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hello beautiful....rules?....and this is my
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No crew, d/r, hate, etc. votes
I ain't big on time, I'd say by no later this time tomorrow........
I dun care who gone first....
more rules...
no feeding
biting
and lets just drop in 30 mins ok?
Coo............................................... ...........
ok...Daz is officially in the building for a while...
Daz has been out for a while..Rusty..some might think that im lame...
so in my herb acceptance speech...ill just mention your name...
this battles endin the same...Daz wins..the site just sighs....
Xzibit's my best friend...he took your mom..and pimped my ride...
my wins inside...the bag why dont you follow it...
chuz if pride was my dick..kid why dont you just swallow it....
all my effort model it...your punches?..go ahead you foo...
your opponents no showed...to stay out the same thread with you...
why neglect the truth...you lost kid...why'd u ruin ur self...
and here i'll give you the win...by dq'ing myself....
miscontruing your health...yeah man forea...(L)
This trip just ended bad...like the one in Korea...
wow...newbish^^...oh welll im Daz
Gettin sick of no shows....Who's Down?
IP: C1DA C961
Look, I'm gettin tired of the no shows that wanna battle or agree to, then check in an never drop. Who want's to do this?
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No crew, d/r, hate votes
You agree to it, I'll set it up
Let's do this...........
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thats my reason for the no show line
Aight....whatever
Look at Daz...just stares at his microphone til' I ask em what's wrong?
Like Digital Underground...He can't ever win by singing "The Same Song!"
He just shurgged his shoulders...looked at the crowd, then walked away
Because the one real player...just witnessed his ass got played!
You don't deserve the stage...sick of this kid...I'll call em a lost cause
Cause as soon as he got lost...I began to hear more applause...
This dude's got so many flaws...Daz the Dentist says "Rinse and Spit"
Mr. Root Canal gonna need a few crowns after I bust his lips...
What's wrong with this?...Do I feel that we have a problem?
This fool thought he hit a home run...but he's wrong! I robbed em!
Damn...Similar to a dictionary...I am filled with words
Then Daz asked me a question bout math...but nah I ain't In-Ta-Jerz!
at least ya drop bro....solid verse....i guess let votes come in.......
let votin commence............................so GO!
ummmkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk im out for the night
daz took this battle for better disses.. and disses that actually went as his opponent hard.. daz had one punchline in his verse that shined well.. "this battles endin the same...Daz wins..the site just sighs....
Xzibit's my best friend...he took your mom..and pimped my ride"
the rest of his verse had moderate punchlines.. now.. trip marxx's verse was kind of weak because he really didnt have one punchline or diss that really stood out infact his attepmted disses were really basic and lacked any hardness..
i vote for daz on this battle cuz he had better punchlines and his disses seemed more creative and harder than trip marxx's did
Uppin this.............................................. ......
I vote trip marxx......Trip had some good flows and some good structure.....WOrd play was easy....UNderstandable and easy to read....Also your lines was crutial....ONly some was though but I liked ya rhymes
Daz-Structure was good very understable and easy word play....Also everything is the same with trip marxx becuz tall had everything the same...the only problem here is that trip had a little better flow then you did.....You was good but try working on hittin harder on them punches..aight......
v/Trip Marxx
Return the favor
Lyricaly ILL...vs...FLowsinevitable (4-0) just one more vote..But if nobody votes can you hit up for me....Holla...O yes its in front lines...PLEASE VOTE NIGGA AIGHT?
Preciate' the votes.....ILL.....I'll catch another one of ya battles, as that one was already finished.........anyway.....
Uppin
Daz-ok punches not the best..liked the
pimp my ride line but...mom jokes are a no
shoulda re-worded it diff...fine flow good
rhyme scheme nothin wrong wit that
a little creative...
Trip-I liked the In-ta-Jerz...had me rollin',
ok punches also...not very creative either
rhyme scheme n flow was the same old
Dr. Suess flow...I saw like 1 multi
My V/Trip...for the only quotable line in here...In-Ta-Jerz...
vote on my battle wit Lil E's its at the very top of Front Lines...
daz-good flow, nice structure i liked the disses like that pimp m ride, but the mama jokes have to go, it was an alright verse with lil complexity
trip-it was newbish to me, you werent really dissing him, just saying rhymes about what you are going to do to him, work on your creativity, wordplay, and all that good stuff
vote, daz cause he had a the better disses, and a bit more advance than trip
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Coo.....preciate the votes.....Syn....I'll peep ya battle.......
Daz... ur verse was good... ur structure wasn't really good tho.... punchlines? ok... u should work on them
Trip... ur verse was better bcoz ur disses were good... but ur structure was weak, but its aight... good punchlines, all that....
Vote=Trip
...now can 1 of u plz vote on 1 of my battles? u'll find the links on my sig.
peace
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Uppin.............Drop Links An I'll Check Ya Battles.......................
i voted for this battle... now can one of u vote for mine:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=125823
Im gonna vote for Trip Marxx his lines were good especially the lost cause line that was good.
v/Trip Marxx
Vote on this battle
Daz took this because of his better disses.
His flow was immaculate & it made a better
read. His personals were aiight but he was a
lil rusty.
Trip needs to work on his punches, but his flow
was alrite.
V/ Daz
Vote on this..
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=125650
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some of these gay votes gotta go homie.....and this is my 3rd upp i believe
I feel ya..........................gonna up this one more time........................
Daz-Nice easy flows..Aight structure...Some good personals
and like 2 hard punches...Not complexy...Also nice
Vocab...easy ta read...Work on punches more
and progress and ya will be tight
Trip-Came a lil bit hardder..Nice structure...You
had more hard punches than Daz..Easy ta read to
Complexy(NAH)work on ya punch lines
aight
v/Tripp marxx
Return the facor against me and parkcide...Look at front lines aight to find it
uppin
Uppp.............................................. ........................
last up ever.............................................. .