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10 lines.....
usual rules....
due in an hour....
good luck.....
Aight checkin in.
I'ma killa virus and guess what, your the host
I'll rip the DNA out of your body and still boast
Put saringes in ya intestines where you cant get em
made alot of mistakes battlin me, ya gonna regret em
I continue spittin that good shit like benefit vomit
ya got fake script I even know the url where you got it
The truth is, somber is a pedifile man, he crave's boys
He loves playing with himself, he's obessed gay toys
Your scared now and your erasing your whole drop
Deleting everything like your backspace was stuck
Done.
Sharp, stick to poetry fag, yer lame an im serious kid
fuckin clit yer such a bitch, that even yer name has a period
im curious how r u a flyweight, ya never battled b for dun
just a newb afraid 2 lose, afraid,so u stay in the poetry forum
but i'll whore em' w/ ten, cuz i always knew that duke was wack
fag u used to diss our crew, but look who came crawlin' back
yer a hack who used drop whole paragraphs cryn, fuckn lame fag
sharp's always trying to play it strait, but its hard w/ his gay av
a laugh is about all yer good for, bitch forget about battlin again
cuz sorta like Mag defending Penskills, simplyyou'll never win
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typo in the 4th line...
there shouldn't be a second 'afraid'...
up...
Uppin, please vote.
Vote, Drop a link, I'll get back atcha.
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Sharp........You had some good verses and some good structure....They wasnt that too complexed...Also You had a few good punches that I was feelin....I could understand everything that you said.....Not to hard to read and a good battle
Somber......I cant say that you have bad structure becuz yours is good too.Also you had very few punches and lines...but you your lines was sortof complexy and sortof understandable.....But your lines was pretty good and I was feelin a few but SHarp was a little better in this battle becuz he had a little bit of everything better...
v/Sharp
Before I vote drop ya vote in this thread and ill come back in vote in this Holla....you said you was going to vote so do go ahead im waiting.......
:laugh2:
word?.......
please somebody...
vote........
heres the thread to vote in me vs flows http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=125842
sharps verse had no punchlines at all, i dont think it was even a battles verse mang..
by contrast somber was ok, i liked the poetry personal, it was the best punch of the battle...
repay the favor and hit up this battle w/vote
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=125928
^you should vote man. Somber wont get it if you dont vote. Give him the vote.
Sharp you said you was going to vote in battles leave a link and I did....If you dont vote then you will be disgraced and for swaying......So you better vote in my thread or considered swayed.........Holla
Sorry, I apologize, ill keep my word. I'll vote in it soon. Thank you for the reminder.
aight no prob man.........Vote soon aight peace
comeone sharp man.....Let me get this vote so I can get a record......Comeone man
sorry man, I just won a poetry contest. PUBLISHING BITCHES! anyways, I was gonna vote right now, but you seem to have won it w/o my vote. Good lookin kid. ::thumbup::
Uppin. Keep voting ppl............................................... ..
som....hands...........down.......merked this cat
........i mean wordplay here was good on his side
....as on sharps side it seemed to basic.......to simple
..................could of been more creative sharp...fo real
punches has to go to som theres no fronting they were wittier
................like i said punches on sharps side were blah....
they seemed forced and came out very choppy..........
...wasnt..........really.............feeling...... that....ishness
but it was an ok battle but som still wins this due to punches
..........personals.....and.....thats....all.it... ......tales.man
vote/somber................obvious reasons.........hit my battles..
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom
Aight, i voted on your battle.^ uppin.
Since you didnt get to vote...Vote in this thread aight.....and ill understand
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=126125 heres the link now vote im waitin
Aight i voted, next time don't be such a dick about voting man, chill out. watever, uppin.
aight good lookin.....But you didnt have to say next time dont be such a dick...lOL o well im out..Good luck in ya battle
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was gonna drop a vote but Sharp.. upped the battle 8times so he'll be Dq'd anyway..
anyway..
Somber had better punches that hit hard and a couple of them followed through.. flow was wack and structure needs sortin badly..
Sharp. you had ok punches but they wern't very good at.. you had alot of Played lines, especially the Gay joke that was poor.. flow was unsteady and structure was Shitty..
\/0te..Somber..
^Blah... word. Sharp is DQ'ed for 8 uppings.