He called out...
I answered.
Should be worth the read.
G'Luck, my man.
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He called out...
I answered.
Should be worth the read.
G'Luck, my man.
Check.............................................
should be good
O_O
sssssssssssssssaaaaaaaaaaaaa
I'm waitin right here for this shit
this will be the battle of the week
I hope there aint a ridiculous post min so I can vote
Let's go fellas, bring that shit!
Joka's a stupid pussy, ignorance and estrogen, he's got lots...
And it's easy to see the bitch in him, just connect the dots. (sig)
Now ya Finalist braggin, that's boasting, so I label you a sinner...
But I bet ya ego's saggin, cuz ya couldn't call yaself the winner.
Get humble fast, dick, cuz you ain’t that great with flows…
I’ve been known ta merk kids, while you merk… TV shows?
Ya even head up a crew…………that I’ve schooled repeatedly…
Lyric failed his 1-2 test, while I’ve twice passed Bio Chemistry.
But he keeps talkin, despite all his mistakes, lips ain't near tight...
Joka's always got something left to say, but it's cuz he's never right.
There's ya 10 max...
Born's quick to die ...his name shows the fact for sure
Fuck battlin, i'll son him so bad he'll come back from birth
I use Windows Paint alot...
which reminds me....thanks for pics of your kid
Yeah..Born used a crutch in this battle...its right under my dick
Stuck in a wack crew? ......You can just call me Deja Vu
Cuz as many times youve tried...this site still rejects you
Round 1, Round 2, Round 3...damn you lost all to me...
Not to mention....75% of your crew I kept in defeat..
Honestly..
I've never seen you do a mod job..unless you count vote hackin
And you ride Smoke so much...your RB's 70s Volkswagon
Joka's a stupid pussy, ignorance and estrogen, he's got lots...
And it's easy to see the bitch in him, just connect the dots. (sig)
lol, nice sig personal- 8/10
Now ya Finalist braggin, that's boasting, so I label you a sinner...
But I bet ya ego's saggin, cuz ya couldn't call yaself the winner.
meh, ok i guess- 6/10
Get humble fast, dick, cuz you ain’t that great with flows…
I’ve been known ta merk kids, while you merk… TV shows?
lol, nice- 7.5/10
Ya even head up a crew…………that I’ve schooled repeatedly…
Lyric failed his 1-2 test, while I’ve twice passed Bio Chemistry.
nice personal, nice- 9/10
But he keeps talkin, despite all his mistakes, lips ain't near tight...
Joka's always got something left to say, but it's cuz he's never right.
lol, nice closer, good meta- 8/10
overall, 38.5= 77%
Born's quick to die ...his name shows the fact for sure
Fuck battlin, i'll son him so bad he'll come back from birth
ok line, didnt rhyme good- 6/10
I use Windows Paint alot...
which reminds me....thanks for pics of your kid
Yeah..Born used a crutch in this battle...its right under my dick
lol, nice- 8/10
Stuck in a wack crew? ......You can just call me Deja Vu
Cuz as many times youve tried...this site still rejects you
nice personal- 8/10
Round 1, Round 2, Round 3...damn you lost all to me...
Not to mention....75% of your crew I kept in defeat..
kinda good, didnt like wording- 6.5/10
Honestly..
I've never seen you do a mod job..unless you count vote hackin
And you ride Smoke so much...your RB's 70s Volkswagon
lmao, best line of whole battle- 9/10
overall, 37.5= 75%
v/ btk.....by 1 point. Nice battle.
Honest vote, no hate guys...
^you have really got to be kidding me....if you gave that played ass closer an 8..lol.....all good though...just read my opener if you dont over if you dont get it well....i was supposed to say something else...but i cant edit :(
uppin #1
Uppin #2............Kill This Battle..............
Thanks for the sway, Jug...
I'm sure Joka thanks you too.
Peace
^delete it....
