Regicide vs. Flash

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house rules

3-0 = KO
4-1 = TKO

Deadline: Must drop by 3 Pm on April 4th 2004

no lateness or no shows will be tolerated..........

must check in.........

hey i dont know what your doing but saturday was the 4th and its sunday now

^^ today is the 4th fuckface

and get out of my god damn thread..................

checkin in................but i want a blind spit

so if you dont drop by 3pm............im not dropping...........

Fuck it..............ill drop first................you better not no show either

i expect to win.......
.....when im battling an illiterate super hero
cus he was never good........
.....and in a flash, he went to absolute zero
hes a queer, and hes a bad rapper......
...which is worse.....that is thy question
"songs with my friends"..........
...........sounds more like a gay kiss and tell session
so when veiwing his music videos........
......children........you may need parental discretion
cause he sure aint going STRAIGHT......
......and that only leaves one direction
my worst verse.................
..........will demean this kids best
call me "The End"..............
cause thats what im doing to this superhero's quest

^^ not my best by far............but it only took 10 minutes

yo man sorry if mi shit a lil late...but i dunno where you are but that NEWB was right today is the 5ths...in the US its sunday.....but yeah here mi shit
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I Use Reverse Phsycology,To Make Head Think He A "Work-Of-Art..
I"Disturb-wit-Bars" He Joined Mc cuz he thought we "Surved-As-Guards"..
(gaurds=bodygaurds)

Ya Givin Me A Headache Cuz All Ya Writtns Gettn On My "Damn-Nerves"..
If You A Draft Pick'then how come MC Makes Excuses To "Bann-This-Herb"...
(Bann=Cut)

You Can Predict This Battle Regicide Knocked Out In The "First-Round"
Theirs Alot Of Herbs In My Hitlist But I Gotta Make Room Fo A "Circus-Clown

I Normaly Don't Convict A Herb, But I Got All The "Evidence-I-Need'...
This Is Your Loss The Myths Are True Reg Will Never"Suceed"...

You Better Get A Line Of Defence Cuz U Don't Have The Skills 2 Rhyme...
I Typed Fag In A Search Engine And Ya Name Came Up A "Million-Tymes"..

oh shit wahts up GRISLEY VIRTUE/ICE MAN...didnt know that it was you

Vote: Regicide

Regicide: You had an OK verse. You had some nice punches, and a good flow. You had nice personals, and made this kid look bad. Your structure wasn't too good at all, and was kinda hard to read. But your punches just hit harder, and you had nice rhymes

Flash:Some of your lines i couldn't understand, like the draft pick line. When you have to translate lines, it ain't good. Your structure was ok, but i wasn't feelin your flow. And why did you look up fag in a search? Anyway, i just think Reg's punches hit harder and he had better personals. Oh, one more thing, dont use quotations in the future, they look gay

Return the Favor Please:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=122915







http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=122915

yea thats me..........whats up man

upping this............and i dont mean to sway, if i am........... but you had not one single personal..............you should not even get 1 vote.......

Vote: Reg

He had funny personals, the line about FLASh was ILL nice touch. Not many punches, but his flow was good. Didnt enjoy the structure too much tho kinda wacko.

Other dude, your first line was alrite with the wordplay, but than u started flowin like an upward stream. your structure was kinda ugly, dont space yur lines like that. oh and use more personals that verse coulda been for any1. u coulda made fun of his name like how it sounds like a insect killer. but you didnt. your flow was alrite.

