LW Matchup: Brethren (7-1) vs Young P (5-3)

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Verses due by Saturday 12 PM Eastern!!!
Check ins are due Thursday 12 PM Eastern!!!. If you don't check in there will be a replacement.
No show verses will not be permitted, if you drop a no show verse and the other person shows before the deadline you will not be allowed to edit your verse. Please don't wait for the last minute to drop, drop as early as you can.
Agree on a line limit of 10-20 lines, nothing more nor less.
If Brethren wins this week he will have a shot in the LLL.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=126526
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=126541
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=126528 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=126537
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=126542

Hey there fam...

Let's do 12

Edit.

Sluggish from apathy, vote in all my battles... you're a fan of me
Young's a holy figure??? I guess Brethren'll have to can-a-P
Subbed for rental, tease this retard for money and run ya dentals
So when Brethren makes fun of you... it's only fund-da-mentals
Haneous just incase, kid's truly an idiot ... he's AIMing me cherades
I mean he's wet behind the ears... because I'm raining his parade
Spoon-fed-rhymes... P's like a scalpless Jamacian...he dreads minds
And we all know even if P drops late, he'll still make the dead lines
Edge ya health... you were never 'fully' dope, you even said yourself
When Young feels like a million bucks, I come and spread the wealth
This fool is hard??? Couldn't spit frozen flow with the coolest bars
You play the hand you were dealt... and Breth'll just pull ya cards

Back to it....

Brethren's the next one to go, and I bare my hitlist...
So he had nothing to say...cuz I scared him shitless!
Keeps telling himself he's nice.. talented.. dope defiant...
He ain't ego tripping...hes getting beat the fuck up by it!
And after months of battling, Breth still hasn't shook kids...
So my main purpose in this battle...is to simply overlook Shit!
Too much hype and anticipation, but this newb ain't special...
I'd have to tunnel the world...just so I could stoop to his level!
Plus, when asked about himself, Brethren only spoke of witt...
I'd make him swallow his pride...but he'd probably choke on it!
Your real dope, and I know that while I'm winking it hurts...
But you've been on my mind...lately I been thinking the worst!
It's over though.. got no need to give you a flower dear...
You didn't even plan to win...you've got staying power here!

Meh, went 2 lines over. Shouldn't be a big deal...
:)

Sluggish from apathy, vote in all my battles... you're a fan of me
Young's a holy figure??? I guess Brethren'll have to can-a-P

Vs

Brethren's the next one to go, and I bare my hitlist...
So he had nothing to say...cuz I scared him shitless!

Brethen...felt the punch more..and it was witty..Young your concept is played.

Subbed for rental, tease this retard for money and run ya dentals
So when Brethren makes fun of you... it's only fund-da-mentals

VS

Keeps telling himself he's nice.. talented.. dope defiant...
He ain't ego tripping...hes getting beat the fuck up by it!

LoL Young P just because it was funny..and pretty creative..wasnt really feeling Brethen's wordplay.

Haneous just incase, kid's truly an idiot ... he's AIMing me cherades
I mean he's wet behind the ears... because I'm raining his parade

[B]VS]/B]

And after months of battling, Breth still hasn't shook kids...
So my main purpose in this battle...is to simply overlook Shit!

Brethen feeling it..it was witty..Young wassup with the shit lines? I never feel any line that ends with a cuss word..just because..I dont know..wasnt feeling it

Spoon-fed-rhymes... P's like a scalpless Jamacian...he dreads minds
And we all know even if P drops late, he'll still make the dead lines

VS

Too much hype and anticipation, but this newb ain't special...
I'd have to tunnel the world...just so I could stoop to his level!

Young P The set up was good..and the punch was great. Perfect two line's.

Edge ya health... you were never 'fully' dope, you even said yourself
When Young feels like a million bucks, I come and spread the wealth

VS

Plus, when asked about himself, Brethren only spoke of witt...
I'd make him swallow his pride...but he'd probably choke on it!

Brethen Young P, that swallow his pride/choke on it is a played concept. Enough said. His was more creative.

This fool is hard??? Couldn't spit frozen flow with the coolest bars
You play the hand you were dealt... and Breth'll just pull ya cards

VS

Your real dope, and I know that while I'm winking it hurts...
But you've been on my mind...lately I been thinking the worst!

Young P Liked the set up..liked the punch...funny.

Im not paying attention to Young P's last two lines. Just because I think its unfair. But besides that, line for line its a tie...BUT...if you include consistancy..creativity...and shit personals...Brethen edged it by a hair...just because I believe he put a little more effort into it. But both you came nice. Feeling both verses.

Vote-Brethen

this is simply put....
young p - came decent
Your real dope, and I know that while I'm winking it hurts...
But you've been on my mind...lately I been thinking the worst!


brethren - came relentless
This fool is hard??? Couldn't spit frozen flow with the coolest bars
You play the hand you were dealt... and Breth'll just pull ya cards

vote - brethren ... cuz that line was straight net gankstuh...

vote brethen........... i loved the fun the mentals...... its wrong to make fun of them, bu tthat lines is fucking sick

P....... u had a great verse, and this is hard to vote sinse ur both in my crew, but brethen just came sicker < not a real word>

As much as I want to vot gainst Brethren cause I want anutha rematch..he did win this

He came a lot more witty with hard punches and creative lines...Youn P came OK..opener was mad played...some ok punches...but jus not hard enough to beat Brethren...

