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check check ... lol i already made the battle my bad.. lets do this ..Quote:
Originally Posted by Oakley
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Sidious'll slaughter this [cattle thatt'll] have you..feel'in sorry u gotta [battle this]
Your a Vet?...Dawg don't [flatter your spits],
I'll find you "backin ya ass up" like the [avatar of Catalist] http://img43.photobucket.com/albums/...nodia/6043.gif hahaha...
You got a *Big-Head* means ill serve it on a [fatter platter to End The Matter SHITT]
Actin like ya got a title mann..*your lookin a lil light on the waist*---
Ya'll get trains ran on ya ass... thas why u actin like the [Freight* of this Place]
u aint gangsta kidd...closest you get to *throwin signs* [is a protest you pest]
Im real kid i ACTUALLY DO ALL THE SHIT U WRITE IN YOUR TEXT-
I battle everyday so destroying emcees is [Nothin new 2 Me]-
So if you wanna spit back you gonna be [*ass out like Nudity*]- lol
***************FINISH HIM**********************************
The *sun shines on me, so i *wear you down* [LIKE YOUR NAME]- (oakley)
~One in O Ez~ cuz like *Joe Buddens-- [*you aint got GAME] (buddens v. game of g-unit )
http://img43.photobucket.com/albums/...ia/sidious.gif
!!!BITCH!!!
Face it kid....ya mind? it just aint stable...
You can't even rap untill you clear the table
It's strait amusing...claimin what your gun's will do ta me...
but dawg...you cant pull a 9 untill u hit your puberty...
Even Osirus says your gay...Sid...you can't deny the facts...
Face it....The only thing str8 on you is that negroe hat...
Take it off...your white, and son...your like fourteen....
Forget the Drug addict...Work on winning a battle.."in your dreams"
Worried bout the green...in ya sig...like ya worth a hundred twenty
The fact that your names intact...bring's the Face value to a penny
im pretty sure.. you knew the rule of no feeding... and thats all u did.. but im not worried in the least.. votes.. first to 5.
where exactly did i feed?...
not sure?.......why not explain?.....lol
O yeh....and if i did? which I didn't...cus I didnt mention your verse....
it cancells out the pre-write that you have had saved for a day....
lol.....so remain...."not worried in the least".....pc-1
alrite
sidious u need to drop that whole set up, i didn't understand it very well.. i read ur verse a few times, and thought it wasnt bad at all. you had some nice punches, personals, but i thought your wordplay was abit wack.
oakly, you hit this kid very well with some nice lines, like the 3rd and the forth, bout puberty n shit. pretty much every line you had was a punch, and i enjoyed reading urs alot more than sidious. you just had something i liked, good flow, and get rhymes
my vote: oakly
oh yeah forgot, karma yall
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=125885
this disgusts me....this being the oaklley that had the audacity to challenge me to a battle..?and sidious talked all that stuff but his structure was horrible....it was the most disgusting verse i've ever witnessed in my life...the context wasnt that bad..juist the screwed up format..what the hell is up with all the dots and parentheses and etc?... all that crap clogs the screen...i couldnt even read the lines staight..Oakley wins this only by his structure....his verse is garbage...and if sidious knew how to format he woulda prbably won...anyway....regretfully
v/oakley
both was coo.....i wanted to follow this battle cince the shit talkn came about...
Oakley:
ure verse was coo, kinda plain on sum lines, but it seemd to flow arite...ure punches were arite..not too great u kno? but i liked the line
"Take it off...your white, and son...your like fourteen....
Forget the Drug addict...Work on winning a battle.."in your dreams".."
that was coo
Sid:
ure set up is crazy but its coo, it kinda makes it easier to understand, but it seemd to flow well and punches were coo....wordplay was deesent...lyrics were coo, hittn on his name was good...
i liked the line:
"I battle everyday so destroying emcees is [Nothin new 2 Me]-
So if you wanna spit back you gonna be [*ass out like Nudity*]-"
i chose Sid overall because his punches were harder and he seemd to rip more on Oak
VOTE=Sidious
CiiiiiiiiiiN
thanks for votes....
cinladen...dazasta....liles.....
uppin
links will be hit up...as always....pc-1
sorry sidious, your structure is the epitome of horrible. oakley had a consistent flow, but wasnt that great neither. no punchlines worthy of quoting...
return the favor and vote on the battles in my signiture
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom
you Sidious you had some good lines....But the worse thing is the structure..to complexy......Very understandable becuz too many of these in you verses =[ ]= that makes thing very complicated....Also you lines was a little better but work on those and you will be good aight son....