*rubs eyes* is Born really on at this time of night..lol
how the hell aint u gonna poll, but wutever,
my vote goes to SmockaJocka666
reasons:
SmockaJocka666-
Born to Kill-Quote:
Born's quick to die ...his name shows the fact for sure
Fuck battlin, i'll son him so bad he'll come back from birth
Not Bad, didnt ryhme great
I use Windows Paint alot...
which reminds me....thanks for pics of your kid
Yeah..Born used a crutch in this battle...its right under my dick
LOL
Stuck in a wack crew? ......You can just call me Deja Vu
Cuz as many times youve tried...this site still rejects you
Nice Personal
Round 1, Round 2, Round 3...damn you lost all to me...
Not to mention....75% of your crew I kept in defeat..
Another Nice Personal
Honestly..
I've never seen you do a mod job..unless you count vote hackin
And you ride Smoke so much...your RB's 70s Volkswagon
Not the best closer, but enough to do it
Conclusion- Smocka got this because i felt his was easily red, when i red BTK's i was lost at time, i dont knowwhy, maybe im dumb, but it just lost me. That is pretty much the reason why smocka was better overall.Quote:
Joka's a stupid pussy, ignorance and estrogen, he's got lots...
And it's easy to see the bitch in him, just connect the dots. (sig)
Im sorry, but second line, DOTS??????
Now ya Finalist braggin, that's boasting, so I label you a sinner...
But I bet ya ego's saggin, cuz ya couldn't call yaself the winner.
not bad, i like
Get humble fast, dick, cuz you ain’t that great with flows…
I’ve been known ta merk kids, while you merk… TV shows?
LOL
Ya even head up a crew…………that I’ve schooled repeatedly…
Lyric failed his 1-2 test, while I’ve twice passed Bio Chemistry.
good, not bad
But he keeps talkin, despite all his mistakes, lips ain't near tight...
Joka's always got something left to say, but it's cuz he's never right.
LOL
peace
yeah i didnt get the (dots) opener from b2k
maybe you wana elaborate on that aight man
Born to Kill
Joka's a stupid pussy, ignorance and estrogen, he's got lots...
And it's easy to see the bitch in him, just connect the dots. (sig)
False personal there's no dots
Now ya Finalist braggin, that's boasting, so I label you a sinner...
But I bet ya ego's saggin, cuz ya couldn't call yaself the winner.
This wasnt that good
Get humble fast, dick, cuz you ain’t that great with flows…
I’ve been known ta merk kids, while you merk… TV shows?
Straight
Ya even head up a crew…………that I’ve schooled repeatedly…
Lyric failed his 1-2 test, while I’ve twice passed Bio Chemistry.
Ehh... nothing much
But he keeps talkin, despite all his mistakes, lips ain't near tight...
Joka's always got something left to say, but it's cuz he's never right.
Straight punch
Comments
Try adding your personals with wordplay
SmokaJoka666
Born's quick to die ...his name shows the fact for sure
Fuck battlin, i'll son him so bad he'll come back from birth
Ok not a good punch tho
I use Windows Paint alot...
which reminds me....thanks for pics of your kid
Yeah..Born used a crutch in this battle...its right under my dick
Sexuall references are played
Stuck in a wack crew? ......You can just call me Deja Vu
Cuz as many times youve tried...this site still rejects you
Nice
Round 1, Round 2, Round 3...damn you lost all to me...
Not to mention....75% of your crew I kept in defeat..
Nice punch
Honestly..
I've never seen you do a mod job..unless you count vote hackin
And you ride Smoke so much...your RB's 70s Volkswagon
This was ehh, not that great
Comments
Try coming with more personals, and try adding wordplay to them
Due to better punches and personals
Vote = SmokaJoka666
^ stop with the small letters its whack like yur name and sig and font colors
Aight...
There is dots in his sig...
Jesus Christ, do ya'll need everything explained to you?
In his sig it says...
Mexicans Own Hip Hop...BIATCH
Well, thats like "Rick James, Bitch!"