Win-Brethren

Breth-okay well as always came with wordplay...
good punches and personals consistently
always witty :thumbup: keep it goin man
flowed as always no structure errorss
personals were there(first line)

Young P-well punches hit hard and consistently
came with some creativity and personals were
also there on your part...no flaws in structure or
flow as Breths was...no wordplay...its not really
needed though

Very close battle here but I'm goin wit punches...
My V/Young P...more consistent punches...soryr breth your wordplay is applauded though...

Brethren: I was feeling your verse as a whole. You had some wicked-nice wordplay in most of your lines. Some of your punches didn't hit too directly, but the majority of them were nice. You had some nice personals thrown in there too. Your verse also flowed rather nicely.

Best lines by you:

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Spoon-fed-rhymes... P's like a scalpless Jamacian...he dreads minds
And we all know even if P drops late, he'll still make the dead lines
Edge ya health... you were never 'fully' dope, you even said yourself
When Young feels like a million bucks, I come and spread the wealth

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^I was feeling all of that...

Young P: Your verse was also rather nice. Your main downfall was that a few of your punches were rather played-out. Most of your punches were ok though, and you had some rather decent personals. Your verse also flowed pretty nicely.

Your best line:

Quote:

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Your real dope, and I know that while I'm winking it hurts...
But you've been on my mind...lately I been thinking the worst!

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^that one was decent, although might be a bit played.

V/ Brethren for a more unique and harder-hitting verse, although this was a decent battle.

Brethren-

Sluggish from apathy, vote in all my battles... you're a fan of me
Young's a holy figure??? I guess Brethren'll have to can-a-P
Nice wordplay and play on his name..creative
Subbed for rental, tease this retard for money and run ya dentals
So when Brethren makes fun of you... it's only fund-da-mentals
Lol..nice....lol
Haneous just incase, kid's truly an idiot ... he's AIMing me cherades
I mean he's wet behind the ears... because I'm raining his parade
Ok..decent...again nice creativity and punch
Spoon-fed-rhymes... P's like a scalpless Jamacian...he dreads minds
And we all know even if P drops late, he'll still make the dead lines
Ouch..nice
Edge ya health... you were never 'fully' dope, you even said yourself
When Young feels like a million bucks, I come and spread the wealth
Very creative again..but a weak punch
This fool is hard??? Couldn't spit frozen flow with the coolest bars
You play the hand you were dealt... and Breth'll just pull ya cards
Eh..so so...weakest bar IMO..

*****

Young P-

Brethren's the next one to go, and I bare my hitlist...
So he had nothing to say...cuz I scared him shitless!
Eh, weak opener and punch..
Keeps telling himself he's nice.. talented.. dope defiant...
He ain't ego tripping...hes getting beat the fuck up by it!
Er..ok...nice idea
And after months of battling, Breth still hasn't shook kids...
So my main purpose in this battle...is to simply overlook Shit!
Had a nice personal setup, but ended it weak..
Too much hype and anticipation, but this newb ain't special...
I'd have to tunnel the world...just so I could stoop to his level!
Again, nice beginning..but the stoop to their level lines are played
Plus, when asked about himself, Brethren only spoke of witt...
I'd make him swallow his pride...but he'd probably choke on it!
Not bad
Your real dope, and I know that while I'm winking it hurts...
But you've been on my mind...lately I been thinking the worst!
Lol..nice creativity..
It's over though.. got no need to give you a flower dear...
You didn't even plan to win...you've got staying power here!
Decent..thought it coulda been real nice with a different first line..

Hmm..overall, Brethren got this. Brought alot more wit and wordplay, along with excellent flow and creativity. Young P, nice verse, but nothing hit very hard. You too, had really nice flow and setup..just nothing spectacular. Thats why my vote goes to Breth.

Vote - Brethren

Brethen- Very nice job on wordplay as usual. Your opener I liked a lot, hit very hard coming with wordplay and a personal. It continued well, but your finisher wasn't good, but I liked the fundamentals line and the million bucks line as well. Good consistancy in your verse.

Young P- I've seen you drop better, only really feeling the choke line and the thinking the worst bar was very good as well. The rest seemed either filler or forced. Nothing really hit too hard and a lot of the times, the set-up was better than the actual punch.


Vote- Brethen because of consistancy with his punches. Good battle though n respect to both pz.

Lol. Fuck this. Take me out Aisle.

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Originally Posted by Lyric

He came a lot more witty with hard punches

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He had how many punches?
and in which bars?

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Originally Posted by D. Cypher

He had how many punches?
and in which bars?

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^ Came how weak? And in how many bars?

haha...

dont go out cause u lost 1 man..............p check my record i kept goin...

I don't care what your record is.
This is a newb fucking league.
I'll elevate then go to LLL.
Not the Jr league.

Oh gee. Apologies Aisle.
I was just frustrated as anyone would be.
I'm still in. :(
Good job Brethren and good luck in LLL.

ehh, you both came alright. difference being, if young p doesnt come played but comes with witty concepts again, he could make LLL.

brethren had the fundamentals line, which i used in like 5th grade that was played. he had the pull your cards which is also played... young p had a couple played cliches... but they were more creative & overall young p took this battle.

it was close, due to you both coming played. and the fact that young p puts !!!!!! after all his punches, lmao..

vote - p

Brethren came with a lot of played concepts and punches that id hear from little kids. Young P had some played concepts but simply took this battle with better punches and he connected more...wasnt really feeling Brethren's verse....stay up..

V/ Young P

yes... but what is not played... that is the question

Sorry the votes are a bit late but first to 5 is usually how it runs.

Brethren wins and continues on to LLL; Young P is given the title by default due to Brethren moving on, if he chooses to stay then sure do as $pitacular.

Brethren (8-1)
Young P (5-4)