Please hit this up honestly
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=122916

upping again...........................................

lol pretty good battle. both had great flow and creativity. REg had some good old school flow going on but i liked flash's better. He had more witty lines than reg did IMO. Punches and personals were pretty good on both sides. Mutlis was taken by flash. It wouldn't hurt 4 u2 2 work on vocab. I am voting flash because he had good openers and closers which is where the hits count. Good battle by both..

ummmm.....pretty weak battle, not very good from either. Regicide
though was clearly the winner. Flash yer verse was horrid...
overall you did a terrible job at dissing your opponent...i think the
closer was the only actually punch you had, the rest was mostly
filler and weak attempts at word play...personals were also absent
from your verse...on top of that the presentation of your verse
was newbish...the structure was okay but, you should get rid of
the little explanations after each bar and the hyphens in between
words...peep the help center...and keep trying to elevate...
Regicide...not a great verse from u either, still it was more than
enough to win this...you had decent personals, and a few punches
and foremost you actually dissed yer opponent...creativity could
have been better but it really wasn't a factor in this battle...

v/ Regicide...better punches and personals

I dont have enough posts to poll yet, but.....i would really appreciate
if you left some honest feedback or votes on the link in my sig...
being that i took the time to reply to yours.... thanks..pz

^^ daffer blows

you should win anyway

and come back and poll when u reach 100.........

i vote regicide man he was by far the best he kept up a good strusture an hit flash hard with his punches his personals were not as good but still regicide was by far better..........................out
v=regicide

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - ILLunatic

aiight time for a HONEST vote

Regicide

i expect to win.......
.....when im battling an illiterate super hero
cus he was never good........
.....and in a flash, he went to absolute zero
^^Not bad...nice vocab....But the punch landed short!!!!
hes a queer, and hes a bad rapper......
...which is worse.....that is thy question
"songs with my friends"..........
...........sounds more like a gay kiss and tell session
^^nice wordplay...and personal
so when veiwing his music videos........
......children........you may need parental discretion
cause he sure aint going STRAIGHT......
......and that only leaves one direction
^^^um nice vocab..punch lacked though really didn't hit anything
my worst verse.................
..........will demean this kids best
call me "The End"..............
cause thats what im doing to this superhero's quest
^^nice wordplay...vocab...but again it didn't hit hard

Overall...you had a nice verse....vocab was hot and wordplay was hot...punches were lackin and your personals lacked also~/~

8/10 mics

Flash::

I Use Reverse Phsycology,To Make Head Think He A "Work-Of-Art..
I"Disturb-wit-Bars" He Joined Mc cuz he thought we "Surved-As-Guards"..
(gaurds=bodygaurds)
^^Funny shit....Nice line Loved the Punch
Ya Givin Me A Headache Cuz All Ya Writtns Gettn On My "Damn-Nerves"..
If You A Draft Pick'then how come MC Makes Excuses To "Bann-This-Herb"...
(Bann=Cut)
^^^nice first line....punch didn't hit though needed reworded

You Can Predict This Battle Regicide Knocked Out In The "First-Round"
Theirs Alot Of Herbs In My Hitlist But I Gotta Make Room Fo A "Circus-Clown
^^^lol nice set up and nice Punch
I Normaly Don't Convict A Herb, But I Got All The "Evidence-I-Need'...
This Is Your Loss The Myths Are True Reg Will Never"Suceed"...
^^nice wordplay and funny as hell PUNCh liked it alot
You Better Get A Line Of Defence Cuz U Don't Have The Skills 2 Rhyme...
I Typed Fag In A Search Engine And Ya Name Came Up A "Million-Tymes"..
^^^simple and sweet......Nice concept and nice creativity...punch was OK


overall.....You pulled out alil creativity and it worked nicely
nice wordplay and punches......Vocab was there also...multis killed it....
overall i think you edged it out.....

Vote FLASH

i dont understand why he uses names like "Head" and "MC"

this is obviously a pre-written

*goes to IR *

what is you stupid......mc is what we are....and i didnt use head....i said you givin me a headache!!!!are you fuckin stupid mayne or you jus afraid you gonna be beaten by a person with a record of 3-9...huh?....stop your fuckin cryin and tryin to sway all the votes....yah do this shit in all your battles...,pc bitch

im just pointing out flaws

and MC IS WHAT WE ARE?

I Use Reverse Phsycology,To Make Head Think He A "Work-Of-Art..
I"Disturb-wit-Bars" He Joined Mc cuz he thought we "Surved-As-Guards"..
If You A Draft Pick'then how come MC Makes Excuses To "Bann-This-Herb"...

