ punches are played out you'll probly be elite,
But no one Defends ur Honor... so I continue slash'n At-ur-knees;
no
Until Fusion too is here, for an Instant then falls off,
See I own each one of ur Cliques, ... ha jus like Microsoft;
nope
You must be Ill Mentally, even tryna out verse this mortar,
I jus fuck'n Diagnosed and Served you, here's ur Diss-order;
played
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coward doing nething to make and take the piss
but how you spost to connect a punch..
..when everylines like-----this;
decent
turn you crazy like epilectics...having a fit
i no i dropp'd second..but you live to be next to $pit(sig)
good
ill kurupt your style..
..and shot you like a dillinger
ive beaten most of your crew..now u no y i look so familiar
no
check'd your verse..to be honest..it wasnt fit for this board
cus you seem'd like prisoners wanting out..
..desperate for that level record(4-4)
ok
mix some black with a bad boy..still cant cum like-whoa
aisle gave me a rappad victory last week..
..and now through me a KayOhh.
nice wordplay
KayOhh had the best bar in the battle with his opener...but fell of...Judge came good throughout..
Vote=Judge for more consistency in his punches
kay-
Brass knuckles Per-mitt, still couldnt Drive a hard punch bitch,
State ID card say'n ur dope, ... haven't seen a worst Lie-since;
haha...not bad
Aint takin chances with this battle, like throw'n Dice,
Merk Judge Per-roll, leave him Slippin tryna Surf-ice;
wack
'Soon as name ^ punches are played out you'll probly be elite,
But no one Defends ur Honor... so I continue slash'n At-ur-knees;
pretty good
Until Fusion too is here, for an Instant then falls off,
See I own each one of ur Cliques, ... ha jus like Microsoft;
weak
You must be Ill Mentally, even tryna out verse this mortar,
I jus fuck'n Diagnosed and Served you, here's ur Diss-order;
played
judge-
coward doing nething to make and take the piss
but how you spost to connect a punch..
..when everylines like-----this;
weak
turn you crazy like epilectics...having a fit
i no i dropp'd second..but you live to be next to $pit
haha nice..good personal
ill kurupt your style..
..and shot you like a dillinger
ive beaten most of your crew..now u no y i look so familiar
decent
check'd your verse..to be honest..it wasnt fit for this board
cus you seem'd like prisoners wanting out..
..desperate for that level record(4-4)
decent
mix some black with a bad boy..still cant cum like-whoa
aisle gave me a rappad victory last week..
..and now through me a KayOhh.
not bad..lol
Yeah um, close battle, both had a few nice punches, but kay also had a couple terrible ones while judge was pretty good throughout.
V/judge
5-2 thanks very much EVERYONE who took the time..nice battle kay
^ Yes, thx everyone.
Kay
Brass knuckles Per-mitt, still couldnt Drive a hard punch bitch,
State ID card say'n ur dope, ... haven't seen a worst Lie-since;
ha good wordplay
Aint takin chances with this battle, like throw'n Dice,
Merk Judge Per-roll, leave him Slippin tryna Surf-ice;
eh... didn't really feel this one
'Soon as name ^ punches are played out you'll probly be elite,
But no one Defends ur Honor... so I continue slash'n At-ur-knees;
ok, decent
Until Fusion too is here, for an Instant then falls off,
See I own each one of ur Cliques, ... ha jus like Microsoft;
decent personal
You must be Ill Mentally, even tryna out verse this mortar,
I jus fuck'n Diagnosed and Served you, here's ur Diss-order;
not really a punch
Judge
coward doing nething to make and take the piss
but how you spost to connect a punch..
..when everylines like-----this;
HUH? no
turn you crazy like epilectics...having a fit
i no i dropp'd second..but you live to be next to $pit(sig)
ouch, dope LOL
ill kurupt your style..
..and shot you like a dillinger
ive beaten most of your crew..now u no y i look so familiar
not really a punch on Kay
check'd your verse..to be honest..it wasnt fit for this board
cus you seem'd like prisoners wanting out..
..desperate for that level record(4-4)
nah
mix some black with a bad boy..still cant cum like-whoa
aisle gave me a rappad victory last week..
..and now through me a KayOhh.
Ha good play on the name
This was actually close..... Judge had the two harder personals, and I have to give it to him this time. Kay you really had no personals at all, but your wit was def sharper.... but those two personals Judge threw were good enough to take it
vote - Judge
Judge wins, closed.
The Judge (4-5)
KayOhh (4-4)