But if you connect the dots, it's just...
Mexicans Own Hip Hop Biatch!
Now do you get the "dots" line?????????????
Joka's a stupid pussy, ignorance and estrogen, he's got lots...
And it's easy to see the bitch in him, just connect the dots. (sig)
Great Personal- 9/10
Now ya Finalist braggin, that's boasting, so I label you a sinner...
But I bet ya ego's saggin, cuz ya couldn't call yaself the winner.
Good use of Metas- 7/10
Get humble fast, dick, cuz you ain’t that great with flows…
I’ve been known ta merk kids, while you merk… TV shows?
BLAH ^^^WAK VERSE- 5.5/10
Ya even head up a crew…………that I’ve schooled repeatedly…
Lyric failed his 1-2 test, while I’ve twice passed Bio Chemistry.
Good wordplay & flow- 8/10
But he keeps talkin, despite all his mistakes, lips ain't near tight...
Joka's always got something left to say, but it's cuz he's never right.
Decent Finisher - 6/10
30.5 POINTS
Born's quick to die ...his name shows the fact for sure
Fuck battlin, i'll son him so bad he'll come back from birth
Didnt rhyme good- 2.0/10
I use Windows Paint alot...
which reminds me....thanks for pics of your kid
Yeah..Born used a crutch in this battle...its right under my dick
Good verse- 8/10
Stuck in a wack crew? ......You can just call me Deja Vu
Cuz as many times youve tried...this site still rejects you
Nice punch & filler- 7/10
Round 1, Round 2, Round 3...damn you lost all to me...
Not to mention....75% of your crew I kept in defeat..
Great verse- 8.5/10
Honestly..
I've never seen you do a mod job..unless you count vote hackin
And you ride Smoke so much...your RB's 70s Volkswagon
Great PUNCH & good originality- 9.5/10
29.5 Points
Born to kill had better flow, and a lot more consistency with rhyming words.
Smoke verse didnt rhyme good, but he had the wordplay and technical writing skills
Very close battle....I vote for Born to kill
Vote Honestly here
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=124658
ehh...your adding skills are horrible.....if you add all mine together its 35....lol...
Yeah, but add all mine, it's 35.5...
^see...they are horrible...lmao...................
Good battle peeps:
Born to Kill- You had a good verse..i would have liked it to be harder in punches and personals....punches didnt hit that hard but still did some damage...personals hit...i did get the dots line...it hit....flow was good and so was the structure of the verse...good job...just i would have liked to see more personals....
Smoka- You also had a good verse...i liked the volkwagon line and the round 1 round 2 line....punches hit.......so did the personals....im glad you didnt state the obvious personals against btk........flow was good and so was the structure.......good verse...i liked the flow of it......the personals and the hard hitting punches won this for you
v/smoka
Born: You had some good personals, liked the Bio-chemistry line, was the one that really shone...although the "dots" one was pretty good..and the T.V show was another one which hit hard...your flow was decent, nothin' special but it came off nice and all added up to create a well rounded & structured verse...
Smoka: You flow was weak...especially the first few bars, it just didn;t rhyme..lol...you had some good punches especially the closer, it hard hard..dope personal..but it felt some of your other punches (Deja Vu, Crew diss etc..) could have been better, i felt they lacked something to really make them stand out...but it was decent noentheless...
Vote: B2K
B2K return the favour plz..:http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=124033
Joka's a stupid pussy, ignorance and estrogen, he's got lots...
And it's easy to see the bitch in him, just connect the dots. (sig)
^^decent, but not sure on the wording, with the dots thing
Now ya Finalist braggin, that's boasting, so I label you a sinner...
But I bet ya ego's saggin, cuz ya couldn't call yaself the winner.
^^not bad, but didnt hit too hard
Get humble fast, dick, cuz you ain’t that great with flows…
I’ve been known ta merk kids, while you merk… TV shows?
^^quite good...
