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blind spit..
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checking in.....bro...i have to go somewhere with my mom...it will be quick but gimme an hour or so to post...i will post within 2 hours
sorry botut hat but i will post....i dont prewrite
itee...imma start keyin now........................
ite ite...srry 2 tell ya...but im da one who gonna leave undefeated....
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since u versin me....u mite actually gain experience.....maybe
But imma leave this kid 'shaking'....more than da guy in hiz avy!!
"Try to beat me"??......but wait..i am the one that is winning.....
I think so...cuz i got many 'hits',n its da bottom of da 9th inning..
Even if ya payed me 2 win this ...u still culdnt call it your 'own'...
hes dope?..but wen it comes 2 Meters...
his prescnece is unknown!
I beat the undefeated?..plze...this battle was my pleasure...
I won this battle by a mile...heres a ruler...go and measure!!!
There, CONGRATS!..cuz u are the 8th on my list 2 be depleted..
This bitch is with his mom?*cough*-prewriting,but still defeated*
eh...quik key..but enuff 2 kill em..
he rote that he is going wit his mom...yea rite...
leave links..they will b hit up asap...
took bout 30 mins...uppin 4 ya verse...
srry bout daline wit catalist dukin meters...minor error...but dont matter...uppin:0..
o, and do not feed...
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foudn dat at Catalists profile..and he was also viewin mah profile...wen he waz supposed 2 be with his "mom"......hmmmm...**coughs out like a mofo**
im here lol
im typing now....lol im back from picking up the pizza
im missing Yankees vs red Sox for this lmao
lmfao.....ite ite...key it up...g' luck......:)....
7-0 ,Damn, kid's better than I thought, To you, I tip my hat
Then again, I looked at the people he's beaten.........
............And 7 times wondered...Who the Fuck Is That?!!
Hoping I would No Show, Well now I'll have to condemn
Hmmm, Really? Thats funny, You've already faced 7 of them!Quote:
Originally Posted by Lyricallyabusiv
A ticket to hell? Wow just look at your crew
I've Already defeated All of those people....
...............And just included you!
Thought I would come wack, Kid was ready to rejoice
Was asked how he spent his free time......Quote:
Originally Posted by Lyricallyabusiv
............And look at his number one choice!
This kids a newb, cant even keep his own name too
Cuz I could see You got your first Loss.....
............From the way I Lyrically Abused You!
cool....uppin this shit peeps....leave ya links...n Catalist..i have found ur alias..muwahahahah..lol..
lyricallyabbusiv....
since u versin me....u mite actually gain experience.....maybe
But imma leave this kid 'shaking'....more than da guy in hiz avy!!
Good opener hit him straight away
"Try to beat me"??......but wait..i am the one that is winning.....
I think so...cuz i got many 'hits',n its da bottom of da 9th inning..
1st line was ok 2nd line was Eh... should of used it later in the verse
Even if ya payed me 2 win this ...u still culdnt call it your 'own'...
hes dope?..but wen it comes 2 Meters...
his prescnece is unknown!
ok punch was expecting abit more from it
I beat the undefeated?..plze...this battle was my pleasure...
I won this battle by a mile...heres a ruler...go and measure!!!
Good bar but you shud of said Meter not mile to go with the above bar
There, CONGRATS!..cuz u are the 8th on my list 2 be depleted..
This bitch is with his mom?*cough*-prewriting,but still defeated*
Nice punch i was feeling that
6/10
Catalist...
7-0 ,Damn, kid's better than I thought, To you, I tip my hat
Then again, I looked at the people he's beaten.........
............And 7 times wondered...Who the Fuck Is That?!!
:laugh: that was a class opener
Hoping I would No Show, Well now I'll have to condemn
I aint gettin respect 4 versin noobs that r callin me out
Hmmm, Really? Thats funny, You've already faced 7 of them!
this was a very hard hitting punch
A ticket to hell? Wow just look at your crew
I've Already defeated All of those people....
...............And just included you!
Good factful punch
Thought I would come wack, Kid was ready to rejoice
1. masturbate
Was asked how he spent his free time......
