12-14 lines
spit tonight
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12-14 lines
spit tonight
house rules
In....will spit tonght at around 7 eastern...gotta go paint a room
i will show
im tired of these homos picking names outta dictionary
catalist beating sdizzle? fiction............ very
ur lines are played, and flow is never happenin
catalist u the best?........... na hes battlin him
^ i can boast in my lines and be better than u
ur wins are a guessing game, but u have no clue
this bitch wants a battle, have u carried out in a herse
i wasn't mad, i was embarrased to be mentioned in ur verse
u didn't last long in lll jr., ur leavin after this week
hell.................... ur losing right as i speak
why would battle the best, not the brightest move
i thought this was a battle....
..................................... but its just me vs. u
thought he was gangsta, just walks.........doesn't run the street
next time ull spit ill............................ if its written by me
I saw his callout and decided to explore...
Looked at his name and realized.......
.........That I Already Merked this kid before!
Thought you couldnt get worse, but you never seem to amaze
I should take this guy seriously?, Look at his sig........
.........There's a quote about mayonaise!
Got a good record in LLL Jr., should i be terrified?
Had a feeling you only battled newbs.............And Smoka Verified!Quote:
Originally Posted by SmokaJoka666
Stats said 5-1, but I knew there had to be catch
Shit, Aisle was even mad about you winning you your do or die match!Quote:
Originally Posted by Aisle Phive
All this battling you do, is makin you delirious
Haha, thanks for the laugh......Quote:
Originally Posted by Sdizzle
.....Oh fuck...You were actually serious!
Didn't have the stamina to reach the line limit, so strengthen your ryhmes
And that must be true.....
.....Since you recycled your last two lines!
lol wow
Sdizzle
Your verse wasnt very good except structure, and flow was alrite. You had 1 or 2 personals, but thats about it. You had one punchline about the NO CLUE, that was alrite but kinda played. Overall an alrite verse, kinda simple, but it wasnt newbish.
Catalist
Sweet personals, and tons of them......personals are my fav and thats why i felt you won this battle.....that along with better flow, although your styles were sorta similar. this was a fun battle to read. you didnt need any metaphors or similes simply because of all the personals, and that kept me interested
Vote: Catalist for personals
please hit this up honestlyQ
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=124845
ok ok ok..hol up...if it was up to me neither of ya'll would win but sdizzile had some good punch lines..so the battle goes to him...catalist..u had some punch lines but ya flows was hard to follow wit all that otha shit in there so to me the battle went to sdizzle
Lol. Nice Cat, dope personals and punches from you....a pretty nice drop overall I have to say.
All this battling you do, is makin you delirious
Quote:
Originally Posted by Sdizzle
i don tthink this crew would last without me
Haha, thanks for the laugh......
.....Oh fuck...You were actually serious!
LMFAO! Dope man.
Dizzle you came aight bro.
Just not hard hitting or witty enough with your punches.
Keep elevating though.
V/Cat
Peep my jawn with CarsonJet men.
ok thanks for votes
ill hit up links after im done painting my room
uppin 1
leave links
hey i got a great idea....
Vote....!
up 2
uppin 3 please vote...i always return favor
Ino this is a crew vote but hey.....
Sdizzle wernt many hard punches thrown they were coming up short.. parts needed rewording aswell.. so good lines in there..flow was sketchy needs sorting out....
Catalist holy shit this was dope seriously some of them lines had me pissing myself they were hard hitting and they followed through on him.. flow was consistantly flowing with punches never stopped.. Great personals..
\/0te.. Catalist for doper personals and Punches...
Sdizzle:
Your flow was basic...no real complexity decent structure to it...your lacked with vocab alot, it came across very simplistic...your punches hit weakly, they could have been so much more..your tried top pull off some personals, but it didn't exactly work well did it..?
Catalist:
Your had some mad personals in here...they hit hard...:
"Thought you couldnt get worse, but you never seem to amaze
I should take this guy seriously?, Look at his sig........
.........There's a quote about mayonaise!"...funny..lol
Liked the fact that you researched, showed you put effort into this....finsiher was dope..killed him off..lol...Flow was decent...fluenty[ish]....could have used some more internals th0..
v/Catalist
uppin 4 people.....vote
please vote
end this...
Sdizzle- Your punches didnt hit at all, they were weak and didht hit your opponent, which makes for a bad verse, personals were bad also, and flow was off cuz the verse was stretched, work on flow and personals, you need to do some elevating. Also, make your lines shorter because it hurts your structure.
Catalist- I liked all the personals you had, they made the verse strong and you really did some research on dizzle. The flow was a bit off becasue lines were stretched but the amount of hard hitting personals made the verse better. Work on Structure and flow. Punches were great and Personals hit hard
v**Catalist
Sdizzle...basic verse....most lines were mad played dude.....no complexity present....concepts were unoriginal....you can fo a lot better man....up your wittiness tooo
Catalist...quotes got annoying man...limit them....you had a few nice punches and your personals were really good...flow was perfect...but you win this battle with more consistent punches and personals in your verse
Vote Catalist
Because Catalist was banned for being a biter, all of his wins are being reversed. As the admins told me I could do this, it is being done on EVERY battle of his.