no recycling
no biting
no crew or d/r votes
no hate votes
first to 5 votes
u spit 1st whenever u want...
good luck homie
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no recycling
no biting
no crew or d/r votes
no hate votes
first to 5 votes
u spit 1st whenever u want...
good luck homie
oh and 16 lines max.
peace.............................
u'r white bread with red dots, bet that line made u wonder(wonder bread)
i hit puberty after you, your still a [BOLD]newcommer[/BOLD]
this a message to you and you're fam, "SKIDADDLE!!!!!"
didn't know that stan could battleQuote:
Originally Posted by | < L | f F
so ur prolly thinkin "wack, shows over, it's my turn"
be honest, lincoln of fire spitten? u just got the side burns(honest abe hairstyle)
heard 'bout ur cop incident, so u failed to run 'way
bailed when your bail could be paidnow that's thug, but in rap's alphabets theres strange fates for gQuote:
Originally Posted by | < L | f F
cuz next comes h-i and suddenly j's replaced with v(hiv)
it happened to easy e, so believe this g
stick to rearanging alphagetti's just to eat mc's
try 'n' bruise up ur flower garden to hit glory(morningglories)
u'll prolly lose with shame, n change names to vic tory
u'r white bread with red dots, bet that line made u wonder(wonder bread)
i hit puberty after you, your still a newcommer
this a message to you and you're fam, "SKIDADDLE!!!!!"
didn't know that stan could battle
so ur prolly thinkin "wack, shows over, it's my turn"
be honest, lincoln of fire spitten? u just got the side burns(beardstyle)
heard 'bout ur cop incident, so u failed to run 'way
bailed when your bail could be paid
now that's thug, but in rap's alphabets theres strange fates for g
cuz next comes h-i and suddenly j's replaced with v(hiv)
it happened to easy e, so believe this g
stick to rearanging alphagetti's just to eat mc's
try 'n' bruise up ur flower garden to hit glory(morningglories)
u'll prolly lose with shame, n change names to vic tory
pay no attention to that last one, can one of the mods close the second post
wow yur verse was whack now go vote on one of my battles
i actually agree, i wrote it down in like 10 minutes, it is probably my wackest verse, still gonna rip him, and no
^^LMAO!!! we'll see abt that.... ugh just came back from skool... ill post my verse in a while
hmm now lets see, this kid thinks he can merk me with his gay verse
go play with your toys boy, or ill stab you with my words till it hurts
knw wht?i'll give you a chance.... coz i like you
but if u want me 2 get violent.... i'll bite you
roll, duck, run, and jump... coz im bout to snipe you
fake ass wannabe MC, damn, u just 12 years old
tell me, does mommy type for u on ur keyboard?
i'll leave you cryin for days after my words provoke you
i'll ash you on the floor, right after i smoke you
oh and by the way, i heard mommy cuts your hair
ur startin to get mad huh? BOO! did i give u a scare?
this guy claims he hit puberty 2 yrs ago, when he was 10
u look like that lil' retarted kid i saw yesterday on C.N.N.
ur useless, just like all your posts
it'll end 715, when i slit ur throat
ugh that was wack too.... anyway, uppin for votes....................
upping this shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit
Vote-FairInHeight
Better punches, and they were more consistent even though Im TIRED of seeing the quoting your opponent and using it in the battle...its getting OLD quick..STOP it...its not even that effective to be honest..but it was effective enough to beat the L dude..cant really read your name..you need to work on your punches, flow, personals and creativity...all those components help you succeed in a battle..and hopefully win
upping for this shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat
uppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiin for votes!!!!!!!!
oh and it's Kliff.... not the L guy lol...........
peace
upping this, can we just finish it up with the votes
can sum1 vote?? drop a link and i'll vote for ur battles....
same not one vote still, wat the fuck is this shit?
the guy who voted b4 didnt press that fuckin button in the poll..... CAN U GUYS PLZ FUCKIN REMEMBER TO GO TO THE POLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
STILL NO VOTES?! wtf.... can sum1 plz vote...................
upping, what the fuck is this, this is fucking annoying as a bitch
decent battle we got here. my fav. punch in this was the Stan one by Fair. got me laughing. quotin is a good way for personals. nice job. you took that. you both had decent structures but nice flow. but Fair took the whole punch category. Symbol man didn't hit very hard. that finisher sucked nuts. no offense. had no personals, and came way too basic. this battle was only a little less then one sided. Fair came harder in almost everything...
vote- FairInHeight
hit this up in return plz:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=126553
thanx.
peace
Vote disqualified for being a crew vote. Against rules. -ILLunatic
damn good battle but |< L | f F won better punches // i would have to say yall can spit sweet shit
ummm i must be crazy but i think that |< L | f F had better punches and better flow and all that shit.
Fair's had punches and all that. but it didnt do anything in my opinion. I didnt get any of his lines or attempted personals..gotta work on that man, flow was off and the structure was stretched,
|< L | f F's had an ok flow and an okay structure. Punches werent horrible, they were decent, but they made sense. Gotta work more on personals though. Flow helped the verse and punches did also.
Good job.
v/|< L | f F