Ya even head up a crew…………that I’ve schooled repeatedly…
Lyric failed his 1-2 test, while I’ve twice passed Bio Chemistry.
^^lol... funny.... decent punch
But he keeps talkin, despite all his mistakes, lips ain't near tight...
Joka's always got something left to say, but it's cuz he's never right.
^^decent personal closer
Born's quick to die ...his name shows the fact for sure
Fuck battlin, i'll son him so bad he'll come back from birth
^^nice personal, got what you was trying to say, jus worded a bit bad
I use Windows Paint alot...
which reminds me....thanks for pics of your kid
Yeah..Born used a crutch in this battle...its right under my dick
^^lol.... funny.. nice personal..played? dunno
Stuck in a wack crew? ......You can just call me Deja Vu
Cuz as many times youve tried...this site still rejects you
^^haha...liked this...
Round 1, Round 2, Round 3...damn you lost all to me...
Not to mention....75% of your crew I kept in defeat..
^^another nice personal...
Honestly..
I've never seen you do a mod job..unless you count vote hackin
And you ride Smoke so much...your RB's 70s Volkswagon
^^not bad... liked the first line
overall im voting for smoka... his verse hit with better personals.... and made me laugh more...... v/smoka
BORNS VERSE
Joka's a stupid pussy, ignorance and estrogen, he's got lots...
And it's easy to see the bitch in him, just connect the dots. (sig)
nice personal........8/10
Now ya Finalist braggin, that's boasting, so I label you a sinner...
But I bet ya ego's saggin, cuz ya couldn't call yaself the winner.
nooo first line was shat, second alrite.......6/10
Get humble fast, dick, cuz you ain’t that great with flows…
I’ve been known ta merk kids, while you merk… TV shows?
lol nice personal again.........8/10
Ya even head up a crew…………that I’ve schooled repeatedly…
Lyric failed his 1-2 test, while I’ve twice passed Bio Chemistry.
sweet....luved it......10/10
But he keeps talkin, despite all his mistakes, lips ain't near tight...
Joka's always got something left to say, but it's cuz he's never right.
nah.....6/10
Overall.......38/50
SMOKAS VERSE
Born's quick to die ...his name shows the fact for sure
Fuck battlin, i'll son him so bad he'll come back from birth
sweet. like it......ok personal as weell.......8/10
I use Windows Paint alot...
which reminds me....thanks for pics of your kid
Yeah..Born used a crutch in this battle...its right under my dick
played..........5/10
Stuck in a wack crew? ......You can just call me Deja Vu
Cuz as many times youve tried...this site still rejects you
nice...simple but nice......7/10
Round 1, Round 2, Round 3...damn you lost all to me...
Not to mention....75% of your crew I kept in defeat..
Honestly..
lol kool creative ryhme........8/10
I've never seen you do a mod job..unless you count vote hackin
And you ride Smoke so much...your RB's 70s Volkswagon
ill.............10/10
Overal.......38/50
Tie...........Im guna have to go with the better flow...........and that goes to born......was much clearer i thought as well as his structure
THis was close, please return an honest vote on my battle in forntlines!
dumbass kids
the connect to dot line is because after his MEXICANS OWN
it says ... (dots) and then says BIATCH
dumbasses
im not voting.............just clarifying
good battle......
btk - good metas sum wordplay... few good disses few personals... structure good flow decent... punches were eh.... concepts a little played... specially the closer...
overall decent verse... - 10/20
smoka
some good metas as well.... punches u had were witty and hit hard..(volkswagon line..etc)....personals were ok... some creative disses.... flow was a lil off, nothin major...structure decent.... a little bit'a wordplay.... all in all a good solid verse.... with better punches....
12/20
vote smoka
gotta say SJ666 got this one do to the fazt that his opner and closer were slightly better gave him the advantage hear, i felt B2K could of came more harder but sliped a little while SJ666 came consistant in a sense of mind, so vote SJ666 for open, close. .