............And look at his number one choice!
Good research but was lacking a hard punch
This kids a newb, cant even keep his own name too
Cuz I could see You got your first Loss.....
............From the way I Lyrically Abused You!
Good flip on his name..bin played a bit tho
8/10
\/0te.. Catalist for having more consistant punches and more hard hitting punches...
im not gonna go 2 ir saying this...
but that was a d/r...paybak...4 me fukin w. your crew...plze dont do it again..
i am not reporting 2 ir cuz i know i can win this....
Lol this was a merkin.....
I aint gonna say who....Cus he's in my crew.....Lol Ooops....
o well....kat's out the bag.....I coulda beatin this kid....
avi an maybe? naw.......
oh yeh...an the sox are up 4-1 :)
Go Boston!
look man i just called that as i saw it..you lost and i hatin bcus you left my crew that was your choice.. and No i didnt D/R it is not my style.. you just lost in my eyes.. you had good punches but they didnt hit as hard as Catalist's.. sorry i think you lost peace.. G'Luck to you both hope it goes well..
lyricall- your verse was pretty gud...not tha best structure but it was ok, some nice hhits here, personals too....n that line bout bein out wit his mom **cough cough** was pretty funni
catalist- yah structure, well to say tha least pretty much sucked....tha rhymes wern't at all in anyway organized. yah punches didnt hit hard at all...yah shyt was WAY ova tha standard that was agreed....elevate
lyricall-7/10
catalist-5.5/10
vote-lyricall
since u versin me....u mite actually gain experience.....maybe
But imma leave this kid 'shaking'....more than da guy in hiz avy!!
ok personal, not great
"Try to beat me"??......but wait..i am the one that is winning.....
I think so...cuz i got many 'hits',n its da bottom of da 9th inning..
attempt at meta, but screwed
Even if ya payed me 2 win this ...u still culdnt call it your 'own'...
hes dope?..but wen it comes 2 Meters...
his prescnece is unknown!
LOL, nice
I beat the undefeated?..plze...this battle was my pleasure...
I won this battle by a mile...heres a ruler...go and measure!!!
punch directed wrong...kinda ok meta i guess
There, CONGRATS!..cuz u are the 8th on my list 2 be depleted..
This bitch is with his mom?*cough*-prewriting,but still defeated*
meh...nah...wasnt feelin for a closer
7-0 ,Damn, kid's better than I thought, To you, I tip my hat
Then again, I looked at the people he's beaten.........
............And 7 times wondered...Who the Fuck Is That?!!
meh...ok. Kinda funny
Hoping I would No Show, Well now I'll have to condemn
Quote:
Originally Posted by Lyricallyabusiv
I aint gettin respect 4 versin noobs that r callin me out
Hmmm, Really? Thats funny, You've already faced 7 of them!
stretched!!!! but still good line
A ticket to hell? Wow just look at your crew
I've Already defeated All of those people....
...............And just included you!
lol, kinda good
Thought I would come wack, Kid was ready to rejoice
Quote:
Originally Posted by Lyricallyabusiv
1. masturbate
Was asked how he spent his free time......
............And look at his number one choice!
strecttttttttchhhheddddddd!!! damn...but nice attempt
This kids a newb, cant even keep his own name too
Cuz I could see You got your first Loss.....
............From the way I Lyrically Abused You!
played on his name...very played
overall, both didnt come hard at all. Didnt really like readin neither.
breakdown:
flow: lyric
structure: lyric
punches: catalist
personals: tie
metas: lyric
multies: neither
opener: catalist
closer: neither
catalist had the punches but his verse was choppy and hard to read, and that SOMTIMES losses you the battle...like this for example.
v/lyriclyabussiv, for decent punches, played but decent, and good flow.
honest vote, no hate, good battle
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. Crew vote. - Axiom
thats a crew vote right there buddy
that will be removed
uppin 1
Not a bad battle.
lyricallyabbusiv -
since u versin me....u mite actually gain experience.....maybe
But imma leave this kid 'shaking'....more than da guy in hiz avy!!