^^ all not used in proper context..........so you must be stupid..........

youz a wack ou aint neva gonna be shit if you always complaining on this site...erybody be callin you weak and shit cause you be gettin beat by newbs...your verses suck and the only reason you be winn half the shit you do is cause you got otha kats riding your dick all day....so why dun you jus shut you fuckin mouf and let the votes speak for themselvs without sayin shit....im dun pc

Overall not that great.

Flash, you had some decent punches and a good verse, but really a horrible structure. Get rid of that and your verses will be, and look, a lot better. Other than that not too bad.

Reg, you wasn't coming hard enough with your punches man. You gotta think more witty, and not just try to flow. Just not enough to beat him here bro.

V/Flash...

Hit up Orthodox. vs Born To Kill

thanks for the votes....uppin numba 1 or 2 dunno...cant member

regicide...you neva give up....ILLunatic rejected you once after you sent him the link in IR tryin to say that im prewriting mi shit and you still continue to try and push him into goin your way...all you do is try tah get people tah ride your dick...you mide as well jus make a name on this site KING D/R

Regicide...
i expect to win.......
.....when im battling an illiterate super hero
cus he was never good........
.....and in a flash, he went to absolute zero
Ok opener to obvious though.. hero - zero is played
hes a queer, and hes a bad rapper......
...which is worse.....that is thy question
"songs with my friends"..........
...........sounds more like a gay kiss and tell session
good punch had me laughing
so when veiwing his music videos........
......children........you may need parental discretion
cause he sure aint going STRAIGHT......
......and that only leaves one direction
1st line wtf?after that it was a great bar..
my worst verse.................
..........will demean this kids best
call me "The End"..............
cause thats what im doing to this superhero's quest
great finisher kept the Super hero flow..
6/10

Flah...
I Use Reverse Phsycology,To Make Head Think He A "Work-Of-Art..
I"Disturb-wit-Bars" He Joined Mc cuz he thought we "Surved-As-Guards"..
Dont explain punches till the end of your verse...
OK OPENER DONT USE - THERE ANNOYING... good punch though it was clever

Ya Givin Me A Headache Cuz All Ya Writtns Gettn On My "Damn-Nerves"..
If You A Draft Pick'then how come MC Makes Excuses To "Bann-This-Herb"...
Good line it was clever and a punch aswell

You Can Predict This Battle Regicide Knocked Out In The "First-Round"
Theirs Alot Of Herbs In My Hitlist But I Gotta Make Room Fo A "Circus-Clown
great punch it made me laugh though

I Normaly Don't Convict A Herb, But I Got All The "Evidence-I-Need'...
This Is Your Loss The Myths Are True Reg Will Never"Suceed"...
This was your best punch i was impressed

You Better Get A Line Of Defence Cuz U Don't Have The Skills 2 Rhyme...
I Typed Fag In A Search Engine And Ya Name Came Up A "Million-Tymes"..
good closer hit hard and i laughed...
6.5/10


Flash took this for hitting with every bar.. they were not the hardest punches but they connected.. Regicide good verse but you seemed off when throwing some punches.....
Good battle though...
\/0te.. Flash

Regicide this is not a hate vote before you start.. im just calling it how i see it...
i've seen you do better.. you underestimaated this Kid i think..

thanks for the votes uppiinn

Flash did 6 Up's, this is his warning. 1 more and he will be dq'd

yo ILLunatic i only upped 2 times in this battle....but since you postin why dun you vote on this battle man...shit only needs a couple more votes on both sides to be closed

ill say flash took this wit punches
other girl had nothing connecting
elavate girlfriend yull do better man

vote/flash for not being a herb but is still is one

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Flash-Good verse. Punches were better then his. i was feelin a flow. But your structure< you really need to work on. But you get my vote for better verse and much better punhces because Regicide didnt have any good punches at all.

Regicide- Good verse. Punches were not good. I dont think you took this seriously Just cuz this kid had a bad record. Flow was decent. You had an okay structure. But your punches wern't good so thats why flash gets my vote for better punches.

vote- Flash