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Due Friday 11:59 PM eastern time
check your asses in by wednesday.
10-20 lines, now agree on it.
ill try
hmm i aint posting ` imma do a no show verse if he dont post up his ish`
I'm breaking Ed's spirit, shearing whatever wack remnants still intact
Because Ed tried to harness his skill...and the son of a bitch snapped
Trapped in a brittle body, you're weak. i'm smashing this porcelain hoe
because like import taxes you'd tariff the fucking wind began to blow
Knocking Di straight out...off of his high horse and out of his stirrups
Cuz I told the moron to czech himself...and now he logs in from Europe
Not sure if you're still suicidal man, apparently you ain't been committed
But it's like a blunt pair of scissors...i wish you could go through with it
Should've quitted dog, i'll half ass a verse and leave you slain
It's like your neck is a point...the way i'm cordin' it plain
What abysmal structure...no, seriously...god awful, the worst by far..
But i will admit it's effective...in masking how bad your punches are!
ill post today` im busy with some other things
okay`
wow you suck`
im topical ` but doper than you even without chorus`
Burrying yoo ass in the woods
& bringing the gump into the forest
what!
just fuck this handicapped match -facing this child
how the hell you gonna come dope`
yall known for the ghostwriting styles
fuck this faggot` w/ concepts, a` la queer..
face it `your useless here
as a bar filled w/ .. non-alcoholic beer..
and hows that pussy? -ugly and broke 'hmm
this bitch dont get payed`..
he just turned into a necrofillia
so he finally could get layed`..
& like ashes` your shit isnt worth repeating..
knocking off some rust?, shit ..
I thought that rust was breathing...
cause shit man`
you what? ` live on the net
still fail to produce some dope rhymes
just typing rb.com to put your life of the line
but` yea, ur shits dope, i agree .
its blunt,to bad `said it b4` ashes is all that remains..
'no need to even come personal'
cause axe allready putted..
you & the whole crew in a state of shame
but, nuff played games cause`
serious kid` you are worse than sad..
no need to even diss you
'hence forward'..new crews..` nuff said.
fucka typos'
vote - meters ..
had some ok lines & an overall better verse.
edicius you need to stop using that style...
and your punches are too obvious, newbie ish.
word.. meters came far better...
won this with a decent verse...
Edicius. you seriously need to go back to topical... this just isnt for you
oh my ` plz break down.
V/ Meters
Edicius has potential if he just took time to reword his lines a bit, punches were a bit too obvious, Meters had some iight lines, but nothin that really stood out but still better than Edicius, Work on ya lines & punches a bit Edicius & you'll be fine,
vote-meters
eddy isnt good at this battle thing
meters has elevated, even though i have seen him do better in LLLJr
his verse was good enough to get the win here.
i dont know whats been up Eddy lately..
anyways
v/meters ...not bad meters
V/ Meters.
V - Meters
He was slightly better
Stick to topicals eddy
V/Meters sorry but Edward you need to start elevating
in battling fast my man.
He jus won it by being direct...
Your punches have potential Ed but you just
dont execute well mate.
Pz
I gotta go with Meters here.... punches were nice, wordplay was there to make it even meaner, but most of all because Eddy didn't hit as hard with personals... Meters you did fairly well here
best punch
I'm breaking Ed's spirit, shearing whatever wack remnants still intact
Because Ed tried to harness his skill...and the son of a bitch snapped
*shivers* that was horrible.
Meters - Had some blahzay punches, but much better than anything Eddy threw.
Eddy - Don't listen to these kids saying you only need a little rewording. Son, everything about your battling needs a whole revision. I'm telling you this BECAUSE I think you're cool Eddy. I don't like seeing you embarrass yourself like this. Take whatever skills/style you think you have, and trash it. revamp everything...start over, cuz this isn't working for you.
Vote ~ Meters
im topical ` but doper than you even without chorus`
Burrying yoo ass in the woods
& bringing the gump into the forest
Ed brought some dope fire with that opener...
Real inventive, creative, hard, and funny.
Best line of the whole freakin battle.
But that's all Ed brought.
The rest was blah, boring, didn't make sense, and was weak.
Sorry, friend.
Meters started off very slow, stretched, and dull...
But from "czech yourself" on...
It was all heat and it melted Ed.
The personal in the closer was just vicious.
Meters wins.
Peace
Meters wins. (2-1)
Edicius loses (1-2)