Nice creativity and personal, first line was kinda choppy
"Try to beat me"??......but wait..i am the one that is winning.....
I think so...cuz i got many 'hits',n its da bottom of da 9th inning..
I agree with rascal, shoulda used this towards the end..nevertheless, it was an ok bar
Even if ya payed me 2 win this ...u still culdnt call it your 'own'...
hes dope?..but wen it comes 2 Meters...
his prescnece is unknown!
Funny first line, 2nd was wrong...at least you knew it was
I beat the undefeated?..plze...this battle was my pleasure...
I won this battle by a mile...heres a ruler...go and measure!!!
Prolly the weakest of all your bars, seemed a bit forced..
There, CONGRATS!..cuz u are the 8th on my list 2 be depleted..
This bitch is with his mom?*cough*-prewriting,but still defeated*
Good closer, I woulda quoted him though with the mom line, and played off that..
Overall, you came pretty good man. I think you might have focused on the undefeated a little too long, but all in all I saw witty lines and alot of creativity. Pretty good verse.
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Even if ya payed me 2 win this ...u still culdnt call it your 'own'...
Catalist -
7-0 ,Damn, kid's better than I thought, To you, I tip my hat
Then again, I looked at the people he's beaten.........
............And 7 times wondered...Who the Fuck Is That?!!
Lol, funny opener..nice flip from compliment to diss
Hoping I would No Show, Well now I'll have to condemn
Quote:
Originally Posted by Lyricallyabusiv
I aint gettin respect 4 versin noobs that r callin me out
Hmmm, Really? Thats funny, You've already faced 7 of them!
Again, funny..careful not to overuse a concept..him battling newbs in this case...nice though
A ticket to hell? Wow just look at your crew
I've Already defeated All of those people....
...............And just included you!
Ok..wasnt feeling this too much..thought you coulda played off the ticket to hell quote..
Thought I would come wack, Kid was ready to rejoice
Quote:
Originally Posted by Lyricallyabusiv
1. masturbate
Was asked how he spent his free time......
............And look at his number one choice!
Nice personal, lol..good research
This kids a newb, cant even keep his own name too
Cuz I could see You got your first Loss.....
............From the way I Lyrically Abused You!
Good play on his name, but weak overall closer..
Overall, you put out some funny and witty lines, quote personals were nice, and you definitely did some good research on him. Personals hit hard, except maybe for the closer one..kinda wack...nice verse man, came hard.
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7-0 ,Damn, kid's better than I thought, To you, I tip my hat
Then again, I looked at the people he's beaten.........
............And 7 times wondered...Who the Fuck Is That?!!
..I have to give my vote to Catalist, because he came harder and I thought much more personal and witty..enjoyed his verse a lil more too. lyrically, you prolly woulda got this if you woulda re-structured your verse and added more spice to your lines, but Cat came too hard and funny/witty in this. Nice battle though.
Vote / Catalist
Plz hit this back..thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=125149
we are not an established crew stupid....read the rules. Vote counts, and I didnt even know that he was in my crew until u pointed out stupid. Take a vote cry baby...
Vote on this shit in return!!!
The opening bar in Abusive's verse was bad, bad, bad...
Every diss in the world has been spit at that dancing avy.
And besides, "leave you shakin" isn't a punch, it's a threat, a prediction.
Cat's opener was a punch, clear cut, personal, and very effective.
Abusive's second bar was crap as well...
Sorry for being blunt...but none of that baseball shit equaled a punch, maybe an eh meta, but no punch at all.
Catalist basically repeated his opening bar, we get it, he's faced no one of merit...
Ever hear of beating the dead horse? Still, even though it's repetition, it still beats baseball.
I see the punch that Abusive's going for in the 3rd bar, just didn't think it hit all that hard...at least it connected though.
Nice crew diss from Cat. Straight forward, no wordplay, but effective cuz the truth hurts.
Ok, 4th bar by Abusive has wordplay, yeah...cool...but no fuckin punch!!! Just another prediction Seriously! What did you throw at him? I'll tell you what, the fuckin ruler and that's it!!!
