yo dogg ive set it up
it better not be wrong dis time............
u no da rules.......
10 lines...........
ill spit 1st...........
all da best dawg.......................out
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yo dogg ive set it up
it better not be wrong dis time............
u no da rules.......
10 lines...........
ill spit 1st...........
all da best dawg.......................out
Yo man ya only allowed 3 open battles,,,you have 4,,,ya gunna get disqualified
ite yo yo,
ite here we hav a little man by da name of kwiksand,
ur a pussy u cant rap 4 shit ur better off in a BOY BAND!,
if ur muma new u ad turned out like dis she wud of had an abortion,
i dnt no how she puts up wid u.... ur rhymes and face are full of distaution,
ur about as quick as a gay guy gettin his hands on a bitches pussy,
u betta back da fuck away from me faggot before i fuck u up u wussy,
im gonna melt u wid my lyrics bitch like they did to vanilla ice,
ur like poppin a pill man u will get k.o'd it aint easy... uve gotta be precise,
ive just killed u bitch ur on ur way to thugs mansion like 2pac and B.I.G
wid only 10 lines dats enough i culd i cuda beat u wid fuckin 3,
done man ill see urs soon all the best dawg....................out
checkin in.............................
is it ok if i just go like 4 lines over??
ill post my 14 lines, and if ur not happy about that...then ill cut 4 out and we can tell the voters just to look at the one with 10 lines
You really think its cool to huff paint and smoke weed?
Endin up with hallucinations and shitload of nosebleeds
Now I’m not gonna spit anything trite about ur girl or about your mama
And this verse is gonna deliver u a big blow, givin u mental trauma
When I rhyme, I free my spirits like im disembodied
I fuckin spit vulgar shit, some call my style bawdy
I can tell by ur pictures that u obsessed with ass and hash
If u try to make rappin a career, u gon end up with zero cash
Lacking talent, u always gonna be a Rookie, an amateur, and a novice
And if all rappers were rocks, ur so light we’d probably name u *Pumice*
And if I go with a boy band, I’ll probably go with ‘Nsync (sink),
Go back to the bar u depressed bitch and swallow another drink
Bitch don’t step near me cuz Kwiksand will sink you
Thought I’d be an easy target but now I just hoodwinked you
*Just to be safe and clear with everyone….pumice is a lava rock which is really light, but most of u probably know that…..im just trying to be safe*
uppin 1........................ ....................... ............
uppin #2.....yo rookie, u gotta up it some too, u know u can up 5 times
uppin 4sum votes ppl...............................out
uppin 3......come on ppl, we need some votes here .
Kwiksand Both Was Wack But I Choose
Kwiksand More Punchlines Then Rookie
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common man im uppin for sum votes........................out
uppin 4................................................. ........................we need votes............................................. ..........................................
uppin 5................................votes needed
please vote ppl.................
thanks
common is ppl gunna vote or wat uppin.........................out
yo what up
im too fresh to vote yet but mine goes out to kwik
he had just more original lines than the boring im gona fuck ur mom, ur a pussy lines by rookie,
i liked the large vocab kwiksand............keep rhymin
Yo, new can't vote yet but mine goes out to quik....this line was hot:
Kwik:
Now I’m not gonna spit anything trite about ur girl or about your mama
And this verse is gonna deliver u a big blow, givin u mental trauma
Rookies best:
im gonna melt u wid my lyrics bitch like they did to vanilla ice,
ur like poppin a pill man u will get k.o'd it aint easy... uve gotta be precise
it was aight but you used wussy and pussy, didn't like that, also disuation and abortion don't rhyme
Both decent, Vote goes to Kwik
dnt fuckin say ur gunna vote if u dnt man uppin........................out
yo this is taking way too long......................we neeeeeed votes
this was a good battle guys i cant vote atm but if i could it wud go to rookie he had better punches and everthing i think the lineabout vanilla ice might win it 4 him.....................
Sorry if this is considered free posting..............But i think this is a decently hot battle....gotta get some votes in here im curious how this will turn out....consider it an uppin
neeeeeeeeeed votes
its been weeks now and we dont have one single vote
can we just giet 5 votes in here please
man this was a weak battle..........................no solid punches
no solid personals or anything that really standed out................
........................a lot of damn filler is what i saw in this battle.........
but KS had some creativity so imma say he got this...............
......................but like i said it was a blah battle both of you..........
need to elavate and try to hit with connecting punches and personals
.................................flow was off on both but it was semi decent..
well vote/KS for coming with a better overall attempt at disses and style..
and also KS stop uppin yur battle so much you might get DQed aight..
....and for rookie man better luck next time yur verse was choppy homie..
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hit my battles up.. .. ..
wow, vote #1 most slept on battle of all time..
didn't really like either verse, to be honest..
rookie- is worse then a rookie, most newcomers I see are actually better then he is, rhymes so elementary, made punchs that didn't make sense together at all just to rhyme the last word, stucture was garbage, flow meh.. just really gay punches overall, it hurt reading it..
kwik- this battle was from like 2 months ago, I'm sure ur alot better now. You can probably agree this wasn't all that good... vocab u had, but it seemed u were trying to hard to fit high vocab in and in the end, it just didn't sound right in a few places.. punches did atleast hit, not hard, but hit... 10x better verse then what ur opponent used... u won cause of better everything..
vote- kwik
Rookie- yu aint a rookie youra newbe you sucked ass matta fact the whole verse sucked ass your structure was wack and so was your flow no punches and no good damn personals that i saw your whole shit deservse a 3/10 it was not even enjoyable you just lost man drop the mic
Kwik sand- Your structure was not that good and your flow was a little bad I saw some persoals that were ok and no multies your vocabualary ws betta and so was your wordplay your whole verse wwas more enjoyable than his overall verse was a 5/10
Vote: Kwiksand
Ok Rookie, it was obvious that you are a rookie.
Because your punchers and personals show it. They did not hit him and did not do any damage. Personals and punches win battles and you did not have any notable ones in this one. YOu have to elevate. Flow was off but structure was ok. Just elevate with punches.
Kwiksand you have to elevate also. But you did better in this one than rookie did. You had some decent punches, also personals were decent. FLow wasnt bad and structrue was nice. Just work on personals and punches
V/Kwiksand
damn this was an absolute tie in my books... ABSOLUTE TIE.
ok after a re-read, I havta say rookie was not quite as decent as kwiksand thru sentence form, structure, and wordplay..
v/kwiksand
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