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House rules.
This is my check-in.
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10 lines.
House rules.
This is my check-in.
checked in
Carson doesnt get respect..
.. Thrown aside like an unwanted toy
So he dont get banned he has to sig..
.. "I'll be a good boy"
How many aliases is it now? Summin like four?
How can you hope to be good..
.. When you weren't even good before
Started a war, so lets finish this, bitch
Give everyone a laugh when I finish this bitch
The newb image suits you..
.. Though you've always had it
Crawling back to the site after being banned..
.. Truly defines the word, maggot.
Stupid faggot, got bitch-slapped by the admins' hand
After this battle..
.. He'll be asking to be banned
Jus' started something and didnt stop.
Managed to drop before going out.
Im off to Ju-Jitsu now.
Good luck.
Pz.
Freeman wanna rip on jet but wait....
Check ya L's....I think IM one of em 8..
I'll let you feed...free....but use it in rations...
U need the elevation...Hence the crew ya rep Creation...
Quik ta spit like it's one of em 20 newb's ya faced....
Ju-Jitsu....Fits u...Men in drapes...suits ya taste..
Thinkin you can battle...free...dawg stick wit ya topicals...
Beatin me's like makin all elite...the shits for u's impossible
Hate ta burst ya bubble...But bitch Im bout ta hand ya outta anotha L
Free.....take to the streets...you'd make a fortune...
.............I hear that pussy sell's..................
Nice verse Carson..
.. Get at me on AIM.
Thanks..
.. Up we go.
Lets get some votes on this.
Up..
.. For fuck sake.
Vote, drop links.
They will be followed!
Free: I've always liked your structure..original....flow was, so-so...but it's a battle...you had some nice punches as wel...they were complex...were relevent, wern't random..lol..:
"How many aliases is it now? Summin like four?
How can you hope to be good..
.. When you weren't even good before,
Stupid faggot, got bitch-slapped by the admins' hand
After this battle..
.. He'll be asking to be banned - was really feelin' them two...they were nice & personal and hit hard....
Carson: Your verse seemed to be a little hollow...
"I'll let you feed...free....but use it in rations...
U need the elevation...Hence the crew ya rep Creation..." - liked the crew diss...it could have been pulled of better th0...
Your flow was basic...try to add some more internals cos it was lacking in some places...decent battle th0..
Vote: Freeman... felt he hit harder & had a more complex and depthful verse.
Nice battle...
Freeman
Your punches were really hard.....plus they were personal which made your verse a lot harder. I liked your structure and although your flow coulda been improved it was still ok to follow.
.:C@RSONJET:.
You shoulda came harder. Your flow was ok, similar to Freeman's. Your punches were well thought of but I think they coulda been worded better, but there was personals
My opinion is that Freeman won this on harder punches.
I can poll yet but can the two of you hit up my battle......link in my sig.
Ok.
2-0 text.
1-0 poll.
Up..
.. Peace.
^^^Yeah well can you vote on mine since I took the time eventhough I cant poll.
This was an interesting battle. Both parties came on quite strong.
Wordplay: Neither. It was close here because nobody really used any.
Meta's: Freeman came just a little bit better here, although the meta's were close.
Multi's: Freeman. Like perception said, Jet was lacking in internals, whereas Freeman showed good use of them. That's why freeman got this one.
Flow: Freeman. I like freeman's unique and interesting flow here. Both flowed well, but the orginality of freeman won it.
Punches: Freeman. Freeman's punches were a little bit harder and well thought out. It was closer though, but freeman pulled it off better.
Overall: Freeman.
The only glaring problem with freeman's verse was
'Started a war, so lets finish this, bitch
Give everyone a laugh when I finish this bitch'
Could have maybe used a different rhyme to end it, but it didn't detract from the verse, so i guess it's not a problem. Close battle.
Well Ima have to go with freeman on this one...Carson, your structure was a little off and you had some stretched lines that made your flow fall off a bit...your punches didnt really hit that hard..you had a couple of good ones though...you coulda threw in some more personals...and be a little more creative...
Freeman:I liked your structure and flow a little bit better..you had some more personals and threw harder punches...the flow was decent and your verse was just constructed better overall....
V-Freeman
If Carson's been banned, I don't see the need for in depth explanation.
However, if ILL or Axe deletes this, just PM and I'll explain my ass off...
Peace
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. Votes should still go on like normal even though kid is banned. - Axiom
Thanks for the votes.
Last upping.
4-0 poll.
Peace.
Vote free...as BTK said theres no point to this......if someone DQs this vote and the battle gets re-opened PM me and I'll go in depth
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom
5th up.
Ive sent you both PM's so you can explain your votes clearer.
Might aswell up it anyway and see if people vote before you come online.
Peace.
hes banned just take this 2 i.r and get your win...........................
Freeman...you had a good verse Flow was perfect I thought....good job....punches hit for ther most part....and you had nice personals....could up the overall wittiness of your versetho to give them more impact..overall a decent verse
CarsonJet....you came mad simplistic man...you had weak punches and lotsa filler....be more creative
Vote-Freeman
Get a MOD to add this
please drop an honest vote here http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=123192
Carson's opener was more of a speculation than a diss.
Freeman's was a mild diss at his sig and his rep for his fucked up conduct rep.
Being a punch, Free takes openers.
Carson dissed him, but used his crew to do it, good, creative, but it softened impact.
Free clowned him and his sig again, but went a clever direction with it and dissed talent this time.
Better overall, Freeman.
Carson takes this bar with a mild gay diss on his martial arts attire...I don;t know what the fuck Free was doing repeating himself for (yes, I got it, just didn't like it).
Mild diss from Carson bringing up, I guess, that he's only Topical Elite and not Battle, or LLL...big deal, at least some of him is, I believe more than Carson. Stupid to bring it up in my opinion. Good diss from Freeman, personal. I liked, hard and true as a motherfucker, thus, more effective, better.
Better personal on Free's part, but better closer overall by Carson, a bit played, but still impactful. However, I only barely give him this bar cuz Free closed pretty hard as well.
So, overall, that gives Freeman the edge at the end of the verse.
Peace