10 lines
due.. soon
rules.. House
Check it.
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10 lines
due.. soon
rules.. House
Check it.
I guess u summed this battle up perfect... simplistic
Too bad ur name was too hard to spell n you missed it
Must have been all that coke u was smokin in Oakland
I'd call u an herb, but the obvious no need to be spoken
How could u write those lines, tha fuck is in your mind?
Ur name now, how it always will be.. in ur sig: undefined
You think rhymin, be simple, but you prove RB wrong
I'd actually take more than 10mins to key this..
...if I thought you'd some strong
Why you write ur words in CaPs n sHIt.. doesn't make sense
Okay, open up the flood gates... and this merking commense
ay yo i could spot a fraud from a fuckin mile away,
tha mo you open yo mouth tha mo i realize you fake,
i come hard on tha mic thats just wat i do,
While you callin up yo bitch scream HELP ME BOO!,
Its been a hot minute since i put deez raps down,
You want dis royal status but you cant wear my crown,
I spat this flow wit mo speed dan a cycle,
Ma wordz be powerful touchin kidz like Michael.
Good Shyt Dogg Imma Be Out Ill Come Bak Later To See Wussup .
darknova-you had good personals...............flow was on and i was liking it...........punches hit hard...........structure was on...............not really nething bad to say about this verse but jus use a lil more wittiness in your verse and elevate a lil bit and you could be good
sim-you came weak....shit you woulda needed atleast 20 lines to beat nova but for some reason you only came wit 8......that was a stupid move.......strcuture was okay could have been better........punches.....ehhh didnt hit hard at all.....flow was a lil off..........and you didnt have ne p0ersonals work on that shit and elevate....pc
v/darknova
yea, you too..
nice battle.
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y0 good battle but im gonna have to agree a little with lyrical..
Darknova - had a little harder punches and all good structure (well to me). your shit was easy to ryhme with too like while i was sayin it i was rappin it pretty well..(always got beats playn in winamp :P) but shit is aight..
Simplistik - i thin lyrical was abit hard on you dawg... you were alright, weak spot 8 lines only..?? 2 lines aint that harder to think up... but anyways shit was alright gotta give u credit for the micheal line i had laugh and thought you were pretty tight ...
not sure if i can vote yet(100 posts needed) but my vote goes to Darknova
Ay Yo That Shits Not Right .....yo Dark You Said 8 Lines And Fools R Hatin On Me Cuz I Only Dropped 8
i will vote on this later when you vote on one of my battles
Man.. u really are smoked up aren't you?Quote:
Originally Posted by SimPliStiK
Check the top....
and check back to bitchslapped if u want..
I would (never) say 8 lines.
aight this was a close battle both came decent
but i felt that nova came with harder hitting punches
if S would have come more hard hitting he mighta won
but thats not the story today, cuz nova takes personals
both had ok flow and the wordplay was good, average
S came basic and fondaled with filler which hurt him
try using a punch and a personal and a rhymescene
in each line, it will benefit also to throw in wittyness
good job nova ya verse won u this keep elavating
simplistic u need more elavation jus keep at it ok
vote/darknova for influencing punches & personals
now remember to poll in my battle but u need 200 posts
dont kno if you will get them in time, ask a mod to poll it? :rolleyes:
Hmm.. I'll hit up ur future battles, like I said
This was close?...
aight, uppin.
uppin #5....
last one..
blah.. people need to vote..
I will give feedback to other battles.
this is ridiculous......................... UPPING
v/ Dark.
Cos he voted for me.
Plus the kid came personal.. original.. equallin harder punches thru out that actually dissed his opponent.. dont get me wrong.. ya verse made me cringe.. but Simplistiks made me cry.. not only used a 'Michael' line.. but that was his best line! rest was jus a case of fittin words that rhymed together.. coulda been dissin anyone.. no punches to note.. jus random statements.. at least Dark had something of a flow and it looked more battle-like.
This battle was okay, but...
Darknova: Ur verse was pretty good. Nice personals using his sig and all. U need to come with harder personals to win here. U said you weren't tryin[', but I don't know because this is the first battle I've seen you do. I liked your flow and structure wasa pretty good. Keep elevatin'.
Simplistik: Ur verse was okay. You need to throw some personals for real. I thought it was more like a freestyle and what ur gonna do to him than a battle rhyme. That's why you got merked. I think there's cyphers for that. Flow and structure was aight. Keep elevatin'.
Vote: Darknova
*Vote on my battles and I'll return the favor later.*
uppin.....................
need just 1 more.. please?
and hes not uppin.
uppinn............................................ ..
Darknova had harder punches and better vocab and wordplay simplistiks last punch hit hard but i felt his other ones were played out and elementary. i felt this punch the most and felt it took over the batte
How could u write those lines, tha fuck is in your mind?
Ur name now, how it always will be.. in ur sig: undefined
This punch got my vote for Darknova
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Ambiguous
yo your dq'ed watch wen one of the mods catch this you upped 6 times
Darknova
structure was ok so was your flow
your punches hit harder
i didnt see any personals
you need those in battles
vocab needs to be better
work on wordplay
elevate
but i think your verse was pre-writ
whats up with this line
How could u write those lines, tha fuck is in your mind?
u spit first? hmmm... dont like it at all
simplistik
you need to work on those punches
and personals(which i didn't see any)
your structure was ok so was your flow
but you need work on vocab and wordplay
elevate
vote/Dark
even tho to me it seemed pre-writ
on one line
Darknova is DQ'ed for excessive upping.