Oakly-Of couse you had some alright verses...Not that good as Sidious....But even though you had some good strutcutre,not that much complexy, and very understable you get my vote....I was feelin some of your things....But if he had all that stuff I said He would have beat you.....
v/oakly
B4 I vote vote in this battle and I will come back and hit you up.....you have my word on it aight
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=125842
since I voted man return the favor against me and flows aight.....
uppin
LOL... u make me laugh man.. you dont understand my verse because i put brackets in my rhyming words?.. how dumb are you? and you couldnt understand it because i put a star next 2 wordplay you might wanna read twice?.. if u cant understand this format of text battling you are a n00b.. im sorry kiddo.. but i shit on Oakley and thats that... i got an idea.. why dont u flow my verse outloud and then his and ull see whats up.. also me going like this "...." between say a line; is just a short pause if you 2 spit it on mic.. thats why i do it for your info.. aight so now that u ALL know this.. maybe u want to reread. cuz like i said b4.. this kid was shit on.. i dont need votes to prove that ALL vets know. ~1~.Quote:
Originally Posted by Lyricaly ILL
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!uppin for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
thanks.
im juss stickn my nose in...but yall are gittn too indepth...cuz honestly...Sid's verse was hotter....yall needa git past the [] and read the fuckn words
CiiiiiiiN
Sidious: Really nice stuff for a newb... you know what you are doing at least... punches aren't that strong, but I will say you flow the best outta everybody I've seen on the site... if not, then you are up there... for real, nice shit
Need to work on punches but you have a lot of talent if you keep this shit up... but one thing, don't put your pic up next time, makes you an easy target.
Oakley: Nice punches, nice flow, nice nice... what can I say... Good shit Finisher was really nice and that line basically put you over the top of this battle...
Good battle but vote goes to Oakley
Oh yeah.... could you hit up the battle in my sig... shit's getting slept on, sorry to freepost
boi i been rhyming for years.. im not a n00b..just new to this site soo dont get it twisted. hmm.. my punches werent strong?u mus not understand where im coming from: and thats real talk.. and thanks for that comment about flowing.. and i appreciate your vote.Quote:
Originally Posted by Brethren
Uppin this shiz for votes!!.... .somebody read this... and vo0o0o0te...lol... thanks...
wow............... this kat sid is a faggot...
Sidious'll slaughter this [cattle thatt'll] have you..feel'in sorry u gotta [battle this]
Your a Vet?...Dawg don't [flatter your spits],
^wack............................
Actin like ya got a title mann..*your lookin a lil light on the waist*---
^^played.. like in 1999.. and the wording to it, was just terrible
u aint gangsta kidd...closest you get to *throwin signs* [is a protest you pest]
^^ ummmm same as above, and wored awful...
Im real kid i ACTUALLY DO ALL THE SHIT U WRITE IN YOUR TEXT-
^ i used that line 2 years ago, and i'm sure i can find the link, at rapmusic.com
So if you wanna spit back you gonna be [*ass out like Nudity*]- lol
that was just wack...................
bahhh.... i thought sidious u had played punches, and your verse was garbage... stop swaying votes, and get cin & company off your ass.... i mean comeon, u didn't have one line that was orginal...well maybe 1... your whole verse was wack, i mean I can find links to every line in there wid the same punches, in 10 mins.. don't belive.... i will if u don't think so... but besides that yours lines where not even good.. i don't why people thinking u realllll good for a newbie... cuase really you're not by judgeing this battle.
''my punches werent strong?u mus not understand where im coming from: and thats real talk.. ''
''this kid was shit on.. i dont need votes to prove that ALL vets know. ~1~.''
wow... your a joke.
OoO... to voting... oakley you had nothing good... soo this was just a overall tie, you both lack on creativty, oakley if u brought yur lines into better punches u would've had this, but really u had nothing.. V---- tie....
PS::: drop on are battle, I will drop right after you do.
pZ
ha.. and who the fuck are you?... kid u disgust me... the only reason u talkin shit is cuz i bashed u somewhere on this site.. your ass is LAME... fuck text.. u'll see me on audio motherfucker.. 2mins max... due by Wendsday.. take it or leave.. cuz we all kno ur a textcee u aint got SHIT ON me or oakley.. or actually anyone on this site.. your records lookin a lil weak boy.. ante up bitch.
hahaha, bahed me on this site.. LMAOOOOOOOOOO.............. iite aduio, that's all me... bet....
uppin 4-1....
sidious....we're havin a rematch after this....
and Ima try....
dont no how you can continue to talk shit but .....maybe that'll humble u..pc-1
Oakley very well done verse was on key punches hit hard,
and the structure was great.
good use of the word play and a better overall verse.
fav line:
"It's strait amusing...claimin what your gun's will do ta me...
but dawg...you cant pull a 9 untill u hit your puberty..."
Sidious- your verse was allright but could use some work like some punches were missin,
and get better use out of the words other wise saying use more creativity..
PM me if you have qustions or need help..
V/Oakley