10-15 lines
house rules
blind spits
check ins
30 min or 45 min to drop
this is my check in
hurry and check in and time will start for both
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10-15 lines
house rules
blind spits
check ins
30 min or 45 min to drop
this is my check in
hurry and check in and time will start for both
check
damn he never checked in
i dont no why but w/e dogg
the limit is now due 2morrow at midnight
cuz im leaving i dont have time for yur bullshit
check in mayne.....i aint gonna start countin the time til you check...cause i wanna make sure that you show
aight he checked in so regular time will commense
check check check checking in
AIM convo
SkAnDaLz81 [12:14 AM]: i did
SkAnDaLz81 [12:14 AM]: already
SkAnDaLz81 [12:14 AM]: im not gonna start countin the time to spit til you check
IngramDefragment [12:15 AM]: lmao w/e i already said i checked in but i will do it again
SkAnDaLz81 [12:15 AM]: oh i didnt notice
SkAnDaLz81 [12:15 AM]: mi b man
SkAnDaLz81 [12:16 AM]: i checked in a minute before you did
SkAnDaLz81 [12:16 AM]: but so when it due by?
SkAnDaLz81 [12:16 AM]: 2marrow?
SkAnDaLz81 [12:16 AM]: or 45 mins
IngramDefragment [12:17 AM]: lol its due in 30-45 min dogg starting 45 seconds ago
SkAnDaLz81 [12:18 AM]: iight
how fucking hard is it 2 check in & say "yo im down lets do this"
took u a while & the fact that i had allready, but u didnt notice
listen & focus, dont worry 2 strong this battle will be done in a flash
cuz like tom clancys splinter cell im in "ops" to creativly kill ya ass
in ya 4 way match im not surprised why u droped last, u suck simple & plain
that verse in ecstasy of herbness whats wrong wit u, yur insane
yur from soco, but what do u mean that yur so cold & depressed?
yur really stressed, i should suscribe u wit zolof so yull be surpressed
fuck the great flash its just something thats not consistent or full
cuz even if u turned on & off for yur speacial, u still wouldent be cool
lmao kinda just went blah at the end but w/e
g/l man hopefully this will be a close match lol
lmao at my one long line, oh well maybe i can get ILLunatic to fix it
lol man hurry up and drop, or you want me to post it Ahahahahaha.
Flash's verse:
Forces come clashing, This kid THING, ha, Him I'm enjoying on smashing
He's left thrashing trying to survive, only to be thrown down and I'm advancing
Lyrically gifted? Sorry my friend, you seem to have gotten lost, that's my department
He spit crap, making it smell horrible, but he couldn't even cover it with an eclipse mint (They're Breath defying)
Impatient fool, you're one of the many that are saying flash, only if you herbs knew
Hey you, you're a skank, you've been through about as many wins as you have crews
He's left battered and bruised, and tryin' to run away in some old ratty tatered shoes
The way he moves, I was just too tempted to drop him, so are you ready to lose?
ill...haha funny...you gotten beat by a newb named wizkid no that jus wack...
my lyrics will give you wiplash n make you sing like kia-my neck my back
lmao nigger u was late but its cool you had trouble getting it in o`well
eyo, close no doubt. here's how i see it...
you both had your strong points. wen it came to structure, Thing had the one down. Along with that, ima have to say he toook the flow in this because Flash had lines that seemed a little stretched. Flash took the originality in this one, not one of his lines were even a bit close to bein' played. I feel he came wit a better style too, more consistent on punching and leaving a minimal amount of filler. personals from both were good, so i'd say that was equal. but because Flash had slightly better punches ima give this to him. Thing had a bad closer for example. Flash ended wit a nice personal punch. props to both.
vote- Flash
peace
^ Agreed.Quote:
Originally Posted by Ace of Aces
Thing..since when you start writing in itallic? lol..anyways, I was expecting alot better of punches and personals from ya man...kinda came weak on those. Creativity was there, you just didnt turn it into anything but some filler and basic lines..had a good beginning goin, just kinda got worse as verse went on..
flash..you came a little more witty..had some stretched lines, however your personals stuck and hit nicely..liked the creativity with your closer, nice. Vocab coulda been stronger, along with structure, however I felt that you came better and more complete overall.
Therefore..
Vote / flash
this was close though, dont get me wrong..
Peace..
quite a close match up.... flash, seems you are starting to use more personals, which is good... your lines seemed a bit stretched out tho... your punches were ok, nuthing quotable, but quite original.... thing,,, your verse was constructed a bit better.... building to the punches, but they didn connect all that good.... again couple of personals in there... finished up better, but the consistancy wasnt there thru it... so ima vote/flash... more consistant punching..... close tho, like i said.......
iight thanks for the votes uppin:)
decent from both...but id have to say that Flash took it...
Thing....decent verse, pretty good structure..but yer punches
just didnt hit, and seemed to be lacking a little bit creatively...
also you should work on eliminating any filler in yer verse..u tried w/
the personals..though again i would have liked to see little
more wit used....not a bad verse though...work on yer punches
and personals and try to use more creativity...
Flash...also a pretty decent verse...you came a little stretched
in spots, but i felt u took this due to slightly better punches...
and personals...still though you should work on yer punches and
personals...and be a little more creative....
v/ Flash...slightly better punches and personals...less filler
Hahahahahahahah fuck you D/R`s
uppin this shit......
Like everyone else has said, this was a close battle and was tough to judge.
Thing: Your punches hit pretty nicely...but they just seemed kind of basic and played. Your personals were pretty nice, and I was feeling your flow (not that flow really matters). I will admit that some of your punches hit rather nicely, but it was about 50/50...nothing special.
Flash: Your verse wasn't that great either. Your flow was stretched as a motherfucker. I was feeling most of your punches, but some of them didn't hit directly enough. You had some ok personals, such as the "crews" one. Plus your punches were more unique than Thing's.
v/Flash. I just felt Thing came too simple to win this. It was close though.