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u want me to spit first
yea u spit first iight so lets get his poppin.
look.....i plan to have a GOODYEAR like tires/
plus i got that machine gun flow bustin off wit Rapid fire :shoot:/
testin me is like tautin Micheal Myers /
i'll have yo jaw swollen like Kanye and u'll be spittinthrough the wire this cat ain't up in my rang/
i'm the lead Jackson u co-signin like Tito and Jermaine /
it's best that u get some :help: cuz u gon need it/
my movement is Rapid,my fire 'll have u scream-in/
we never met but that's ok/
cuz i'mma end this wit a fuck you :thefinger and have a nice day :thumbup:
hol up ima tell "the truth", there's no way u gonna win this battle cuz after this battle u'll be missin a "tooth"//
It wasn't my intent to oust the king of Syndicated Script-ures/
But when this-bitch-is in the ring, just like ALI he "Shakes-and-Twit-ches!!/
Brace-yer-Brit-ches, cuz I hacked into the system and Im "Eras-in-Glit-ches"/
Leave you Laced-in-Stitches, cuz I'll take-you-bitches, knock you "BACK TO THE FUTURE" like "FADED-Pic-tures!!!"/ Now the stage-has-flipped, Im firing bullets that'll graze-ya-lips/
t's ass has been pounded so many times, he has to "GLAZE-HIS-SHIT!"/
He's used to getting beat, that why he he "CRAVES-the-WHIP"//
At his job at "Chip and Dales" they make HIM "PAY-TO-STRIP!"//(get it hes ugly)
iight dont test ur "youth"(prolly 10yr old),im done tell in u "the-Truth"//
uppin for votes will return the favor just leave a link thank you
iight uppin .......................................1x
lmao at the truths last 2 lines bitin 8mile n shit.............lol
THE TRUTH you verse was nice...and i like the blatant swipe from 8mile......(and here it comes) but Rapid fire had more content and world play. I'm not into cussin' and sh-t (haha..i cursed!) but...
"t's ass has been pounded so many times, he has to "GLAZE-HIS-SHIT"
that's funny...
vote- Rapid Fire
Jesus Christ this was wack. Do you people even pay attention to what the hell is going on. Both had horrible structures. No punchlines. No word play. No flow. You both barely even rhymed. Holy shit this fucking sucked.
V Rapid Fire for some attempts at multi's
YO watch yo lips Evolve, that's GOD you who vainly exclaimin!
Check yoself.
uppin this abttle for more votes........................2x
rapid fire won this because his was more creative and had nice words in his verse. Bother did well but i think rapid managed to get hold of this because he had better rymes and flow. More punchlines aswell. Evolve copied and that an't a good thing, stuff made by yourself is better cuz u don't copy peoples style.
uppin.......................3x
uppin............................................. ......4x
The biting lost it for ya big time Truth, it was an aight verse, but ya gotta stay away from shit like that.
t's ass has been pounded so many times, he has to "GLAZE-HIS-SHIT!"/
He's used to getting beat, that why he he "CRAVES-the-WHIP"//
At his job at "Chip and Dales" they make HIM "PAY-TO-STRIP!"//(get it hes ugly)
this was nice, made me laugh and thats what this shits all about. Rapid got this one in my opinion, more content and originality, good metas, nice flow. Peep my shit with PaulHelmsJr, we need to close that out quick cause I wanna rematch that kid.
Truth you might be a better artist than a rapper cause your spit was decorated nicely. As for the words, well you could use some help. You used the Kayne West line. It was used in another battle I talked about and it's used all over all the time. You had a couple decent punches but I yawned more than once readin some of it. Rapid Fire, you did aight kid. There's room for improvement, like maybe expanding your topics. But you got this hands down. Opinion- Rapid Fire
okay.. last and finall upp please vote will return the favor.... 5x
need to get this closed
THE TRUTH... :laugh: that was a wack ass verse but it kept me entertained whilst reading it.. Last 2 lines were bit from 8mile yo fool...
Rapid Fire... you took this just for having a better verse.. it wasn't great but it didnt need to be.. structure was aiight layed out well...
\/0te Rapid fire....
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Rapid Fire dont be a bitch now.. go and poll your vote on my battle like you said you would :) please....
I give this one to rapid, his starter was kinda weak but at the end he ate Truth ass up.
Truth you didn't rhyme very much, next time use better punchlines maybe you could have won.
Vote on my battle, Mario vs Dangerlyrics (use search and type in my name, you get to the shit faster)
the truth--u just bit of 8mile u little homo...man that verse needed some elevation...weak as hell...u didn't even knock him...
rapid fire--creative...good word play...say u hit this bitch all the way to the back of the line...structure was good
truth--keep on practicin...
vote= RAPID FIRE
hit my battles.....
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Dawm RapidFire got the best of Truth in this battle---------the reason i voted for truth is because--------i dont like the idea of the whole 8 mile B rabbit thing, i understand ur tryin to be creative but thats biting. So i gotta go wit rapid fire
last and final upp.. please some one vote on this ill return the favor....
5x
Alright...
truth- that was bad.. wasn't good what so ever.. need to elevate.. ur punches came weak, really nothing to them, and you just need to learn how to better write a battle verse and diss your opponent..
rapidfire- different style, i'm not a big fan of it.. but u really didn't have to do much to win this here battle.... all u had to do was really make a few attempts at punches and you'd win.. most people can figure out the wordplay also.... you don't have to-do-this.. you know wha ti mean? alright..
vote- rapid..
don't forget to poll ur vote from before....
thanks