Too long and drawn out and badly worded by Cat...plus, quote punches are played. And kinda show ya need help dissing, visual aid kinda thing. SOme of em can still be good, but this one wasn't. Still...it WAS a punch, despite it's whackness, which is more than Ab threw.
Kinda weak closers on both sides, predictable nameplay from Cat and
some kinda weird accusation from Ab...and, the nameplay kinda topped that "prewriting with mom" shit.
Cat all the way.
Not extremely impressive.
Seen you come better.
Peace
ehhh...ill let that crew vote go
uppin 2
since u versin me....u mite actually gain experience.....maybe
But imma leave this kid 'shaking'....more than da guy in hiz avy!!
^^nice personal..flow ok
"Try to beat me"??......but wait..i am the one that is winning.....
I think so...cuz i got many 'hits',n its da bottom of da 9th inning..
^^no...just..no..not good...at all.
Even if ya payed me 2 win this ...u still culdnt call it your 'own'...
hes dope?..but wen it comes 2 Meters...
his prescnece is unknown!
^^ok...attempt at a personal(ithink)..not great..
I beat the undefeated?..plze...this battle was my pleasure...
I won this battle by a mile...heres a ruler...go and measure!!!
^^not much of a punch..ok
There, CONGRATS!..cuz u are the 8th on my list 2 be depleted..
This bitch is with his mom?*cough*-prewriting,but still defeated*
^^great closer...best punch of ur pec...specailly 2nd line..
punches...7
flow...7
wordplay..6
personals..6
vocab...7
overall....32 not a bad verse....( i think ur better then that )
7-0 ,Damn, kid's better than I thought, To you, I tip my hat
Then again, I looked at the people he's beaten.........
............And 7 times wondered...Who the Fuck Is That?!!
^^killed the openr...great punch..!
Hoping I would No Show, Well now I'll have to condemn
Quote:
Originally Posted by Lyricallyabusiv
I aint gettin respect 4 versin noobs that r callin me out
Hmmm, Really? Thats funny, You've already faced 7 of them!
^^nic personal...nice punch..
A ticket to hell? Wow just look at your crew
I've Already defeated All of those people....
...............And just included you!
^^could flow...nice punch..
Thought I would come wack, Kid was ready to rejoice
Quote:
Originally Posted by Lyricallyabusiv
1. masturbate
Was asked how he spent his free time......
............And look at his number one choice!
^^lol..gave me a lil chuckle..nice
This kids a newb, cant even keep his own name too
Cuz I could see You got your first Loss.....
............From the way I Lyrically Abused You!
nice use of his name against him...good punch..
punches...9
flow...8
wordplay..8
personals..8
vocab...7
overall....40 ...he hit with a punch every time..and came with a good style...and very solid pec..and that wins him battles..and he just won another in my eyes...
VOTE..CATALIST
other kat...i think ur better then that...but my 2cents..
VOTE...CATALIST
pec
i wont vote cus me and cat are cool
no d/r conspiracy's
but if you voted for lyrically
you should quit rapping right now
not that your verse sucked
but you got ripped like tight underwear on a fat bitch bending down homey
end this please......
uppin 3.........good battle abusive
yea...nice battle....mite actually batle again sumtime:)...uppin this
!!
uppin 4 for you fuckin losers
close this
*cough* return vote favor plz *cough*
uppin 5 ....you suck
vote..ill i'll get to yours eleventually....for some reason i cant open your battle....
aight man this was a close battle
LA had good shit but i felt that. . .
catalist was a lil more consistent
with punches and personals aight
LA wasnt far off but could of re-. . .
worded it a lil better in a sense ok
i felt catalist had an advantage cuz
he droped second, so it should of. . .
been a blindspit 30 min or something
but vote/catalist for being a lil more. . .
direct, cata, but not by much, good
battle you guys, both of u are elavating
Because Catalist was banned for being a biter, all of his wins are being reversed. As the admins told me I could do this, it is being done on EVERY battle of his.